Reincarnation************

Although the plot has a lot of poisonous points, the author's writing is very good Let Kyoko be the protagonist [laughing and crying] Withdrawal, the plot is already average and it keeps adding poison

Haohuang is a bit like swapping the men and women in the book, but from what I have seen so far, the most exciting climax part should have ended (the male protagonist is having a sword fight with Huashan), so I am very curious about what more exciting plot designs the author has next.

The writing style and character behavior logic of this book are pretty good among female novels. However, there are a few points to note: 1. Regarding the heroine's beliefs (motivations). The heroine has an extraordinary loyalty to the goddess, which is why the heroine has not completely fallen into evil yet. But the origin of this loyalty is not mentioned much. If it is only the education of the heroine, it seems a bit too pale. Once the character's motivation is pale, the character image will be blurred; once the character image is blurred, the character story will collapse. 2. Regarding the creation of supporting roles. Take for example my current favorite character, Little Miss - Fillory. As a young lady of the Elrond family, she is unexpectedly pure. Her love for the protagonist is restrained and pure. She does not use her identity to coerce the protagonist, and she does not take advantage of the protagonist's weakness to satisfy her own desires. In stark contrast are those (elves) who make up high-sounding excuses to satisfy their desires. Many years later, Philoline, the knight of the apocalypse who faced the brave team, would recall the afternoon when she proposed to Hathaway. When a reader empathizes with a character in the book, the author must properly arrange the fate of that character. It can be tragic (such as the leader), it can be funny (such as the master), but it cannot be a clown (such as Gojo Satoru). 3. About the rhythm of the story. Judging from the current pace, this book will hardly reach 300 chapters. I hope the author can slow down the main line a little and add some branch lines, world view and daily life appropriately. In short, this book is well written. I hope the author will continue his work and wish this book a huge success.

Heroine, beautiful boy, holiness, priest, the author knows what the readers want [laughing]

Boy, I was so prescient. I didn't watch Sachiko the second time he came out. I read the comments and he became the protagonist. I ran away immediately👍

I like this kind of literature where clean and noble things are defiled. Although there are few people urging updates, the author must persevere.

Good-looking Huangwen, it must be given five stars. I saw the book again on Tomato. Either I don't dare to write, or I am blocked if I write [Like]

Author, I will give you free flowers every day. When you can't bear it anymore, remember to send a message to let the big guys know. I will try my best to help you top up some money.

It's pure abuse, I've read Chapter 20. Not recommended for most readers.

It is a more realistic novel about women. I have always believed that blood and tears, partings and joys and sorrows, and failure to love... These can depict a more real world.

I didn't expect to meet a master in Tomato The writing is great and the subject matter is good. Both the protagonist and the villain are growing up. The reason for giving it four stars is that it feels too frustrating to be the protagonist. See if you can bite back later and make up for it.

Give me an update quickly, ahhhhhh! [Crazy][Crazy][Crazy] Why is it that in the middle, the male supporting role has a higher appearance rate than the male protagonist? It's uncomfortable to watch.

Haokan [Like] There are not many descriptions of ordinary soldiers in the middle. It can be strengthened for human beings, for example: the armed soldiers of the church-the Sinners and Templar Cavalry, the Imperial Guard Infantry, Guards Lancers, and Guards Cavalry who are good at defensive counterattacks; the royal guards who serve the royal family, the Jiwu Gods who roam different battlefields, etc. Of course, different forces must also be strengthened. There is also a description of the professions, which can be more detailed and diverse. For example, the emperor is also a profession, the dragon knight commander, the cavalry commander, and many other regular professions, as well as many special professions: Tide Commander, Oath of the End, Royal Guard, Ranger Knight, Paladin Commander, Fate Gate Saint, Lord of Light and Darkness, Shadow Blade General, Hero, Chaos Incarnation... (Don't ask me, I saw these from a game, and don't ask me it is a game...)

This is just the fantasy of a priest who was humiliated to death [laughing evilly]

I also like female protagonists, but I prefer green tea for better enjoyment. This book is not as good as me, but it's a pity that the writing is online.

The Emperor's Chapter is simply the Emperor's Chapter

Are you really not going to save it in the end of the world? Or should you tell me if you posted it somewhere else?

Sex-transformed black beast, the top ten male protagonists

It is recommended that the anchor open a group and let brothers discuss it (≧㉨≦)

Keep it up for now, and call me when you write the male lead.

Look, it's just too small, there are very few people, but that's fine, it's not easy to get into the dark room

The protagonist will probably awaken during the church war, because he was brainwashed by the church before, and the protagonist has shown a strong talent in the previous article. If he is determined to change the original world structure after awakening, which is a world where women are strong and men are weak, he will probably embark on such a path.

It is really a beacon for the education and training industry.

Are there any similar

Will the protagonist be changed later? What a pity [Thinking]

I have to say that it is above the passing mark in all aspects. The only shortcoming is that the number of words is too few. It is a great book [Like]

Hurry up and write revenge

Good luck, can't wait for Wu Can.

It tastes great and doesn't require too much salt.

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