After Taking My Brother's Place in Marriage, I Relied on My Strength to Become the King.

It's very interesting to listen to and rich in content. The heroine is too wordy in life. I didn't believe in the male protagonist at the beginning. After experiencing so many facts, I still don't believe it. It's boring. Overall, it's very good. Thank you, the author, for bringing us a rich and good book.

It only represents my personal opinion: First of all, the author writes very carefully and compactly. I like it👍🏻. To mention a personal feeling, after listening to 346 photos, people around the protagonist kept questioning it. I know it's to highlight the protagonist. But in every plot and every incident, the heroine pops up to question it. My chest feels tight when I hear it. It will flip though! ! ! ! Everything goes so well! ! Aren't you annoyed? [Laughs]. Slow down the highlights of the story. Just a personal feeling. The author works hard.

The writing is good, second only to me, hard work

In fact, as long as the author is careful about the word count, the useless dialogue between the characters is less cliche, and the distribution of the protagonist and supporting characters is more reasonable and normal, it will still be a good novel subject. After reading the comments in the comment area, even the various complaints can only prove that they are real bookworms who will read your book seriously. However, they must have eaten refined food, so their expectations for your book are too high. They were attracted by the fragrance of the book at first, and then they found that they have not yet eaten the more nutritious essence, which led to a lot of scorn. Author, can you understand the feeling of disappointment when you find that the book is full of words and is about to be unfinished? I hope you can reorganize the outline, break down the character trends, and finish the work well so that it will live up to your book fans and your original intention of writing. Come on!

It's good if the plot of the story flows smoothly, and there is no need to describe it in detail, otherwise it will seem too long-winded, as if the reader's IQ is not online. The plot of the story is rich and interlocking, which is good!

Listen to Chapter 172. A novel about time-traveling and fictional hegemony. The novel has a coherent plot, rich characters, and a strong story rhythm. Overall, it is a good novel. But there are also many flaws. The male protagonist's current wife, Miss Su, is a bit brainless in many plots. After being with the male protagonist for so long, she still doesn't think about whether the male protagonist is reliable or capable. She obstructs the male protagonist when he spends money, and sheds tears when she encounters problems. She is not as good as her best friend Miss Wang. I feel like this character design is a bit of a failure. After listening to these recent chapters, I feel that there are some loopholes. Since I know that the bandits are coming to massacre the village at night, even if I don't ask Master Shen and General An Yi, why not ask the eldest princess's imperial guards who are nearby to help? The price system is also a bit confusing and making money seems too easy. Are ancient people sure to be so quick to accept and pursue modern things? In recent chapters, the male protagonist has become a bit of a virgin. Putting aside these flaws and not delving into the logic, the plot of the novel is full of ups and downs, and it can still kill your leisure time. Don't be a rogue when reading, just send a message and comment.

The story is relatively righteous, with revenge and resentment, but the heroine likes to cry so much

The thinking is delicate, the article is fluent, and there are no pitfalls. [Like][Like][Like]

So far, this book is really well written [like it], the plot is engaging, and there isn't much nonsense. There are just some minor flaws. The heroine obviously saw the hero make something delicious that she had never seen before. She should at least be touched and changed, instead of remaining stubborn.

The plot of the story seems pretty good for now, with a lot of foreshadowing. I hope the hidden characters for the foreshadowing will be written well! The update is too slow and one star will be deducted! I hope to keep up the good work and send you good reviews after it is completed! !

Read it all the way from Yang Lin's book. Although it is a similar farming style, this one feels different. There are not so many farming scenes, but more interactions between various daily characters. Each character has a lot of roles. I like both books very much. They have the same subject matter, but the writing methods and emphasis are different. However, they are both wonderful.

It's rare that Lin Feng can make cement, build cannons, get rich, and achieve counterattacks without relying on the system or golden fingers, relying only on his brain and knowledge. Isn't that great! Five-star praise, continue reading [Adoration]

It's really good. After searching for a month, I finally found a novel that I can read into 100 chapters.

Not bad, very interesting, refreshing

Just a brief comment, the plot is good in all aspects, but some parts are too idealistic. I don't dare to think about history or the future, and it is estimated that it is impossible to realize the situation. I don't even have any concept of money, but overall it is not bad.

The writing is good, a bit confusing, but still very good. The more you listen, the more you want to listen. It is fascinating. I have listened to the end, but the ending is a bit too fast. Although the author's skills are not good, it is still a bit too confrontational!

Not bad. It looks good. I will continue to watch it.

Very interesting and fast-paced, you can watch it

Book friend Master Bu Kong recommended this novel. The content is well selected, the structure is clear, and the plot is very concise. It is very beautiful! It can be compared with the current popular "For Whom is the Beauty of the Ages"! Worth recommending!

I saw the serialization in 3 days and received strong praise. The writing style is really addictive. Although some of the characters have heavy catchphrases and the characters' personalities are relatively formulaic, the content description does have the right rhythm. This kind of literary world is large enough.

The logic is quite rigorous, and the foreshadowing concept is also very good. I updated 500 chapters in more than 100 days, which shows that I have put a lot of thought into it, which is rare. Unlike other authors who update 600 or 700 chapters in 20 days, and all they write are anecdotes with no logic. This novel is well written!

It reads smoothly, and the plot is well set up, but it's a little wordy, the villain is too stupid, and the heroine's IQ is slightly lower, deliberately to set off the hero's strength and make people anxious [laughs]. Maybe the author did it on purpose, so be cruel!

The plot is exciting! Worth reading!

I originally thought it was a mindless novel, but I didn't expect the author to have quite a lot of ideas, especially the portrayal of the protagonist's dealings with the city. In a few words, he revealed the details of the refugees, and his calmness in the face of the aggressive big shots is remarkable. I'll keep reading, it's very interesting!

This book was written with great care by the author. The plot is coherent, the writing is delicate, and the characters are clearly drawn. It is a masterpiece worth collecting and recommending. A solid five-star review. [Like][Like][Like]

It's so beautiful. I couldn't help myself from the beginning. I couldn't stop. I must give it a five-star rating. On behalf of the 47-year-old hard-working king, come and read the masterpiece! (His works include "I am 18 years old, the peace elite has become a god", "The founding emperor transformed into an abandoned prince", etc.)

Using modern thinking to run an ancient business is a strange idea in itself! It can be said that the story is very imaginative, the descriptions of the characters in the story are vivid and interesting, and it is quite interesting!

The content of this book is exciting and the storyline is vivid and interesting.

Super nice book! You won't know until you look at it, but you'll get the next jump after you take a look! Dear book friends! Come and see! Increased knowledge! Recharge your brain! Let me see you, friends and family have something to say! [Like][Like][Like]

It's good-looking, interlocking, and engagingly written. Except for some logical errors in a few places, full marks.