From the Start, I Became Dao Companions with the Female Emperor, and Now the Whole World Is Jealous

Author, have you also read Wang Wu Du Hun and Xiao Bing Tuo Zi [laughing evilly] The writing style seems to be

It's a decent book, the character descriptions are okay, but I feel that the emotional line between the male and female protagonists is a bit too fast, but it can still be seen that the author wants to write in a big way. Another point is that he hopes to describe the personalities of the male and female protagonists. If appropriate, you can add a male and female protagonist to enrich the plot. It feels a bit difficult to write about one person. If the outline is mainly written around the male and female protagonists, there is no need to write a male and female protagonist. I still hope that the author can write it well. After all, it is difficult to write a new book at the beginning. If it is not announced at the beginning, it will usually return to normal after more than 200 or 300 chapters. I feel that I can write more emotional lines between the male and female protagonists to deepen the bond. Zongmen is a novice village, and the next thing is important. After all, everything is difficult at the beginning. If you want to write a big story, you have to write details and foreshadowing. After all, the male and female protagonists go back in time and space together. There must be some tricks in the middle, that is, they need to be foreshadowed very early when writing. Another thing is that the skill of falling into dreams is too buggy. The male and female protagonists just ask the master to catch one to speed up their training. Isn't it almost invincible? There is still a need to fix the pitfalls. There must be a reason why the heroine is not killed by the male protagonist. After all, she is possessed by a demon. I hope to fix the pitfalls and the plot [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

The Thief is good-looking, and the interaction between the Demon King (the protagonist) and the Empress is sweet, and there are no bloody tricks in ordinary sweet novels. As for the malicious negative reviews in the comment area, you don't have to believe it. I read this book with a critical attitude after reading the negative reviews in the comment area. I saw the latest progress and couldn't read enough. I hope the author will do more. It's good-looking, but it's not enough. @Guagua Congratulations 🔥, the author's writing is really good. It's quite sweet and doesn't have all kinds of formulas. The content is quite novel and very interesting.

It's a good-looking, funny and nonsensical type, so in fact, there are some logical flaws and minor flaws in many places, but to be honest, it doesn't hurt. After all, this book is indeed a comedy, haha [face covering] Every time I see Wang Guan and Wang Shuang, they were deceived by the male protagonist into changing their surname to "Lu" - please replace Wang with Lu and read the names of these two guys again and you will know... So, every time their names appear, I want to laugh hahahaha [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] In addition, it is a single female protagonist. The male protagonist, Xiao Chunan, and the female protagonist, a silly goose, are so cute. They are a perfect match, haha. In addition, as long as all you pretty boys and girls know that the system of male and female protagonists is actually Demon Lord Lu (male protagonist) in the previous life, you will know how evil it is, haha. The idiot Xiao Yueyue was tricked by her "old rival" from her previous life into attacking her [sneaky laugh]

It may be a little hard to accept watching two people playing riddles at first, but once the male and female protagonists solve the misunderstanding when the male protagonist is about to die, the content after that will be very interesting. I highly recommend it!

Funny, good-looking, with wide descriptions, detailed descriptions, and true feelings. Most people will praise it after watching it. It is very good-looking. I recommend everyone to watch it.

It's okay. I also saw Fanshu in Huangqie. It's quite interesting. Come on, come on. I didn't see much progress before. I took care of it for a while. Now I'm back to take a look. Come on.

My name is Xiaoci. I thought Guagua's book would be a hit, but it turned out to be a hit [cool]

If you lie, you will count as one

I can only rate it very well, both in terms of the relationship between the male and female protagonists and the fun of chatting. I have read a lot of novels, except for the famous ones, I have only seen 4 novels that I felt good about, and I personally think this one is one of the most interesting among the sweet novels, but it is a pity that it ended so soon, but I personally feel that although there are some problems, the characters of the male and female protagonists can be brought into the next book. I hope it will not disappoint those of us who really like this book.