On How to Become the Eldest Lady of the Jie Family

Oh my god, I found a treasure! First of all, the writing style. The weird and helpless feeling of entering the game is really real. Xiao Yu has no choice but to enter the game and becomes a chess piece. An ordinary person muddies the waters in the chess game and finally achieves his goal. Watch with your brain! The protagonist has his own path to take. Secondly, the relationship between brother and sister is really good. They go both ways. Xie Ziyang is willing to take poison and become mute for Xiao Yu. He is willing to plot for Xiao Yu Duo. Xiao Yu is also willing to join the game for his brother. In addition to the brother and sister, the characters of Wu Xie and Hua Ye are also very good. Everyone has their own way to go. And little brother, always remember to take Xiaoyu home, it's really good! All in all, it's a good-looking, non-relief fanfic about stolen writing. Xiaoyu and Wuxie both have their own paths to go, and gradually grow up as ordinary people. The little brother always remembered to take Xiaoyu home. Wuwuwuwuwuwuwu. Xiaoyu also rescued the little brother from the nursing home in advance.

The plot is quite interesting, unlike other novels on the market. You need to use your brain to understand it, and don't skip chapters. To put things in perspective, some of the content is vaguely CP-oriented. It was only after reading the comments that I realized that it was really corrupt (the book friend in the review said it was the author himself, but I couldn't find where the author said it. I apologize if there is any mistake). Although it was more or less felt in the writing, when I saw some comments saying that it was corrupt, I wanted to abandon the book for a moment [crying]. Especially for Black Flower, there are quite a lot of descriptions. In addition, there are also cp-directed remarks in the paragraphs and comments, and there are no warnings or signs in the copy in advance. For readers who are not addicted, the impression is quite average. The less star is for this. After reading more than 100 chapters, it ends here. Apart from this, there are basically no flaws. The author's writing style is very good [Blow kiss]

Dear friends, if you think Naodongjun's writing is good, please give me a five-star review. Thank you everyone. Your pursuit is the motivation for me to write. The Qinling chapter is about to end, and this book will try to be completed before the ten-year appointment of 2025. Compared with Sister Luo, who had cheats in Naodongjun's first Pirates of Writing fanfic and had an almost smooth journey, Xiaoyu is a very ordinary character in this world. She does not have unparalleled wisdom and strength, and can only overcome obstacles on her own. Many times in the story, when you are in danger, you can let other characters come to save you, but I thought about it carefully. Xie Ziyu is a powerful person, and he should be able to break through the darkness on his own. This is necessary for human growth. I believe that everyone does not like the setting of the protagonist who has someone to rescue him whenever he encounters danger. This is too abnormal. It is better to improve yourself than to rely on others. A better future is in our own hands.

After reading it in one breath, I felt like watching the water slowly turning in the Klein bottle. Xiaoyu and the characters in the original work are like parallel and occasionally intersecting fate lines. He neither loses himself in the interaction nor walks out of his complete life. Although this life is not perfect? But very complete. It's a bit regretful to read. This is not the most perfect ending, but it is the best ending Xiaoyu can choose.

I finished reading it in one sitting, it was really good. The writing is smooth, logical and interlocking. I haven't found such a delicious article on Tomato for a long time. It was very emotional to watch Xiaoyu all the way. Looking back on her life, it seemed like she had accomplished nothing. She couldn't save the people she wanted to save or stop the people she wanted to stop. But as a chess piece, she couldn't help herself, so she did the best she could. In the end, after thousands of sails, Xiao Yuer grew up into Sister Yu, and finally completed her mission. Those who try to play with time will eventually be played with by time. I really like what Xiaoyu said, "Time does not play a role in things, but it may not be the same for people." Repeated loops cannot change anything, but the bonds left behind each loop are indeed real. I like this article very much. I hope the author can write more extras [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart] Xiaoyu saves the patriarch, Xiaoyu is good. The patriarch takes Xiaoyu home. Hello, patriarch.

I like it. It feels like it writes Xiaoyu's experience from a realistic and natural perspective (for a stolen pen). Although the destiny of the protagonist is intertwined with that of the stolen pen, it is not intertwined. Maybe it is because I have read too many brainless fics before. The ending is bland and I see the protagonist again. There seems to be a touch of regret, but I suddenly realize that this is Xiaoyu's life. This is Xiaoyu as the protagonist. Like some fans, a new protagonist and a new perspective. Reality is not so catchy. Love does not have the upper hand in the process of self-adventure. Just think of our lives. One is searching, looking for external objects, looking for reasons, looking for confidants... But the most important thing is that the meaning of human existence, as me, is always trying to find myself.

The author's original plot has a little overlap with the main plot of the stolen pen. This book is really different from those that use the original stolen pen to make up the word count. The plot is very novel and super good-looking! ! ! Zhang Qiling can recognize and remember the little 🐟 in tears no matter where he is in time and space! I really want to know the story of Zhang Qiling and Xiao🐟's "go home" agreement.

This book is really, really good-looking, and it's my favorite type. You have to read it with your brain, and try not to read it at a glance, otherwise sometimes you really can't understand it. It can arouse the reader's emotions and make you immersed in the situation. The plot is also very, very coherent. It's a really great book, I hope the ending won't end badly.

The content is very thrilling and exciting. I feel that the transformation of the author's perspective and timeline is very smooth. Although there are many hidden clues, it does not affect the reading, but is fascinating! Moreover, this article does not contain many messy emotional lines like other fanfics, but instead focuses on exploring the secrets! The author's personal settings are also relatively complete! The protagonist is not too involved in the main line of the original text. It is more like a small world derived from the original text, but the connection is very close and intertwined with each other!

Family members, when reading this novel, you must use your brain to read it, otherwise you will not understand it, and you must not skip it. If you skip it, you will be confused [face covering] I can't stand it in my mind [face covering]

Update soon, I must know the relationship between Xiaoyu and Zhang Hailou Except for the front plot which is a bit mind-boggling, the rest is pretty good. I hope Xiaoyu can truly get the happiness he wants.

This book requires you to calm down and read it. It is different from most of the books on 🍅. It can be seen that the author is also a writer who can calm down and write. All language goes with the flow. I hope that he will not disappoint his expectations after reading it.

Ox! ! ! ! ! ! You must read this article with your brains in mind, family members! ! ! ! ! ! Nice! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

This is the determination of an ordinary person, and the journey of a compassionate and righteous person. The origin of the story is a regret, and the ending is a happy ending. The loop is a tempting bottomless abyss. Some people want to enter but can't find the entrance, and some people want to get out but can't find the exit. The loop itself is a loop without gaps, and running with all your strength will eventually lead you back to the starting point. This is the first time we have met countless times. This time we get to know each other again. My name is Lin Umbrella, the owner of a dessert shop.

It's very beautiful. The Qinling section scared me to death [laughs] Absolutely. I was stunned for a while after reading it. I know how to brush it twice. The author's writing is very profound and I can't understand many parts [I almost cried]

The writing is very interesting. The loop setting and those words reminded me of Xiuhu (). The writing style can be both plot and plot-oriented. I feel that the writing is much better than many stories about women dreaming about men. It can definitely earn a higher rating. Regarding cp, there is actually not much at all, or it can be said to be almost none. If you don't think about it specifically, you can't tell it at all.

Good looking Tortoiseshell's scenes are a lot weird, he's both good and evil, I'll take another look👀He's quite attractive

It's good-looking. It's different from poorly written fan copies. The author has written a new copy himself. The old stories and the new stories are very interesting. The author needs to keep updating, it's hard to see a fan who writes the plot seriously

It's well written. The heroine has her own mysteries to solve and her own adventures to go on, instead of playing a supporting role in someone else's adventure story. I just feel that there is too little written about the matter of looping back to the past. It could be expanded and written longer, but it is not enough.

It's great to write from a novel perspective. It's something you won't soon forget after watching it, unlike the old routine of following the main characters and plot. Five-star praise

Not bad, the remaining one star is because I am worried about corruption...

After reading it, I felt a little bloated.

It feels quite consistent with the original work, and the scary atmosphere feels quite similar to the original work. I have read so many fan fictions and I am really satisfied with this one.

It's very interesting, really. The stories are interlocking and make people want to watch it again. It's not watery at all, it's super logical, and there are many original plots. The original plots are very well written and very powerful.

The writing is very detailed, not OOC, does not denigrate the characters, is logical, and is very interesting. The premise is that you have to be smart [laughing]

It's good-looking, really good-looking. The setting is very novel. Most of Pirates and Ravens focus on the adventures of the Iron Triangle and the others based on the original ones, but this one is very different. It's really good-looking. But I really want to see the specific reactions of Wu Xie, Xiaohua, blind brother, Fatty, and others when they find out that Xiaoyu is still alive. Damn, let's make some extra stories [Blow a kiss]

It's beautiful and logical. Come on＾0＾~

The plot is very novel and very interesting.

Very nice, I like it very much

Well written, why is the rating so low [crying]