I Spend My Days Leisurely in the Paradise of Cave, No One Knows That I Am a True Immortal

Speechless [laughing awkwardly] [laughing awkwardly]

The outline of the article is neither cluttered nor cluttered, it is written slowly, clearly organized and well written. But the foreshadowing in the early stages was a bit awkward. Murong Bai, the original white fox, had blood-red glasses and lived in a ruined temple. There was no follow-up. When I first saw it, I thought going to the county town was an illusion. Who would have thought that it was just a feint. Then there is the part about wood carving, where there is only cause and no effect. Then Master Chen didn't have any visit on the way. When he fled, he only searched for a few months before giving up. Although he later came to Nanhai Xuanhu Jishi to make up for it, after all, it was a bit short. Next is Qingsong Laodao, who cut off the main character's back and temporarily stabilized his injury but had no intention of going back to look for it. This is also very awkward here. After seeing the latest 45 chapters, even if I tried to make up for it, I ended up falling behind. On the whole, it's all about receiving favors from others, with no reward in return. Just for the sake of the new book, no points will be deducted to encourage you, so keep up the good work.

After reading three chapters, I vomited🤮

I don't know what you mean by having no point. It's a waste of time