Datang: Just After Time Travel, Li Shimin's House Was Confiscated

I'll test the poison first; 1. The opening chapter is dull, and there is no brain to store the three-piece set to reduce intelligence! 2. There is no system, the logic and IQ are slow, the beginning is like the writing style of a Qin official, and the middle is like a Tang Dynasty brick. There are a lot of plot supplements, but without a system, how many millions of words can I write to finish the book? 3. I won't talk about the poison points that vary from person to person, so as not to start a fight. 4. The writing is a bit stiff, but the plot moves quickly. 5. Those who are used to reading mindless cool articles and systematic articles can't stand it, like me. 6. I can't see where there is any overhead. They all grew up in Mobei Gou. If you want to see Chang'an playing with the princess, run away. 7. It is suitable for people who are obsessed with history. It is not boring but can also criticize the author. Let me help you test the poison, just compare it with the points I listed above. I've finished reading the rest of it out of boredom, so I'll make a few additions: 1. It is not the Tang Dynasty that is currently being ignored, but the Mobei Turks! ! 2. Jieli Khan has an illegitimate daughter, and the Holy See has a team of envoys (This is where Pig Horns got the glaze manufacturing technology, not something created out of nothing, or a universal self-developed time traveler.) 3. The plot develops well and transitions well, and it can withstand scrutiny, which is more outstanding than Tang Bian (only based on the sixty chapters I have seen) 4. There is no strong technology tree. They all use the existing technology in the early Tang Dynasty. The pig horns are transformed and upgraded based on the insights and knowledge of later generations. (The technology is explained by the author in the article, not mine) 5. Let's talk about the plot. It looks like there are a lot of messy clues at the beginning, and the pitfalls start to be filled in later (I want to complain here, one chapter is full of pitfalls, which made me go back and search it again several times). I just wrote a few sentences at the beginning of a pit, and then suddenly picked up the plot. It was too difficult for me, who is used to reading systematic writing and directly pulling Ak out of the butthole. 6. In the first part, I thought he was a romantic and talented man, but in the second part, it has nothing to do with romanticism. How can someone who has been exiled from the army and be a lowly citizen be so powerful? ? I don't know much about the official history, so some great master comes out to expose him. I can't stand the show of pretentiousness with pig horns! !

I just finished listening to the latest chapter, what should I say... How do you develop Mobei without a system or resources? The timeline is quite tight, and the plot is much better than those where you lose your wits in just one round, so you choose to start on the grassland and keep developing. I hope there will be less Chang'an scenes in the future. They were all written badly by Jiang Zhi, and even the author would step on them. It's not easy to write code, so you need to take care of yourself first, but don't let it die!