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(Bottom middle) 7 points, mark,,,,,, Although you tried your best to balance the weight of the male and female protagonists, this also resulted in the development of the male protagonist's abilities being limited, the female protagonist's luck being irrelevant, and the worldview of Cthulhu being very cramped. Your handling method was not very clever. By lowering the upper limit of the three, the novel was made logically consistent. If you focus on writing about one person, the book's evaluation will go up; or you can leave a blank and focus on the male protagonist's perspective, while the female protagonist only needs results and becomes a tool; furthermore, if you want to write about two people at the same time, then you should write a script, and novels are not suitable for you. ─────────────────── Rating of the novel: ①Shangshang (a good book that suits my taste very well, unexpectedly excellent, five stars/10 points+) ②Superior (recognized as a good book by everyone, more than 1,000 updates, five stars/9-10 points) ③Shang Xia (① A good book with rigorous and self-consistent logic, ② A good book that does not meet your taste, five stars/8-9 points) ④Above average (a good book in the conventional sense, no special features, five stars/7-8 points) ⑤Medium (the reading experience is disappointing, far from expectations, difficult to objectively evaluate, ① three stars x points, ② minus one point) ⑥Mid-to-lower (a work with average performance, no outstanding highlights, and no major problems, ①three stars/5-6 points, ②four-stars/6-7 points) ⑦Xiashang (a novel with major flaws, but there are still some merits, ① one star/1~2 points, ②three stars/3~4 points) ⑧Inferior (a novel that reads as boring as chicken ribs, has no appeal, and cannot bring reading pleasure, two stars/0 points) ⑨Xiaxia (a book with good writing but distorted views, harmful content, seriously affecting the reading experience, two stars/-1~-10)

It's okay now, there's no poison in it, I'll just take a look at it first

Can the author write more about the heroine?

It's not toxic for the time being, okay.

It looks good, I hope you can stick to it till the end. I've watched several weird islands and it's been discontinued. It seems it's easy to get bored with this type of subject matter. Five stars for encouragement [like]

Great, feels interesting, non-toxic

It's not bad, come on, author

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

Updates are a bit slow. I just discovered this book last night. Now that I have finished reading it, it is not enough. This book definitely has great potential.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Very well written, cheers

It seems okay so far (╹◡╹)

It should be pretty good

Very well written, keep it up

It's pretty good. As long as you keep it up, the writing is already very good. As long as the plot doesn't collapse and the author keeps updating, there will be no problem.

Can you please promise me not to be a eunuch? [Crying]