The Inheritance of the Daoist Flame

Let's try writing for a while first, whether it's good or not.

It's still too immature. If you write about Fire Inheritance, just write about the protagonist accidentally entering the weird world behind the world, and then getting a golden finger to pretend to be slapped in the face. The protagonist is too young, about 18 years old, and it is best to have a villain in the early stage, and then bury the big villain in the foreshadowing or just not write it at all. The villain needs to be a bit oppressive, and the protagonist needs to use cheats to work hard to defeat it to the extreme. There are also problems with the description. Don't write that there seems to be something behind it. As soon as the word "thing" comes out, it will be obvious that it is a novice. But if you dare to try, you will be strong in perseverance. But let's settle down and try to write a new book.

Come on author, I support you

It's suspenseful and exciting, and the twists are reasonably shocking. The author's IQ is online, the wording is accurate and vivid, and the pictures are full of sense. It's very good👍 The process of hard work is more precious than the result. Your seriousness is the most amazing!

I'm here from dy. I've just started writing. I'd like to support you.

NB, there are no ratings for 1.4 Million words. Is the author so passionate about it?

It looks okay, but it's weird. There are no comments or ratings. It's 500 chapters. I don't know what the author is doing.