游戏降临，欢迎来到灵月大陆

It's okay, there are just a few things that feel weird. Lin Mengyuan is only five years old, how does she understand or understand that melon? Then there's the maid's place "Miss, do you want to go back now? Your father will come over later." If I remember correctly, this should be an ancient cultivator. It would be inappropriate to call him father here. Should I say he is the patriarch or something? Uh, but it can also be said that she is afraid that the heroine will not know who the patriarch is, so she just talks about her father. Also, shouldn't a maid follow the person she serves? The heroine and her friends went out for a walk, and the maid stopped there, waiting for the heroine and the others to come back. Isn't it wrong? Even if they are mistresses, they go to places that maids cannot enter, but maids can still wait outside. Uh, or is there some part I didn't see? I don't read books very carefully. That's all I've seen so far. If you have any questions, I'll add more later. How come these single spiritual roots, double spiritual roots, three spiritual roots, and five element spiritual roots are all at the third level of Qi refining after three years of cultivation? So what is the difference? Although the purity is relatively high, the amount of your spiritual roots has nothing to do with your cultivation speed, right? If there is no difference, why should we divide it like this? Wouldn't it be better to divide it according to purity? That Treasure Pavilion always feels weird. Why are you called because you are from the Foundation Establishment family? Wouldn't it be better if you said it is because you are from the Lin family? Original text: While the two were fighting for it, the auction price of the golden spiritual wood also reached the price of 50,000 low-grade spiritual stones. "40,000 Low-grade spiritual stones in private room No. 6!" "40,000 Low-grade spiritual stones for the second time in Private Room No. 6!" Huh? Fifty thousand becomes forty thousand? Change it, author

When will the game come to reality?

It's okay and pretty, but it's a bit bland and lacking. The protagonist also needs to practice fighting skills. Otherwise, when other players come up from the bottom to kill the protagonist, they won't dare to practice killing each other. The system's presence is too low. I hope to add more drama. Upgrade and upgrade to add more functions.

It's quite abstract. Now it's called the Lin Family's Foundation Building Family. If you want to break through to the Golden Pill Family, you should go to a family called the Lin Family's Golden Pill Family.

Like this! It feels like it will be very long, and the plot seems to have just begun, but after the reality is known, the plot may speed up, right? But I really like this kind of slowly unfolding plot. I like the upgrade. I hope to cultivate immortality step by step.

Can the author describe more about the fighting actions, skill special effects, scenes, etc. Every time the screen starts, the battle is over. I don't know whether I am strong or weak, or how much I have consumed. I only know whether I won or lost.

It should be my favorite type, but after reading fourteen chapters, I felt an indescribable weird feeling

The plot is good, but the writing is a little rough in the early stages. Come on, the author.

Why is the rating so low? It's a very good novel. It's a very new novel.

The question is novel and I look forward to the follow-up!

I like this article, but where did the author go? Why did he stop updating? ᓫ(°⌑°)ǃ Author, if you dig a hole and don't fill it, your conscience won't hurt. Come back soon.

It's so good that I watched it in one sitting, but it's not fat enough

It's very interesting. I'm very satisfied with it. I hope the author will update it soon. I recommend everyone to read it.

Come on! Very interesting, first time watching this type of female protagonist.

The plot is reasonable and the plot is exciting

After reading so many comments, I don't know if I can watch it (hesitant). Can anyone tell me if I can watch it? I've read the comments many times, so I'm hesitant.

Very nice, good luck to the author

Very beautiful, very beautiful

Good-looking, good-looking, really good-looking It feels very good, but the final update is very slow. I hope it won't be eunuch. Although there is a section in between that is not very good, but I feel that the foreshadowing at the end should be good. I hope the author will stick to it, or he will continue with a different name.

This is nice to look at, but a little weird at the back. I look forward to the development of the following articles, and also look forward to the author recommending some better similar articles.

Okay, it's quite interesting. Come on with this plot.

It looks great and the setting is interesting. Why isn't it updated?

It's quite interesting and I could read it in one sitting! ! !