Fantasy*************

I feel that the overall style is more traditional. In the early stage, it mainly focuses on spreading out the world view, and there are no conflicting points. This is not very popular in Tomato, but it becomes more exciting as it goes on. I hope the author can perform stably. The quality of the main book is still good.

The subject matter is novel, I support it, but the way the male protagonist refines the magic weapon is a bit overwhelming [cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face] After watching it for so long, I can still see some issues. For example, the background of the story and senior sister's motivations are too straightforward. For example, senior sister's motivations for hurting me should be gradually revealed through the progression of the plot. Direct explanations are too deliberate. There is also the issue of the character's personality. According to "my" character's personality, I should still be somewhat disgusted and wary of the senior sister. After all, I was killed once. Finally, there are some common problems in online writing. Some plots can be written in just a few strokes, but in the end a few pictures are leaked. The above is my personal evaluation

The subject matter is very novel, and the early part of it was watered down and felt a little unnecessary. I fell asleep while watching it, but it became more and more interesting later on. In the future, the inner demon becomes independent, and the senior sister confesses and starts to chase her husband. I am very looking forward to the plot at the end. I can't stand the first part. How can I persist until I see the second part? Come on.

Fortunately, I just like men and women to fight and kill each other and then [eat melon]

Not bad, I fell in love with my senior sister

Hao Chi, loves Chi, and wants to live in Chi! [Love the new][Love the new]

Not bad, at least it's not like some books where you cry and then forgive after being stabbed in the back. At least it doesn't seem to have any major problems so far, and overall it's pretty good. So can you give me more? Love to watch

Author, I want to read Thurse

Okay, please support me

Not bad, the subject matter is quite fresh

It's good to watch. I'll watch it next time.

The characters are three-dimensional, the structure of the novel is rigorous, the emotions are delicate, the overall feeling is very comfortable to read, the novel is written with great care, 👍👍

I think this book is okay and you can read it in your leisure time. The author can also continue to flesh out the characters, come on [laughs]

A very beautiful masterpiece of cultivating immortality! The protagonist Xiao Qian has changed the system, golden fingers and other operations of previous time travel novels. With his own efforts, he started from the grassroots and relied on his extraordinary wisdom to reverse the path of immortality. Every step is difficult and dangerous, but every step brings forth lotus flowers, an inspirational example! Although there is also a side of pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger, it always makes people surprised, amazed and amazed! The language of the novel is humorous and flowing. Everywhere you write, flowers bloom, making it a fun and interesting read that makes you want to stop reading! A special tribute to the author of the novel who has retired! Thank you for your masterpiece, thank you for giving so many people a present filled with hope and smiles, and a rewarding tomorrow! The best book about cultivating immortals, Therefore, highly recommended!

It's unfolding well so far, and the plot is very novel. Let's give it four stars first and see how the author fills in the subsequent pitfalls. OK, the trap has been filled, I want to watch sweet love [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

I just read part of it and couldn't help but comment on it first. The protagonist Xiao Qian traveled to the world of immortality to refine his sect's magic weapon, and accidentally refined the sect's senior sister... This setting is very good, and I look forward to the follow-up. Comment after reading it [laughs] Wonderful [like]

So far, it can still be seen, but to be honest, it can't be that the protagonist is chasing the senior sister, and the gap is still very big. The most trusted person has been betrayed twice in the past life and this life. If these holes have not been filled, if you really become a Taoist couple, you will really feel like you are being fed. I hope this hole is filled a little better and don't force them to be together...

This book teaches you psychology

It looks okay, author, cheers

Okay, it's quite interesting.

Very interesting plot

It's okay, come on, author

You successfully caught my attention

Hello, Comrade Author, I would like to give you some advice. Now that you have mastered the magic weapon, it should be normal for a weapon spirit to be born.

This book is not bad, with a compact plot and ups and downs. Please hurry up and update it. It is worth recommending [Like][Like][Like]

Personally, I think the author writes well and is worth reading.

As long as you can accept the layout of the heroine becoming stronger in the early stage and the male protagonist, this book is still very interesting. After all, who doesn't like the gentle heroine in the early stage and the charming and sassy heroine in the middle and later stages?

A very good novel about cultivating immortals, worth recommending!

How to say it? Suddenly I thought it looked pretty good. Anyway, it's still good. Come on!

This book is very well written and was introduced to me by a friend. The plot is also very good. The real name of Xiu Xian highlights the theme and the existence of the protagonist. I like it very much. Friends who like it can come and watch it!