Travel Through the Weird School Beauty, You Will Be Eaten If You Are Found

After reading it, tell me your feelings. First of all, there are some parts that make people uncomfortable to watch, because the protagonist is too altruistic. Nowadays, everyone is an egoist. When I see the protagonist helping others even if he is in danger, I feel incomprehensible and even angry. Why must he help others? It's hard for me to stay alive, and I'm going to be fucked to death soon. Then there is too much emphasis on the protagonist's feelings of violating "conscience". For most people, it is good if you don't kill others for yourself and don't harm others. Why don't you fight back when someone attacks you? You don't want to kill me, but you can just teach me a lesson or make others stop beating you, okay? Do you have to stand there and refuse to fight back and curse? , It has no other effect except making people feel artificial. But the advantages are also obvious. It can be seen that the author is ambitious, there is not too much homogeneity, and the protagonist is well created. In particular, the psychological changes are described very delicately and the character is very distinct. From the author's description of the protagonist's skills, it can be seen that the author has a big plan, but the length of your description is too much, and it is just a blind explanation, without thinking about whether the readers want to read it. From the readers' point of view, this long and lengthy section is just explaining the simple physics of same-sex repels and opposite-sex attraction. It is unnecessary. I believe that most readers who can see it will jump or not read it well. Who cares about your stuff? It is better to make a direct comparison and pass it off. But no matter what, as the first book, the author's writing is really good, and it deserves four stars.

In the past, the protagonist always refused to accept it or cried. Her personality is like a woman, but the setting is that of a man, which makes it very uncomfortable to watch. This is a poisonous point, but the author listened to the persuasion and changed it. It should be better. The plot later is quite good. The subject matter is quite new, and the author listened to his advice, and after revising it, there are no shortcomings. Also it's too short.

The setting is good, the pace is relaxed and moderate, and the plot is ups and downs and full of dangers. But what I am most satisfied with is the psychological portrayal and the protagonist's perspective. Nowadays, it is really not easy to find such a high-quality work.

The pacing is good so far, but I think there are a few things to pay attention to. 1. The protagonist's identity and stance. This is the most important thing to watch. As a lost soul, he is coveted by the weird, and as a weird and feared by humans, how does the protagonist deal with his own identity and position. This is the core issue faced by the protagonist of this book. All contradictions and conflicts will revolve around this point, and it will also be the main reason for "abusing the master". However, at present, it seems that the contradiction is too mild to support the plot. 2. Subsidiary issues arising from the issue of identity and stance. When a knife appears in a movie, it is destined to make someone bleed. In the same way, since the characters that are currently more focused on the weird characters all have foreshadowing, they will definitely appear in the future, but can it be more complicated? For example, there is a friendship between the weird ones, rather than a simple confrontation with different stances. 3. World view and human line From the current description of the uncanny world, it seems that the uncanny world is as hierarchical as the human world, with social hierarchies. Whether this is appropriate requires careful consideration. As the saying goes, the unknown is scary. Such a system is not a good thing for the weird aspect. But this can still be supplemented by the plot on the human side. If the reasons for the so-called drastic changes in the power system of the Trickster cannot be well written, the book will lose a major attraction. Small suggestions, if you find them helpful you can adopt them, after all, this is your book.

The text is about gender, but the protagonist behaves like a boy and a girl. There should be a setting at the beginning where the protagonist is more girly than a girl before time travel [laughing]

As a newcomer's work, it's actually quite good. In most plots, arrangements such as the protagonist splitting his soul to hide the aura of the lost soul, and using the players to escape are quite reasonable. I have not seen the altruistic plot of the protagonist mentioned by other readers. Maybe the author changed it later. I don't think there's anything wrong with the protagonist's altruistic character, but not many people are saints, and the protagonist should put himself first when being altruistic. Because the author you are writing about is just an ordinary person, not a public servant like a policeman or a doctor, who has any professional ethics or high moral standards. As an ordinary person, most of the time, I care about myself and the people close to me. It is enough to say some kindness to other strangers. Maybe sometimes you will be passionate and dare to be the ancestor. You can have such plots, but not too many, and because it requires a lot of foreshadowing, it is difficult to write. In most cases, it is not ideal to write. But anyway, you can read this book. The plot is relatively novel and eye-catching. Among so many clichéd, repetitive, and boring books, this one is indeed quite interesting. Of course, it's also possible that I haven't read many books of this type. [You taste carefully] I hope the author will continue to work hard! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

The plot has a strong sense of immersion. I think it's very interesting. I hope the author will work hard and update it three times a day [awkward laugh]

The setting is novel, the writing is fine, and the sparks created by the collision between the human soul and the weird body are also very interesting. I like to read this kind of novel where the protagonist struggles to survive in the cracks of race. It's good-looking, and it's over. The only problem is that it's too slow, and it doesn't work. It is generally slow and intermittent, with only a thousand words per chapter. I feel it is second only to novels that are updated weekly. However, for such a low level of popularity, it is already a blessing to be updated continuously. It is basically generating electricity with love. Come on, author, and look forward to the day it is finished.

I feel like this book is good. I hope the author will continue to update it to the end. In addition, I hope that the protagonist can always maintain his humanity, and his personality and habits can gradually integrate with the original person, but his values ​​​​do not be weirdly assimilated.

It's a very special subject matter. Since the author wants to grasp the survival of a "normal person" in a mysterious world, he must make himself look like a mysterious person but not really become a mysterious person. There are too many contradictions that need to be considered. No one can think about the problem in all aspects, just write down according to their own ideas. Seeing the restoration of authors, book reviews, and chapter reviews, I feel that I am easily influenced by readers, but what I want to say is that a setting that originally requires so much thinking, and then taking into account other people's ideas will easily explode. There is nothing wrong with caring about what readers think, but a balance must be struck, otherwise it will be difficult to agree on whose opinion everyone should listen to. Come on, the subject matter is very special and the writing is very good.

The soul returns... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul returns... Driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Crossing the mountain and singing... The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul returns... Sings high and triumphant... We share the same robe and enjoy the glory... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥 The soul is back... The soul is back. Update! ! ! Generally speaking, there are small flaws and big flaws, but the author has also made some progress. Overall, the protagonist has improved along with the author's writing skills. The possible reasons for discouraging people from quitting are as follows: the protagonist is too kind and seems to be particularly unsociable in Tomato. It would be a pity not to travel through time and become Peter Parker. In the early stage, my writing skills were unfamiliar, and many people complained about it. Personally considered advantages: The conflict is mainly between the protagonist and humans on earth. The protagonist's identity is with humans, but his body is not. The original body may even have a big hatred against humans. Coupled with the strange situation of cutting down trees and exposing people to the sun, the two parties cannot truly trust and cooperate. Personal shortcomings: occasional sick sentences, lack of expression, and the fact that the protagonist still cannot accept his own gender after more than 200 chapters... A person's character is determined by the material conditions in which he lives. It is a bit strange that the protagonist has not accepted his gender for so long. My personal suggestion is that there is always an upper limit to the "abuse" of the protagonist being killed or suffering from PTSD. Maybe you can try to create a new character and kill him, and then write the protagonist's reaction (I don't think this suggestion is very mature) It is obvious that the author had some ideas when writing the first volume. When I read it, I felt it was slightly sensational, but only slightly. I felt that there might be something missing between the lines (I am not a professional liberal arts student, so this is just intuition)

It's pretty good. Now that the gender has been changed, let the protagonist slowly accept this result and show his own growth process. I personally think that the protagonist can become friends with some weirdos and get to know some other humans. [Laughing][laughing]

In my eyes, he only wrote 41 chapters of this novel, because the rest are meaningless extensions. Instead of persisting intermittently, it is better to decisively reborn from the ashes! In addition, for the most part, "choice is greater than effort" Four stars support the story that I once liked and look forward to the author's "next book"

It's very beautiful. I don't know why, but many people say it doesn't work. The protagonist is very humane, and some people start to attack randomly after reading too many novels. There was an author before who wrote very well at the beginning but always listened to the readers later. Guess what? Only a small number of readers are left because only a small number of readers leave comments. Most readers read the content. Because I kept listening to the readers, there was no innovation later. There are almost no exciting points, so I support the author's free play. If most readers say there is a problem, then you still have to listen.

It took me about two or three days to read the latest chapter. I felt that it was quite good. The abuse was not bad. I felt a little uncomfortable at most, but in the end the protagonist saved the day. Then I also felt that the author's outline was quite complete, the world view was explained relatively clearly, and the storyline progressed smoothly. Overall, this is a very interesting book. Finally, I hope the author can continue to write more, and I hope it will get better and better.

The subject matter is relatively novel and the content is substantial. It is a very well-written book. I highly recommend it. What surprised me the most is that it does not have the bad habits of most time-travel novels, that is, after the original person is mentioned in the first two chapters, the original person's presence is extremely low in the follow-up. I hope the author will make further progress without having to listen to too many other people's words. He can just keep his own rhythm and writing style [Love][Love][Love][Love]

It's a very good novel, and it suits my personal taste. Moreover, the weird elements in it are relatively popular, and anyone who likes weirdness and transformation can read it. I just hope that the author can update it a little faster, and the number of words in each chapter can be more [Salute]

Not bad, suitable for readers with mild phobia, some feeling but not breathless tension. Great for casual reading. There are many psychological descriptions in the early stage of the plot, and the fear of the characters can be clearly felt. Although there are some occasions where it feels really obvious, but the protagonist's somewhat cowardly but strong desire to survive can be felt. After all, it is not a cool novel, and it is required every time. It may be really difficult for the protagonist to pay attention to things. When you are very nervous during the exam, you may not be able to notice some questions. You just want to finish them as soon as possible. The protagonist does have the halo, but you can accept it. After all, everyone hopes that they can score more points by writing more and being careful and judging during the exam. In the second chapter, the casual daily life after escaping from death is actually quite good. Stepping into the perspective of the protagonist, it feels like a huge sense of relaxation after finishing the college entrance examination. Of course, the protagonist's side is more serious, which is understandable. Just like a student who has not touched a mobile phone for almost a year in high school, after the exam, there is no time when he wants to play with the phone crazily, when he wants to relax, and tries his best not to recall the huge pressure before the exam, just like the protagonist does not want to recall the strange world. I feel that this kind of daily life is the protagonist's best relief to himself. (Personal opinion) Overall, the book is okay to read. Kudos to the author [Like]

This book is very good to read, and it is very clear that the protagonist is normal, with reactions that are more in line with mainstream values ​​and more in line with what normal people would expect. Being in a foreign land and being surrounded by strangers, and the people around you are not even human and want to eat you, even if you are strangely attacking humans you think are your own race, you feel guilty and want to make up for the abnormality? Is the protagonist someone here who has read countless online articles and has a heart as cold as killing fish at RT-Mart for ten years? Is it possible that some of the murderers here don't need some psychological training? Don't you need to bear some psychological burden on the people you killed when you "had no choice"? Is this really normal? (I'm just saying this here. I felt extremely speechless after reading some of the book reviews, because the author and I had the same thinking - I thought that after the other party's subjective behavior of killing me was not evil, it was normal for me to feel guilty for killing me in return. That's why I wrote this book review)

The author's three views are really upright. He really describes the appearance of ordinary people, not those "kings of soldiers" and "surface weapons". I think it suits me very well. The score is low, 8.5 Is very suitable. Maybe it is because this era cannot stand the protagonist who does not make the best choice... In fact, the wrong choice is often the main theme. The novel reflects the reality very well. The author sticks to his own path. You have a high ideological awareness!

Author, I read your book in early 2025. At that time, you updated slowly and rarely. I think a small author like you will stop updating after a period of time at most. I followed your intermittent updates for about a month and then stopped reading it. It's now July 2026. I didn't expect you to persist for so long. I admire your persistence and give you a five-star review.

The setting is novel, the protagonist is an ordinary person, and the main plot has a strong sense of relaxation. (I can't edit anymore. My Chinese language skills are low. Anyway, I just think it looks good. That's why I need so much trouble.) Let's see how long I've been reading, meow

To be honest, this is the first time I read a story about abuse. I didn't want to click on it before, but this time I clicked on it for some unknown reason. Now that I have finished reading it, I will give it 5 stars. I hope this book will get better and better, and the author, you should also work hard. [Laugh]

It's very good, the logic is clear, the plot is interesting, and the genre is novel. Some people are complaining about the protagonist, but I don't understand it. It would be very difficult for normal people to stay calm in such a world. The protagonist is already very strong if he can do this. This novel has no system and no cheating. I like it very much. Many books about traveling into weird worlds awaken various systems to defeat the weirdness. What's the point of that? They are all separated from the element of horror. Survival without systematic help can reflect the protagonist's ability.

1. First of all, the protagonist of this article is not evil. If you want to watch it happily, it will be useless, just like the entry of abuse of the protagonist in the introduction. 2. The protagonist of this article is not a god, but a normal human being. He cannot make mistakes without making mistakes, and he will be afraid and contradict himself. This is where most of the things that make people feel suffocated are. But it's okay not to impose your own perspective as a reader on the protagonist. 3. The article is still deficient in expressing ideas and thinking. I hope the author can work harder and give 4 stars to show encouragement. ദ്ദി˶>𖥦<)✧

I have seen this book on the homepage several times. When I came in, I felt it was pretty good. Although it was a bit toxic at the beginning, I could see it was gradually getting better at the end. However, the author worked so hard and is still updating it. In the end, I hope this book will get better and better (I will get used to it🤓)

The author quickly updated me and finished the second chapter in one day. I want to see the highlights of the protagonist. . . . 👿👿👿 The author will update quickly. Also, I couldn't stand the torture of the main character, it was so miserable. After substitution [Petrochemical]

It has potential, and the plot is quite novel, but I finished it in one go. It's not satisfying enough. Please give me more support from the author [Like] [Like] [Like] [Smile]

The revised volume 1 is quite exciting and has a good setting. If you keep it up, it will be a great book with potential. The world view is unique and the plot is novel. It's pretty good, but the progress is a bit slow.

It's very interesting, the plot has ups and downs, and it's much better than those mindless ones. Also I am not a human machine.