I'm Just Building a Mecha. I Really Don't Want to Be the Strongest in the Federation.

Beautiful! I really like the author's great portrayal of the heroine Lin Qiu! ! ! ! Please don't let the male lead be Shen Jin... Arrogant, look down on low-level people, self-righteous... Please change the male lead, it's fine without CP, I can't stand it anymore...

I can't believe this is the quality I can see in Red Persimmon. It's comparable to the ones I've seen before. I see that there are no surprises now. The emotional line is not obvious yet, mainly the career line. The heroine is very strong. It's good, the author writes it quickly, and I urge you to update more!

Apart from the fact that the male protagonist is perfect, I like the author's portrayal of the female protagonist, but I can't believe that Shen is actually the male protagonist. . . It feels like there can't be too many male supporting roles as pure cannon fodder in other stories. . . I can't believe the scene where the heroine and the hero are together. . .

As a fan of mecha novels and micro-group portraits, I was full of expectations when I first saw the label of the work, but after reading it, I was inevitably a little disappointed. The core problems in the current perception focus on two points: First, the character creation is superficial, and the supporting characters are mostly set as "tool men" with facial makeup - they are not "evil people" in the true sense, but more deliberately set off their abilities by deliberately opposing the heroine, and there is generally a disdainful attitude towards B-level, even if the heroine Winning can only be attributed to luck. It lacks the characteristics and highlight details that can make people feel good, and it is difficult to show the vivid charm of the character; secondly, the sense of group portrait is weak. Even after entering the competition stage, the main line is that the heroine fights alone and leads the school to the first place in the league, which fails to reflect the essence of the group portrait theme. I look forward to the author further polishing the content in the future, creating more flesh-and-blood characters with distinctive personalities, and truly building a three-dimensional parallel world that readers can immerse themselves in. This will also allow the mecha theme and micro-group portrait setting of the work to have a more dazzling effect, come on!

Why are they saying that the male protagonist is not good? I think the male protagonist is pretty good, and isn't it true that the female protagonist is the male protagonist whoever the female protagonist likes? Why do they stop watching if they say there is a male protagonist? [Laughing and crying] Come on, the writing is pretty good, and the subject matter is also good!

First, from the perspective of the heroine, it is very exciting, the plot is also very exciting, there are not many emotional lines, and the world view is mainly promoted from the perspective of the heroine. The most interesting, exciting and powerful is the heroine. The heroine has a bottom line, the heroine is flexible and changeable, and the heroine's inner os is also very funny. The most important thing is that the heroine has a brain and can see five steps at a time. Of course, the smooth development of the plot and perspective are inseparable from the author's excellent writing ideas. Second, from the perspective of supporting roles, let's start with the supporting female roles. There is no brainlessness or inexplicable hostility for no reason. Everyone has their own pursuits and situations. Even if they are against the heroine, it will not be offensive. I like to have a supporting female character (I won't name her name, I think everyone knows who I am talking about) who can face her ambitions head-on. When faced with the embarrassing situation of the opposite sex, he is calm and calm, has his own thoughts, and is a little kind. It can be seen that the author's understanding of women is not one-sided, and I can also feel the author's love for women. I didn't pay much attention when reading it. When I wrote the review, I calmed down and felt the author's thoughts. This feeling is very good. Third, in terms of male protagonists and supporting male characters, the male protagonist's perspective is honestly not that great, but the other male characters are not dull either. They basically appear around the female protagonist, which is good. Female videos definitely focus on the female protagonist. The role can be outstanding, but it cannot surpass the female protagonist (referring to the irreplaceability or uniqueness of the female protagonist). Fourth, from the perspective of the villain camp, there is a saying that is very good. There is no natural villain, only the opposition of the situation (my own summary). If all the hostile camps that compete for interests with the heroine are considered villains, some villains are against the heroine out of the perspective of family and country, some villains only pursue interests, and some villains are motivated by the pursuit of interests. Some villains are just out of competition, and some villains are purely out of emotion... To a certain extent, whether the protagonist is happy or not depends on whether the villain is strong or not. Obviously, everyone has brains. This kind of back and forth, all the conspiracies and tricks are under the control of the heroine. Just thinking about this can make her have an orgasm, hahahahahaha Finally, in general, the author's ideas are very good and powerful, and the various settings do not challenge people's evil points. Basically, when I watched it, I didn't get angry or too frustrated. When reading novels, I like being able to meet all kinds of different characters without having to go out and socialize by myself...

This is a low-key but very intense work with a heroine. The most rare thing is that there is no love line in the whole process. The heroine only wants to make star coins and focus on her own career and growth. Her "strongly needed" sense of belonging is particularly moving, and the change in attitude is handled step by step, not abrupt or suspended, just right. The rhythm of the plot has its own refreshing temperament, and the foreshadowing is so many and deep that people can't help but look forward to the follow-up. There is a pan-spiritual humanistic care in the author's writing, and the depictions of nature, small animals, and even human nature are delicate, interesting, and full of warmth. Each character has a distinct personality, is real and flesh-and-blood, and has no dull sense of being a tool. And the heroine carries the audience throughout the whole process. The short-drama-style slap-in-the-face scene, coupled with the setting that everyone cannot do without her command, is full of excitement but without losing logic. It is very enjoyable to watch!

The plot is novel, the heroine is very powerful, the supporting characters are also full of characters, and the couple of secondary CPs are very easy to interact with. However, I didn't like the male protagonist's character in this book, it was too pretentious and off-putting. However, the male protagonist's role in the early stage was small and the plot was really fascinating, so I continued to read on. Seeing the heroine's teammates in the back, they suddenly fell in love with the heroine, and then began to compete with the male protagonist. Forehead. . . In fact, I think this love is very inexplicable and without warning. It feels like it is to set off the male protagonist and give him someone to compete with. (I don't mean to say that the heroine doesn't deserve to be liked. I simply feel that my teammates suddenly like the heroine for no apparent reason like tool men.

It's quite interesting. Each chapter is very long. I really like the heroine and the mecha intelligence in it. It's very cute and the heroine is very smart. However, I feel that the progress is actually quite slow. There are still many mysteries that have not been solved so far. I feel that I can't see the end, I can't guess the ending, and there are many pitfalls. I don't know which pitfall is the main line. So far, I feel that the main line is to revitalize the institute, bring down that group, and then solve the cancer of the alliance and revitalize it. The alliance, solving the anti-alliance and other things, but the Mecha Youtian has not been clearly explained yet. I feel that this hole will be filled in after the military exercise is over. The length is really too long, especially the winter camp. It has written a hundred chapters, but the heroine has only experienced it for about half a month. It is still very interesting. I want to save it until it is finished. (Although it feels like it's still a long way from the end

Super nice [Blowing Kiss] The protagonist and other characters are well portrayed. I feel that many characters in the article have a bad attitude towards the heroine at the beginning and have solid class prejudices. However, the heroine has always done what she wants to do and insists on doing, and gradually affects the people around her. It turns out that people with lower grades can also work hard through the day after tomorrow. Obtaining the results that high-level people can get gives low-level people more hope, changing the rules of their environment, and protecting and cultivating rare species. The heroine has a bottom line and perseverance! ! Ahhhhhh this article deserves a higher rating, up, up, up! ! ! In addition, I really like the plot of the heroine communicating with the mecha intelligence and the nurturing Zaizai. It's so cute! ! ! !

I think this book is okay, and overall I am enjoying it so far. Well, regarding the male protagonist, I think the author should write according to his own outline and not be disturbed by others. After the male protagonist, he actually has his own charm. I think he is quite good now. There is also Decain. I don't think he looks like the male protagonist. He is very suitable to be the female protagonist's good friend, or younger brother. He is suitable for the position of friend. He feels a bit inadequate for the position of the male protagonist. I haven't finished reading it yet, I'll comment after I finish it

It's very good-looking. It's official. It's serious in that it has an appropriate pace. The plot has ups and downs and hooks. I still want to watch it after watching it. There are too few shortcomings. I really feel that this book is not inferior to most interstellar literature, but it is read by too few people, so it is definitely not a loss. When I first watched it, I thought it was the same routine again, but this routine is a little different. It is no longer the weakest among the major military academies and is about to withdraw from several major military academies. It is a very new, honorary military academy that has risen because of Lin Qiu, Lin Qiu, a god-like existence. The wasteland galaxy should definitely succumb to autumn, thank you🙏 To be honest, I was a little bit interested in the Vision 3 book, but after reading it, I knew I was wrong. I was influenced by other book reviews. This book is really good and very good. Lin Qiu, actually it's hard for me to say what she is like, is she wily and calculating, is she good at calculating, does she count? She has a strong personality and charm. If the author did not say that she is gorgeous and good-looking, I almost forgot that Lin Qiu is a beautiful polygonal warrior. Qiu, who loves money and is obsessed with money, is very cute and down-to-earth, isn't she? Good to those who fall within her range. Dadadie and Dabao, damn, I forgot their names, I just wrote them based on my impressions. Very warm. The mecha intelligences are also all cute, and Lin Jieyou is the cutest. I won't accept any refutation. Damn it, why can't I remember the young master's names? Zhou Shalai, Shen Jin, You Shaoheng, Xie Shan, Gongsun Zhi, Ji Wen... There are so many, and the images are all unique. Although the female characters are a bit lacking, they are really good-looking. If you don't mind this, I highly recommend it. CP? To be honest, I don't think it's important. Lin Qiu is definitely the center. Yes, it's not bad. I think it might be Shen Jin. After all, I always feel a little bumpy in some places. If anything else, just pretend I didn't say this.

The characterization and plot are quite good, but the emotional line has not yet been developed, mainly the career line. Shen Jin basically confirmed the male lead. All the agents written in the book are so cute. The article is very long. I wrote more than a hundred pictures during a winter camp and I felt so tired. It feels like the road ahead is dark, and the long league has just ended [I'm about to cry] Looking forward to the new plot

The protagonist is well portrayed. As for what everyone calls the male protagonist, just treat him as a vassal of the female protagonist. I think the male protagonist is well portrayed, because he is the son of a genius after all, and arrogance must be very arrogant. Those who are not arrogant are just pretending. It's still there in the heart, but the author expresses it better and stronger. In other words, as long as the family is good, rich, and powerful, they all look like this. They just wear a shell of this, and everyone on the market looks like this. As for the male protagonist, just think of him as the female protagonist's male favorite. Anyway, he is handsome and has a good family background, so it's fine to be a male protagonist. The protagonist is well portrayed, but the plot may be very nonsensical, and I don't know what I'm watching. A lot of things were not explained clearly, so I gave up.

Nice. In the comments, I saw that Chapter 14 was just babbling and it was really tasteless. The male protagonist is also very normal. I like this kind of group portrait novel. Every character is flesh and blood. The role of the male protagonist is the icing on the cake, which is very good. I really dislike the idea of ​​falling in love with and licking the heroine like a virgin tool from the very beginning, which is similar to a brainless skit. Fortunately, the author's writing style is very good. Like! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

The content is well written [laughing] but the writing is a bit slow [puckering] Please remind me online to update [shy] Be careful of bad reviews [making faces] (This book is really recommended) [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

This is the only one that makes me want to read it. It's very good-looking. The heroine is great and the male protagonist is not obtrusive. Good author. Please update it soon.

I think except for the first part, the male protagonist is okay. You don't have to like the female protagonist as soon as she appears. It's not impossible to have conflicts. The writing in the back is very good ᗜⰙᗜ. It's pretty good according to the author's own opinion.

Oh my gosh, luckily I didn't miss this book that currently only has a 6.5 Rating because of the comment section! ! ! It's so beautiful. I really recommend it. The writing is mature and the rhythm is so well controlled. You really don't want to miss it. It's really beautiful! ! ! !

I read this interstellar mecha article in one sitting and it was really satisfying! The setting is particularly novel. Others are hard-core control mechas. The heroine chats with mechas in a unique way and runs in both directions. The style of painting is funny and healing. The plot is not procrastinating, the daily routine is light-hearted, the fights are passionate and exciting, the characters are vivid and not stereotyped, and the more you watch, the more you become addicted. Reasons for recommendation: The setting is novel with a huge imagination, the combination of daily comedy and hot-blooded interstellar mechas is very good, the plot is light and not cruel, and the rhythm is comfortable. If you like interstellar, mechas, and light-hearted novels, you must give it a try!

I have a small idea. If this book was written by AI, it would actually be mechanical intelligence standing in front of the fight. This is the first time I have seen the full text of the heroine dedicated to helping. Mechanical intelligence gives rise to self-awareness. The further we go, the more I feel that the heroine's camp is composed of all mechanical intelligences [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] All mechanical intelligences can also listen to the heroine's words and cleverly care whether the owner lives or lives🤔

It is a clear flow among many AI novels. It has a rhythm but is relatively slow. The writing is good, but there is room for improvement. When I read it, I felt that because of the slow pace, there was a lot of foreshadowing and exaggeration. In many cases, the emotion and writing are just a little different, and the effect is reduced. But this is not a problem, because this is Tomato where AI is booming.

It is a very good book. I am used to reading two books at the same time, so this time will seem very short, but the total reading time is at least 13 hours. It is highly recommended. I hope my wife will work hard and not be affected~ Still performing steadily, come on, madam!

At first I just clicked in to take a look, but I didn't expect it to suit my taste. Everyone has their own preferences for radish and greens, so please don't compare with 📗. I didn't expect the rating to be so low today. It's still good in a tomato!

The subject matter is very novel, the mecha has derived AI, and it is also conscious. Although it has some shortcomings, it is generally quite good.

It's very interesting. After reading the comments, I realized that many people didn't like the character design of the male protagonist in the early stage. But if you read it directly without reading the comments like me, you will see that the male protagonist in the back is still very good. It's not like what the comments said. I hope everyone can treat it rationally and read it for yourself. After all, good-looking writing is not easy to find.

I like it very much, I feel it is very well written. Judging from the current progress, there is no emotional line. The protagonist's career is doing quite well step by step. I like this feeling that it is clearly a B-level ability but it is the strongest one. But now the military academy competition is very long, and it's been a long time since I've had a big segment on mechas and CPU artificial intelligence, which makes people feel a bit disappointed. Looking forward to the appearance of new mecha intelligence.

Nice! It's really beautiful! It's a very refined mecha novel! Our Lin Qiu is a very smart, calm, and powerful mecha maintainer! There is a lot of military academy and competition content, and it always follows the main line. The plot is high-quality and large-scale! Everyone comes to see 👀

I registered and logged in specifically for the purpose of commenting. I don't usually read serialized articles. This was a mistake. Unexpectedly, it reminded me of the time when I read "Selling Iron to Go to School". It seemed like it had been a few years. I finally came across another such a good article about the mecha of the Interstellar Military Academy. Every aspect of it hit my mark. I couldn't help but laugh until I burst into tears. I couldn't bear to skip it. I listened to it before going to bed, and when I woke up, I returned to the place where I started listening and read it again. I was completely addicted. The last time I followed a novel like this was "Fighting Through the Sky" more than ten years ago. I hope the author will stick to it and don't end it. I hope this book will become a big hit.

I feel visual fatigue after reading the title. The content is okay and worth reading.