A Smile, a Slender Life; Peace and Joy for Sui Sui
一笑纤生，穗穗平安
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 330k Words
- Genre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
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In booklists 9
How Many Tomato Novels Based on Starving Corpses: The Long Journey in the Late Ming Are There Now?
Looking for books similar to "Man Sui: A Nine-Year Promise".
I’ve Been Hooked on The Hungry Lamb, and Now I Want to Read About Rebellion
I'd like to read books similar to . Preferably something featuring famine and rebellion against the Qing dynasty.
I’m Hooked on The Starving Lamb. Looking for Rebellion Stories Featuring Sui’er
Looking for Fanfiction for The Hungry Lamb: Traveling Through the Late Ming Dynasty
Mansui: “Have you ever seen what stars look like when they shatter?” Liang: “My name is A Liang. The Liang in ‘utterly without conscience.’”
Looking for The Hungry Famine. The Protagonist Shouldn't Be Liang, and Man Sui Should Be the Sole Female Lead
Looking for books like "The Starved: A Skiff’s Journey Among the Living". Please, not a protagonist like Liang.
Any Extra-Sweet The Starving Lamb Fanfiction?
Preferably a continuation with the same-lives ending, though other endings are fine too. I have been emotionally destroyed by a game's story these past few days and hope to recover a little, so I do not really care about character OOC or anything like that. As long as it is sweet, even artificial sugar is fine. Liang Sui and He must get married! 😭
Please Recommend Sheep the Lambs Fanfiction! I Really Want Wan Sui! Sui Sui Is So Cute~
Any Novels Featuring Man Sui? Other Apps Are Fine Too
Looking for books similar to Starving: Only Good? Divine Might!
Want to Read About the Zhu Family Playing Starvation and Famine
Reader comments 2
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Overall, the pros far outweigh the cons! It can be given 4.95 Points out of 5 points! Let's talk about the advantages first: the author's control over emotions is very unique, and the characterization of emotional plots and expressions is very profound, and the background and plot are also something I didn't expect (the relationship between death from hunger and family conflicts, which I really haven't thought about) is very close to reality, and the characterization of each character is very good. So it can be seen that the author put a lot of thought into it, which must be praised (´∀`) Let's talk about the shortcomings: (This is just my personal opinion, please refer to it) First, the overall framework is not clear enough. The various stories do not seem to be connected in series now, which gives people a feeling of being in a fog. Originally, the love story between Shengsheng and Sui suddenly escalated to family conflicts and Internet culture. Of course, the reasons for the occurrence of the story have also been mentioned, but the change is too fast and it will still make people uncomfortable. Secondly, people often say that when things go to extremes, they must be reversed. Excessively describing the disadvantages of reality will make the article appear depressing, which will destroy the reader's interest in reading. After all, I've been stabbed once, and if I'm suppressed again, wouldn't I be asking for trouble~ So the author can slightly reduce the amount of depression in the future, and the joys and sorrows will be beneficial to each other (*^▽^*) Summary: The author works hard, but the readers don't buy it ~_~ (face covering and laughing) (⌒▽⌒)
It looks addictive, it doesn't push the relationship irritably, and it doesn't lack necessary emotional expression. The whole plot is well written, not bad.