Deyun: Young People Should Have Great Ambitions

I, the first sin, meet you; the second sin, I know you; the third sin, I trust you; the fourth sin, I please you; the fifth sin, I miss you; the sixth sin, I take care of you; the seventh sin, I guard you; the eighth sin, I protect you; the ninth sin, I love you; the ten sins, I love you. All ten crimes are committed, and I am the one who deserves death. Sir, retreat.

It's really beautiful. Like it very much. The author should add more pictures. That one I kind of don't want to have a female protagonist.

It's very good, I like it very much, I have watched it many times, but there is one thing. When I was catching up on the update, the ending written in the introduction was very beautiful, but the update turned into a knife, and I almost cried. Then you gave me candy in the extra episode. Didn't you just slap me and give me a sweet date? [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying]

It's really beautiful and makes me cry every time I see it. It's so well written and deeply rooted in people's hearts. 5-Star recommendation, I especially want to see his other life, the life he had with his master before he got sick or died.

It's beautiful to watch and very interesting. Just too little. We should find a stubborn apprentice to punish our braided brother.

I hate you, I cry to death [cry][cry]

It's beautiful, the details are well controlled, and the inner tangle and inner drama are well written.

Good-looking, but a little lacking

Okay, what you wrote is really good. Keep writing and don't give up. The writing is very interesting and it's worth getting into it.

I still give it 5 stars. I am a civilized person and usually don't curse. But last night when I saw the protagonist's death, I really jumped up and cursed in the middle of the night. Fortunately, I read a few chapters later and then I suppressed the author's thoughts. I am very satisfied with the extra chapter! I'm already reading other books by the author, I hope you don't kill me!

It's super good-looking, super good-looking, super good-looking. First it tells the story of Zhang Yunlei and his apprentice, and then it tells the story of Lin Bohan. The first part is a bit awkward, then the middle part makes you laugh hard, and the last part makes you cry. (There is a story about them going to Deyun Dou Xiao Club)

I'm a bit looking forward to whether Zaizai may have a heart attack in the future (not because I want to abuse Zaizai), I just want to watch this plot @

It's so good and I love to read it. Please read more. It's a short author. There are only so many chapters. Please get up and update it. I haven't read enough! ! !

Author, I suspect that you are copying my work. How about this? You can send me the rest of your unpublished work and I will check it. See if it's the same as mine (´｡✪ω✪｡｀)

My heart felt cold after reading this

The young man should rise from the sky, holding the stars and the moon in pursuit of the sunshine! Why should a young man dream of reaching for the stars, and dare to draw a mulberry bow and shoot at a jade scale?

Beautiful, love watching it! ! ! No kidding, this book made my eyes light up

This is! Good! Look! Especially the ending (ノ-_-)ノ~┻━┻ This is a sadistic story covered in sweetness. As sweet as it is at the beginning, it will be as sadistic as the ending (ノへ￣,)

I think it's very interesting. I really like the description of the protagonist's daily life. It feels very real. Although it's bewildered, the ending also reveals the truth.

This book is very beautiful. It may be my own fault that I cry, but that is not the most important thing. The author said that it is very beautiful. This book is very beautiful. It is really very beautiful. Then it is great. I am at a loss for words now. Anyway, it is very beautiful!

It's ok, except for the cover that's a bit… the overall article is very good, there's no master-disciple relationship, I really love it! ! ! [Praise]

It's so good. When I first watched it, I thought it was he, but somehow it turned into be. I cried to death when I saw it later. Fortunately, there is another version. It's really good. [Adoration] [Blow kiss] [Cry]

I feel that he's extra is not as good as be's, and the ending is not as good as the beginning. Overall it's okay, but it may be my personal reasons. I personally want to see Zaizai and Xiaobian'er get along earlier. Apart from the above reasons, the author's writing style is very good and the content is also very novel. To be honest, I really cried to death when I saw Zaizai was diagnosed with heart failure.

Super invincible and beautiful

It looks good. Can the author make changes faster₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑

I like it so much, it's so beautiful. I hope the author will update more every day. I'm really looking forward to it [Adoration]

I love it so much, it's beautiful, really

Beautiful. Love it.

That's great. I like it.

Realistic character narration