Arknights: Broken, I Became a Descendant of the Red Dragon

Praise the author, just because you are the first novel writer to take notice of me, then I must follow this book to the end. Unfortunately, very few people will read it tomorrow. This book is also very good. Shennong has helped you taste and read this book. There are almost no poisonous points. It is a very high-quality Arknights novel. The content is also very interesting, and I am looking forward to it very much. I hope the author can write more about the following plot, [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [laughing] [laughing]

Five stars for encouragement. Let's talk about the shortcomings first: The content of the first part is too procrastinating. For example, in the chapter about saving Frost Star, the protagonist is already nearby. Why not save him? In terms of performance, the protagonist's strength at that time can be regarded as a back-and-forth with the inner guards. It shouldn't be difficult to escape from the wolves and the bear with Frost Star, right? And it was still very confusing at the time (it does not rule out that the author just wanted to improve the word count [you can read it carefully]) Secondly, some places can be said to be well thought out, but it feels awkward to write. For example, the part that leads to Alina. I know that the author wrote that because they are all integrated sports, Alina is not particularly wary and still goes to see pregnant women. But what about the sentry? Shouldn't the sentry ask about it? Then the next two ordinary infected people can run past the shield guard with just a smoke bomb. If the ordinary infected people are replaced by people in the opponent's army disguised, it doesn't feel so far-fetched (I think we can add the two traitors to kill them) There are only so many shortcomings in Chapter 40. As for whether it is boring or not, it all depends on the person. I personally think it is quite interesting. Advantages: First, the description of the environment is excellent, and the text is also interspersed with content that will make you smile knowingly after playing the game, which is a bonus. Second, the description of the fight is super strong. This one is really well written and it's totally enjoyable to watch. The creation of the third character is at least not OOC so far, and there may be fewer characters, but I think this is the most important thing for a fan writer. The fourth chapter is very well written. It seems that the author wants to give Chen a separate line, especially when it comes to the giant beasts. Can we look forward to the story of Yanguo F4 and the giant beasts later [please take a closer look] In short, it seems that the author is a new writer, and this is the first chapter of this article. It is not bad. I am looking forward to the following chapters. (Can you please write more about Tallulah and Alina's sweets [you taste carefully] [you taste carefully] [you taste carefully])

Let me talk about the conclusion first. This novel is extremely versatile and has strong countermeasures. Overall, its strength is super~big~cup.

I haven't commented yet after reading this. I think most book friends who have looked for fan fiction know the common criticism of fan fiction, which is that the logic and rigor are seriously lacking. At present, it seems that the author has tried his best to fit the framework of the original world view. The content and logic are very reasonable, which is half the battle. This is a very good and excellent article. But the author, your story seems almost boring to read. After thinking about it, there should be too little foreshadowing. Although we know the original work and know what will probably happen, the author must treat us as if we don't know the original story and revise and supplement the original plot (I have given you the reasons for hydrology, but you are not sure?). This incident happened suddenly, and the character suddenly came to the island. Even if we know why, we still feel disconnected. Everyone should have read the novel "The Tragic Life of Arknights". It is excellent because its perspective is not only on the protagonist, but the supporting characters account for half of the novel. You can clearly feel the butterfly effect caused by the arrival of the protagonist, and how much tragedy has been changed even if it was not caused subjectively by the protagonist. For example, before something important happens to the protagonist or during a break in the story, talk about how the integration movement changed for the protagonist during the protagonist's absence? How to carry it forward and change the fate of infected people? Small stories like Enoch and Sasha Red Knife can all have good endings according to your ideas. You must be stuck. When you run out of ideas, write about what happened elsewhere, lay some groundwork, and then fill in the gaps. I wish there could have been a better author writing Terra's story

It's good to read. I haven't seen any bad points in this book so far. The characters are very vivid. It's my favorite among So Porridge's new books that I've read. I hope I can stick with it. (I hope there will be a single female protagonist [please update])

Five-star praise The plot is very reasonable, and the characters are basically intact. The characters such as Wei Caoshuangxing also add to the author's personal understanding, making the characters more three-dimensional. These alone are enough for me to support 128 What follows are suggestions Part of the plot of the fight against Cosiche is a little confusing, and I feel that the outline is not very clear. I hope that the outline of the subsequent plot will be clearer and more reasonable. Another point is to recommend more land tours and more files on prts. You will have a deeper understanding of the Terran worldview and the styles, politics, and relationships of each country. Also, if you want to make the description more immersive, you can use more land animals and objects in the Terran worldview, such as twister, D32 steel, beasts of burden, claw beasts, sand beasts, etc. Overall very good! ! Please add more By the way, is there a group? (Ehehe)

Very good, this book is particularly suitable for multiple female protagonists, but it would be better to write less emotional scenes, or skip them.

So sweet, I like the Red Dragon sisters the most [Adoration]

Wei Cao Kitchen is a must-read. It has the sweet daily life of the male protagonist and Wei Cao, as well as the exciting online battle where the male protagonist "enlightens" his IQ and doubles his IQ. The only problem is that the author is too busy. He will only update two chapters in about ten days or a week.

If you want to watch a battle that is exciting, you can leave. If you want to watch pure love, you can stay. There is no invincibility, no Shura field, and no protagonist who pretends to be stupid emotionally.

The author has writing skills as well as ideas. The plot is also clearly written, and the images and relationships are handled well. Although this book is still quite suitable for multiple female protagonists, the dual female protagonists still slightly lowered the score in my heart, but it is still five stars. After all, it is also a masterpiece among Tomato Ark articles.

It's pretty good. Although I don't know why the score is so low, I think it's better than many high-scoring Ark novels.

How awesome! I can't find a second novel about the dual heroines of Death Mang and Wei Cao. If this one disappears, I'll really have nothing to read. Come on! Great for writing a book!

It's really good stuff, but I always feel like, um, it's not very satisfying. It just feels weird and doesn't make sense, but it's really well written. It's mainly because I don't like reading it, but the whole article isn't that bad [OK]

Wei Cao single heroine The writing is quite good, and all the knives in the game plot have been removed.

Come on, I'm optimistic about you [laughs]

It's well written and I like it very much. I have a personal understanding of the plot of Ark. Let's see how the original main plot is dealt with in the follow-up.

Is this doctor guaranteed to be cooked?

It took me so long to remember it, and I haven't rated it yet.

Support the new book! !

The future is bright, come on

Come on, big brother who writes books

Needless to say great!

Satisfies all my fantasies about Wei Cao fan fiction [Thoughts]

It's pretty good. Good luck to the author, but it's a bit lacking.

I don't know how long it's been since I've read such a pure and uplifting novel [face covering]

The subject matter is good, at least I don't see any big surprises yet.

One of the best Ark creations, the characters are clear and the writing is delicate, and the plot leaves no regrets.

May I ask the author, when will our Ph. D.

Isn't the introduction about two heroines, where is Shimang [I'm about to cry]