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It's very good. The author will also correct some typos or unclear places in the middle. Lin Zhi and Zhuge Mian are very good friends. I recommend you to invest in them! ! ! ! But maybe it's because I've read too many hot-blooded comics, and I always felt that some of the scenes where Lin Zhi was in danger and his teammates were worried were too abrupt. I felt that the relationship was not deeply formed before the climax began. It may also be that the length of the story is relatively short... Here I suggest the author to create more feelings 🙏 (no malice, just a suggestion), the length can be slowed down, and the friendship between the six people can be well established first. Then, I hope that the part where you talk about gossip or some entertainment will not be too long, otherwise it will look a bit trivial, long and tasteless. Finally, let me explain, the above is purely my personal opinion🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 But to sum up, the author's writing is pretty good. Zhuge Mian's character is very heart-wrenching. I hope the author won't be a mess. It's best to update 10 times a day, and the number of updates will exceed 10,000! ! ! ! ! (And a little selfishly, I hope Lin Zhi and Zhuge Mian can interact more!!!)

I am a novice at writing. Sometimes there is no punctuation mark in a long paragraph and there are many typos, which can be forgiven. There is a lot of foreshadowing in the front, so I need to be patient. It's not a standout book on my bookshelf, it's just average, but some of the settings irritate me, so I'll still read it. The author is active. The character portrayal is not very good, and the author still has a lot of room for improvement, but he is a novice after all, so it is understandable. In the book, it was Zhuge Mian's character that really struck a chord with me. Finally, cheers to the author ( ¯ᒡ̱¯ )و

So far it seems that it is very interesting and I am very happy. I shouldn't have not read it so much. It should be popular. At least many people will read it. Moreover, the author responds very quickly. It is a bit cute and the novel is also very interesting. It is worth pursuing. Especially the descriptions of fighting. I usually write more cheerfully. Overall, it is very good-looking. Anyway, I like it very much. [Cool][Cool][Cool][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It's nice to watch, the heroine is great, the group portraits are very vivid, the friendship between the team is very good, the storyline and world structure are very good, there are many funny elements, it's fun, there are no surprises, the most important thing is that the author is very enthusiastic, sincere and cute, I like it, keep up the good work, this book will definitely become popular [Sending Hearts]

The writing is okay, it's just a novice's writing, I don't give you any advice, use more commas, I'm really tired after watching it together www. This movie is not only good for my eyes, but also good for you to make up the number of words [laughing] If you can be good, you still need to be good. And the characters, don't show up so many at once. I can't tell them apart qaq All in all, good looking

Super pretty! ! ! I want to give a big shout out to the author! ! ! Lin Zhi, who tried to pretend to have a high cooldown at the beginning of school but failed, Zhuge Mian, who was white and black... (I don't know how to describe the rest, hehe), everyone's image is very vivid, and their personal personalities are very prominent. I really like this kind of group portrait of teenagers fighting with each other! ! ! The only drawback is that there are a few, I hope the author will make more updates! Finally, I wish the author and all readers a happy New Year's Eve!

Punctuation errors and typos are a little frequent, but okay. Overall it's good-looking and the author is very active. There are some plots that could use a little more detail to make the impression more profound (of course, you can also pretend that I didn't say this). Although the writing style is a bit immature, it is already very good for a new author. Finally, cheers to the author [sending heartfelt messages] [blowing kisses]

It's a very good-looking interstellar novel with group portraits, and it doesn't have an official title, so you can read it as you like. The protagonists are all lively and interesting, and they work very hard. Everyone is a protagonist, and it interprets the true meaning of group portraits. It is much better than those books that say they are group portraits but are actually about love. I like this very much

The book written by the author Da Ni is very nice, and Xiao Ping An is also very cute. What I want to say is the cover of 📖. I read Da Da Ni's book many times but I missed it because of the cover. I didn't expect it to look good. Woohoo. The setting also really impressed me (it would be great if there were more chapters every day)

This is very beautiful I don't know how to describe it. Anyway, I think the protagonist and the protagonist group have distinct characters. The content is also interesting! Personally I think it's very good! Highly recommended! (●'◡'●)

It's very beautiful, but my mental state is a little bit disturbed.

It's so good. I'd love to see more. I hope there will be 80 more pictures. Don't suck. No water. I don't want a male lead, everything else doesn't matter

I thought it was quite good-looking, and the plot and writing were very good. Personally, I think the shortcoming is that the heroine is really too strong, and the other protagonists feel a bit useless and lack the flavor of a group portrait. Maybe it's because I prefer to watch the kind of show where all the members are very strong and their weaknesses complement each other, and each character has their own shining point and grows together. Rather than being the standout, it feels like the other protagonists are just foils. Don't comment if you don't like it, it's just a personal opinion. [Cover face][cover face][cover face]

It's super good-looking, the plot is... Novel, and the author is also very active.

This book will definitely be popular and I will recommend it to my classmates! ! [Angry][Angry] There is still one day to see Chapter 80 [Eat Melon] [Eat Melon]

Very, very good. I like this book very much. Please give the author a boost and keep updating.

It's super good-looking. I haven't seen such good-looking interstellar writing in a long time. It really appeals to my appetite for reading. It's a cp-free, group-oriented and fun way to read.

Beautiful! It is very in line with my appetite. If you like to read interstellar portrait articles, you can read it. The author is super active and the article is clearly organized. All in all, it is not a loss to invest in [exploration]

Hahaha, I am so happy. Very few of them are really to my liking, but 8 photos left me completely alone. The author is not as active as the author, and his mental state is also very good. He almost acted like me. Really recommended

Like it very much 😍 A real big blow to Lin Zhi and Zhuge Mian [blowing kiss]

This book is pretty good, why don't many people read it?

It's good-looking, awesome, and the author is also awesome. Although there is a knife in the back, it's fine as long as not all of them are dead.

It's very, very interesting. The author is also very good. He will reply to every comment very seriously, really every one! She read every one of the 300 comments carefully! He also listens to opinions very much. The article is very humorous and I personally like to read it.

Ahhhh! I can't believe how long I've been reading. This book is really good. I clicked on it at first, but then I lost interest and stopped reading. Then, so many people recommended me to read it again. I didn't expect that the more I read, the more I became fascinated.

It looks great, please give it a thumbs up, author.

I think it's really pretty

The writing is very passionate, but I feel that there is a little less content about Lin Zhi in the later period of the story. It seems that most of it is about the interaction between Xiao Ying and the others. I can't tell who the protagonist is, and there are more supporting roles.

It's very beautiful, very beautiful. Don't let this novel go. [Punch Out]

This book is very, very good. It's really good to read. The author will continue to work hard.

It looks very warm. I like the group portrait. Cheers [sending my heart][sending my heart]