Slytherin's Desperate Lady

Among the HP fanfics I have read, this is one of my favorites. Among the four houses of Hogwarts, I always feel that Slytherin is a sad house. Because there was a careless senior, none of the characters who appeared had a happy ending. Therefore, when reading fan fiction, I prefer to read fan fiction of Slytherin characters. Of course, my favorite is Sect, and then Draco. I rarely see Nott. In fact, I don't have much of an impression of this original character. What I know about him is almost all from fan fiction. The author's part about Nott is really well written. The paranoid and struggling Nott is very vivid, and the image of Nott immediately became full in my mind. Draco's extra story, surprisingly, started after the war. This character, in the original work, is a bit hated. He can't be a simple good person, nor can he be completely bad. In the early stage, he was innocent and protected by his parents, but the false beauty was torn to pieces by Voldemort. There was no transition. He was forced to become a qualified Malfoy immediately, but his heart was tortured and torn. Therefore, after the war, this slowly healing extra chapter is particularly heartwarming. My favorite Sri Lankan teacher, strange to say, I like the Sri Lankan teacher in the fanfic more than the original work, probably because the original work is all about the protagonist group. In fact, there is something I haven't noticed, that is, when the professor is interested in the heroine, it is probably the accumulation of ordinary relationships, the emotion ferments over time, and finally explodes. I like the author's great arrangements. If words can create a world, I am really happy that the professor is loved like this. Finally, thumbs up, big, big, big [like].

Very good writing. The male protagonist is Professor Snape, Potions Master, the youngest professor at Hogwarts and Head of Slytherin. He is also very powerful in spells and created his own magic weapon. (I feel like I am a strong person. I personally like Professor Snape not because of his love for Lily, but because he is strong and can do potions and curses. I would also like Lao Fu if he had some sense. Unfortunately, he lost his brain after fixing Horcruxes and then became known as Avada. Bella is also good, but her madness is a bit extreme.) Xiaoduo and Xiaolong are young, their friendship is well written, and Slytherin's friendship is also very sincere. The twins fit in well with the original setting in any fanfic. Seid is still alive as of this writing. Hermione is a very smart and studious little witch (but I don't like her liberating the elves in the original book. Personally, I feel that the elves are the same as the goblins. The goblins had a rebellion before, but after the elves were liberated... It's hard to say) Ron's mouth is really redundant (his mouth is really unpleasant in the original book and the movie, he doesn't seem to be able to speak well, oh, yes, Professor Snape also has a poisonous tongue ┑(￣Д ￣)┍ Well, Harry... He has Lily's eyes) I'm looking forward to the post-war life written by the author, it's sweet.

The author said that the heroine did not revolve around the three generations of children, but she got along with and helped as a friend. It was very good. After watching it, I felt that there were less emotional scenes with Sijiao than with Theo Nott. Although I am a Sijiao fan, after watching it, I became more and more attracted to Meibao and Nott. , The writing is very delicate and makes people feel comfortable to read. Sister Bao is a very gentle person. I especially like this kind of intellectual heroine. She warms everyone like the warm sun in winter. If I were a friend of Sister Bao, I would be as lucky as Draco to have such a friend. No one is dissatisfied with this article, I really like it.

It's a very interesting HP fanfic. Draco's early annoying character and Snape's poisonous tongue are well restored. I like it very much! A lot of fanfic is too OOC. Occasionally a few episodes would embarrass me, but it doesn't hurt! Because the emotions and characterization are all coherent and very vivid, it won't make you feel uncomfortable or hard to swallow when reading. Especially the part where he constantly corrects Draco's bad temper is wonderful. Draco is such a proud and bad-tempered person but he is not a purely bad person at heart. Snape's emotional changes are also reasonable and gradual. Instead of being bowed down, that would be too evil... Overall, it's a great novel. It was very enjoyable to read it in one sitting. The rating should be 9 or higher. It's better than many HP fics I've read.

This label deceived me. It was not sweet at all. It made me cry to death. It was full of glass shards. It was so cruel, but I have to admit that it looks good...

The writing is very good, the plot is exciting and fascinating, but what makes me unhappy is that there are too many descriptions of Draco and Theo after the heroine loses her memory, and it makes me feel that the heroine is always surrounded by men, and they have nothing to do but accompany the heroine's licking The image of a dog (not that serious, I exaggerated a bit, but it's just the underlying truth) and squeezed out the description of the relationship between Snape and Snape. Snape should have the most painful and joyful reaction, but it ended up being arranged for the two of them, which made me feel a bit strange. However, I really like the author's interweaving of humor and cruelty. Overall, I had a pretty good experience!

This book is really different. Unlike other HP novels, the world begins to change as soon as it enters the world. The heroine of this book hopes that everything can continue on the original track. She has always been a very cold person, but he met many friends here, and then he decided to change the story. It's a little sad, but it's very interesting [shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy]

This is a heroine who is unwilling to change the direction of the story. Her entanglement and love for the characters are very well portrayed. This is an ordinary heroine. She has great energy but an ordinary mentality. It is really heartbreaking. It's very interesting, really very interesting. I cried from beginning to end. Maybe it's because I like this world very much and also like the characters in it, so I can understand the heroine's psychology of wanting to save them, as well as her sadness and unwillingness to not be able to save everyone. The heroine has always been worried that her butterfly wings will affect the progress of the main plot. Her anxiety and uneasiness under pressure are really well portrayed! Total empathy! I cried to death! The relationship between Si Jiao and Si Jiao developed slowly and gradually. Si Jiao's heartbeat was attracted by the heroine's personality charm through repeated observations. I have to say that the heroine is indeed very attractive. Even if she is described as having an ordinary appearance, her character is enough to attract me. Ah, ah, ah, I know how to write more! I cried to death!

I didn't expect the heroine to be straightforward, decisive, and not sloppy. Something happened yesterday, but she directly resisted today. It's great. It's the character I like. The three views are very three-dimensional, and the overall description of the article is very good. When the heroine died in the end, I almost cried to death, but she didn't die in the end. As for Snape's inner transformation, I think it's a bit blunt, and they get together in a confused way. I actually don't like this kind of thing. I think it's best for the story to end when the heroine dies at the climax of the story, because I feel that things are impermanent, and change will have a price, which is a bit forced to complete. But overall it's pretty good. This is just my one-sided understanding. Everyone is welcome to read it. It's worth your money.

Very good, I have read a lot of fics, but it is rare to mention Harry's plot in one go, because I have read many fics with a lot of repetitions. The original heroine is about the story of the heroine. The heroine I want to watch is just a butterfly, quietly fluttering its wings to change the ending of be, but not interfering too much with the story of the original plot character, and watching the heroine's power.

The first few chapters may be a bit fast-paced, but the later chapters are much better. ... Well, the content so far is quite good, but it's too little. I hope there will be more content in the future. It's not enough.

I was a little nervous to review a book for the first time. This book is the second book I really like on Tomato. The plot is compact and not procrastinating. The foreshadowing is also very good and can be matched. The most important thing is that all the characters in this book are very three-dimensional. Everyone is dual-sided. This is a good interpretation of the original work. I hope the author will continue to work hard. @MintTeaRabbitYa The author is great! Go, go, go! ! !

Didn't you say this is He? Why is there such a big knife in the middle [crying]... My wife's writing style is really good, forgive me for my poor brain that cannot come up with such beautiful sentences. Everyone in this book can be empathized with, so everyone's experiences are sad. The cruelty of war and the involuntary control of the people involved are all written out. The heroine did not intend to get involved at first, but after she developed feelings, she really felt a sense of powerlessness, "I am standing at the end of the story, watching them go to their own ending." Because the author has been laying the groundwork, it also gives readers a feeling of "we are standing at the end of the story, watching her move towards the ending she arranged by herself." Fortunately, the ending was rewritten. It is really great. She is like the sun, warming many people. Although the ending is happy, everyone in this process was so heartbroken [crying] It feels like it doesn't matter who the heroine is with later on. Everyone has their own character arc. It's so well written.

"Slytherin's Desperate Lady" Mint Tea Rabbit Teeth Not bad, nice looking. 1. I was really surprised that the heroine was so cruel to me. 2. Maybe it's because I just finished the exam and couldn't think straight [shy], and I couldn't read some parts smoothly [laughing and crying].

It feels like the author wants to add a lot of elements, but each one is written in a big way. It is about the East, new spells, magic riots, Nicoléme, rebirth and amnesia. It is like a collection of many fanfics I have read. The author may prefer sadomasochism and deliberately arranged misunderstandings in the middle stage (personally I think Legilimency is very abrupt here). In the later stage, he wrote a lot of the professor's pursuit and public confession, which just crashed for me. Finally, he muddle-headedly filled in Li's pit and ended it. But I really like the friendship between the protagonist and Draco. In fact, it's okay not to write about the professor's ban because friendship is pure and not all friendships of the opposite sex should be mixed with liking. It looks like the author may want to write about a heartthrob but then remembered to write about the main CP, so he made up for it. I feel that sometimes the progress is too fast, and in some places the progress is too slow. It feels a bit pretentious to force the beauty and misery. I feel that the author is very hesitant and contradictory, and even sometimes the left and right brains are fighting each other. But in general, everything that needs to be filled in has been filled in. Some of the unclear passages may be because I read it too fast and didn't think about it, but the author's thoughts on the world sometimes are worth reading carefully. I hope everyone will have their own new life and live happily in the book world.

It is rare for Si Jiao to take the initiative in writing, and it is rare for Si Jiao to read well. I feel that Si Jiao is no longer the one-sided, mean-tongued, greasy big bat, but a real living person with his own emotions and ideas. Like it. The heroine has a great personality and does not participate in the protagonist group. The campus content is lively and interesting, the emotions are delicate, the content is smooth, and the buffs are full. It's just that the heroine is so miserable, she must be fucked Second brush, the heroine is really miserable

The front looks very, very nice! Up until the final battle, everything was very interesting. I really liked the heroine's character and way of doing things. She was very gentle and mature. I thought it was the most interesting Sri Lankan novel I have ever read (of course I didn't read a lot, I read all the popular ones). However, after the battle, I may not be able to accept the professor's bald head and the wife-chasing crematorium. I feel that the author's logic is OK, but I just feel aggrieved [crying]. Other cool articles are often OOC, so I was a little worried at the end of this one but still give it a five-point rating!

It's quite sad~ I only torture the heroine~ The changes in the heroine's temperament are always uncomfortable to watch. The plot and writing are okay and the characters can be watched, but it must be tiring and uncomfortable~ It's really sad that the heroine and the professor are not talkative~ It was only when they were together in the end that they felt a little sweeter, but not enough~ The last ending was both satisfactory and uncomfortable~ Sigh~

The pacing and writing are quite good, but a large part of the story is quite depressing after the beginning. It becomes more relaxed and cheerful towards the end, but it also becomes very outrageous, such as Snape becoming the Minister of Magic. . . In addition, I don't know if this counts as an otome-oriented one. Both Nott Malfoy and Snape can be the male protagonists. In fact, the four of them should be quite harmonious together [face-covering][face-covering][face-covering]

I really love this book. Although the author doesn't have any particularly gorgeous rhetoric, the story is described very smoothly. It's already a top-notch work in my opinion.

A good book full of ups and downs. I never read it before because of its title. Many people said it was sad in the middle, but I thought it was okay. Maybe it was because I watched it after it was finished. I knew there was a good ending in the end, so the middle was a process and necessary emotional and plot advancement, so I wasn't sad. The hostess is very good, and she is not as good as an all-inclusive nanny. She does everything from her own heart and explores her own inner struggles. The writing is also pretty good, I'm not a novice, it's pretty good. The emotional line is light, and the later part is a bit weird. The middle part of the whole story is the best, and the part where the heroine goes crazy is more interesting and interesting.

I've watched nearly half of it and I think it's good. It's clearly organized, logical, and progressive. Shouldn't I just keep reading? I have very high standards for reading, and I can't stand any nonsense.

The heroine went from watching calmly and staying aloof to being forced into the situation, turning her hands to make clouds and rain in just one thought. The heroine has strong magical power. When she is crazy, she is really crazy, cruel and evil, but she has a really cute appearance at ordinary times. The sad point is that the heroine was injured three times, but it was basically planned by herself. The heroine has a strong heart and will not do unnecessary things.

Generally speaking, this book is very good, but I have read too many other fanfics about the heroine's descriptions of love and love. After reading too much, I read this kind of fanfic for the first time. I was a little uncomfortable with the character of the heroine, and there was no description of the heroine's heartbeat in the early stage. So it was awkward for me to read, but overall, the author's logic was very good, and I liked the overall plot. I didn't like the extras very much, but I still finished reading it. The next step is to try another book written by the author. I hope it will be good as well.

It's pretty good. I think it ranks among the top among SS fans. A period of calm and a period of rough waves I won't accept others abusing the heroine. If the heroine is cruel to herself, I'll feel good about it. I don't quite get Nott, and I think the cb with Draco is good (although I think it would be better without the ban) In fact, I have always been indifferent to Dumbledore's ending (referring to the fan), but I think Deng's writing of this movie is very cute (double meaning), and I am a little reluctant to let it go. Of course, he is also active in the portraits later on. And the writing about Gryffindor is pretty good and upright, and it won't make you angry (if you read it, I clearly feel that the author likes Gryffindor, but the writing is annoying and stupid) The only uncomfortable point after reading it is that the third person pronouns of Snape throughout the text are all "Professor Snape/Dean/Minister/Principal", which is a bit uncomfortable to watch. There are also some places where the pronouns are a bit confusing, but you can ignore it and I don't think it's a big problem. (Only read the main text without reading the extras, just my personal opinion) I missed a little bit, I think Snape is a bit too gentle. Then the heroine is either very calm or very crazy. I remember there seemed to be a book review saying this.

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I love all three of them very much [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] Liz has endured too much in her short life of more than ten years. She keeps reminding herself to love herself because she has already subconsciously cared about others [crying] [crying] Sister Bao is so good [crying] [crying] [crying] I feel sorry for Theodore in the text, but I came at a bad time. He is really good, but his fate was doomed from the beginning. He was the first person to see Liz [crying][crying][crying]

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I borrowed the outline of the original work but did not borrow the content of the original work. It feels like a hidden thread in the original story. Tell the story from another perspective. Some of the changes in the heroine are driven by the plot, but more of them are like something that happened before. If she doesn't break out in silence, she will perish in silence. The last episode has the most normal character of the heroine

It's super beautiful and the writing is super good. It's one of the few good articles I've ever read.