I Married into Another Family in My Brother's Place, Then Won a Kingdom on My Own Merits

It's very interesting to listen to and rich in content. The heroine is too wordy in life. I didn't believe in the male protagonist at the beginning. After experiencing so many facts, I still don't believe it. It's boring. Overall, it's very good. Thank you, the author, for bringing us a rich and good book.

It only represents my personal opinion: First of all, the author writes very carefully and compactly. I like it👍🏻. To mention a personal feeling, after listening to 346 photos, people around the protagonist kept questioning it. I know it's to highlight the protagonist. But in every plot and every incident, the heroine pops up to question it. My chest feels tight when I hear it. It will flip though! ! ! ! Everything goes so well! ! Aren't you annoyed? [Laughs]. Slow down the highlights of the story. Just a personal feeling. The author works hard.

The writing is good, second only to me, hard work

In fact, as long as the author is careful about the word count, the useless dialogue between the characters is less cliche, and the distribution of the protagonist and supporting characters is more reasonable and normal, it will still be a good novel subject. After reading the comments in the comment area, even the various complaints can only prove that they are real bookworms who will read your book seriously. However, they must have eaten refined food, so their expectations for your book are too high. They were attracted by the fragrance of the book at first, and then they found that they have not yet eaten the more nutritious essence, which led to a lot of scorn. Author, can you understand the feeling of disappointment when you find that the book is full of words and is about to be unfinished? I hope you can reorganize the outline, break down the character trends, and finish the work well so that it will live up to your book fans and your original intention of writing. Come on!

It's good if the plot of the story flows smoothly, and there is no need to describe it in detail, otherwise it will seem too long-winded, as if the reader's IQ is not online. The plot of the story is rich and interlocking, which is good!

Listen to Chapter 172. A novel about time-traveling and fictional hegemony. The novel has a coherent plot, rich characters, and a strong story rhythm. Overall, it is a good novel. But there are also many flaws. The male protagonist's current wife, Miss Su, is a bit brainless in many plots. After being with the male protagonist for so long, she still doesn't think about whether the male protagonist is reliable or capable. She obstructs the male protagonist when he spends money, and sheds tears when she encounters problems. She is not as good as her best friend Miss Wang. I feel like this character design is a bit of a failure. After listening to these recent chapters, I feel that there are some loopholes. Since I know that the bandits are coming to massacre the village at night, even if I don't ask Master Shen and General An Yi, why not ask the eldest princess's imperial guards who are nearby to help? The price system is also a bit confusing and making money seems too easy. Are ancient people sure to be so quick to accept and pursue modern things? In recent chapters, the male protagonist has become a bit of a virgin. Putting aside these flaws and not delving into the logic, the plot of the novel is full of ups and downs, and it can still kill your leisure time. Don't be a rogue when reading, just send a message and comment.

The story is relatively righteous, with revenge and resentment, but the heroine likes to cry so much

So far, this book is really well written [like it], the plot is engaging, and there isn't much nonsense. There are just some minor flaws. The heroine obviously saw the hero make something delicious that she had never seen before. She should at least be touched and changed, instead of remaining stubborn.

The thinking is delicate, the article is fluent, and there are no pitfalls. [Like][Like][Like]

The plot of the story seems pretty good for now, with a lot of foreshadowing. I hope the hidden characters for the foreshadowing will be written well! The update is too slow and one star will be deducted! I hope to keep up the good work and send you good reviews after it is completed! !