Magic Travel: Flowers Bloom on the Other Side

Just judging this novel based on the concept of "fanfiction", the author's writing style is among the best among all the fans I have read. The judgment of writing style involves many factors rather than words like some female videos. The understanding of the original work, the narrative ability, the control of the story, the development of the world view, etc. Are among the stronger ones in the ranks of fanciers. This "stronger" is my objective evaluation. If it is subjective, this is a qualified fanfic in my mind. Even if it is discussed objectively, it belongs to the category of excellent works. The last time I felt this way was when I watched "Dragon: Restarting Life". Compared with the original work, this book has a really high status in my heart. In short, I love reading it, and I plan to include it as one of my masterpieces. Of course, this review contains a lot of subjective factors, so it can be treated as a piece of music. If you don't like it, just read a few chapters and leave. The only drawback is that there may be problems with grammatical typos, but after all, everything is not perfect. This flaw is just like the original God before the Xumi version, and it is the kind of positive feedback that outweighs the negative feedback. All in all, book lovers who like fan fiction can give this book a try. In my opinion, it is only a matter of time before this book gets a score of 9.5, And it may even have a chance to enter the realm of excellent works with a score of 9.5. Taking back some of the above statements, this is no longer about entering the realm of masterpieces in 9.5, But about challenging the realm of gods in 9.7...

There are no big problems except that the update is slow. It can be regarded as top-grade. The author is very self-aware of himself, so he writes very carefully. There aren't many emotional scenes, but at least they aren't explosive. What follows are some tips. 1. The male protagonist's hang-ups include the demon part, his own body part, and the swordsmanship part. Demon - probably will be evolved in the future, but if possible, whether it is to be a grandfather, make friends, or something that can be used to cheat, it is quite said. It can also increase the coolness. 2. It's a matter of character. Writing novels is about selling character, and writing about character is about having a good story. You can try to learn how to quickly create a character. After reading the whole book, I basically didn't have a deep impression. However, Shuiyou's sentence "I am just like Qin" made a deep impression on me. 4. The problem of depression is that I have always felt that the protagonists of current online novels are those who suffer small losses and avenge big ones. But the plot of the protagonist being so-called manipulated... Is a bit uncomfortable. I just hope that I can fight back later. And I definitely can't be the Holy Mother. Just leave your forgiveness to God. I am only responsible for sending you to see God. 4. Come on, author

As a very small fan of Witch Journey, it is already very good. The writing is smooth throughout, the logic is self-consistent, and the character image of the Witch is well restored, without any poisonous points. However, because the male protagonist is a naughty person, this book is not so much a story about a female protagonist as a story about a single male protagonist (manual dog head). Therefore, this book actually focuses more on Irena. The changes in the male protagonist are very subtle, or there is no particularly intuitive feeling. And because of the character of the male protagonist, this book is destined to be a slow-burn novel, so those who like fast food literature can just quit.

Perfect fan work. Whether it is the expansion of the world view or the restoration and understanding of the original characters and plots, there is no violation at all. It almost perfectly intersperses the character of the protagonist and adds a fitting world view. The character of the male protagonist is also very good, full and full of personality. Moreover, the encounter with Irena is also very smooth, with no sense of violation at all. While maintaining her original character, the development of the plot is also extremely natural and reasonable. The author is really suitable for some fanfics! Mouth melon! It has become a state where I will die if I don't read novels! 😭

I still like this book very much. After reading this book, I am ready to read the original work (I don't like the second dimension). The protagonists of this book are the original male protagonists Qin and Irena. There are many original works in the book (no magic modifications), and many of the original works are for the plot. The plot of the book is not procrastinating, the writing is also very good, and the narrative method is novel (perhaps this is the case in the original work). The characters in the book are very individual. In my personal opinion, the author is better at psychological description. The main theme of the whole book is relaxed and cheerful (roughly that is what it means). There are many jokes in it, and the author also plays some jokes. When writing about the love affair between the male and female protagonists, it is also natural and harmonious (not given for free), logical, and has a lot of details and foreshadowing. Anyway, it is well written. Of course, I hope you can read it patiently. Some things in the book seem to be flaws, but in fact there are explanations later. Moreover, no one is a saint, how can he be without fault? Some small mistakes are actually normal, and there is no need to make such fine deductions. In addition, this is actually only the author's second book, so the requirements do not need to be so high. Reading novels is just for fun, but if you study them as knowledge, you will lose (personal opinion). I really like this book, and I hope it becomes popular (because I am just a student, and I am short of money, so I can't give any substantial support). Finally, I wish the author a Happy New Year!

A masterpiece. When reading this book, I feel like I felt when I read "The Witch's Journey". It makes people calm down and fully immerse themselves in the story. The rhythm of the narrative is particularly comfortable [Blow kiss] [Like]

It's okay, the writing is good, the plot design is a bit immature, and it's a bland and slow-burning type. The Witch's Journey is a combination of many short stories. The nature of fairy tales and fables is indeed very novel, but the connection of the main lines is still not obvious and prominent enough. In addition, the length of various places and countries is different, so it is a bit light and scattered. Maybe it would be better to add more obscure foreshadowing and foreshadowing to the short stories. The emotional line is still on the weak side, Irena goes from realizing her feelings to expressing her feelings a bit quickly, and although the male protagonist is dull, there is almost no description of his interactions and reactions to Irena's offensive. Even if it is about making a lot of contrasting efforts because the male protagonist does not understand love, it is much better. After all, two-way love is meaningful and sweeter. Hope to keep up the good work.

To be honest, this is one of the few books that Tomato wants to update. I personally like this type of book. It is probably the kind where the male protagonist is emotionally flawed and the female protagonist is disdainful. The most important thing is that the female protagonist has more scenes. It really suits my taste perfectly. This is my first book review on Tomato. By the way, book friends, can you recommend more books of this type? Other platforms are also welcome [Love]

There is no book that makes me burst into tears halfway through reading it. Maybe it's because of Irena. The smooth and smooth writing shocked me. This is the first time I have commented on a book like this. When you put yourself into the perspective of the protagonist, you will find that it is really well written. Whether it is the integration with the anime story or the story the author arranged for the protagonist, they are all very well written. Those who have never watched anime or those who have seen anime can easily bring their own emotions into watching it👀. To be honest, Tomato rarely has such excellent fan fiction. I support the author. Finish spreading flowers, the journey of life has no end, I wish you all can find your own flowers on the other side!

I've only read Chapter 125 so far This fanfic is really a surprise. I don't seem to have seen much of Irena's novels in this software. The quality of this book is really high. For me, a person who has only watched anime, I can understand this book (the order of the author's writing is different from the order of the animation) I think the most important thing about Irena is her crumbs. After all, we all call her the "Witch of crumbs." The author did not fail to write about this aspect, which is simply great. The portrayal of her love for money is also vividly reflected in the article. We all know that Irena started traveling because she was interested in the book "The Adventures of Nico" (the original plot seemed to be made up by her mother, I remember her mother was a very powerful witch). The author put the hero's previous story in this book, which is definitely a foreshadowing. Rating: five stars Let me complain, why is the male protagonist's name Qin?

I am quite picky about the fanfics of Demon Brigade, but this one is very suitable to my taste. It is very similar to the original work. However, I still feel that Irena's character is different from the original work, but it is very restored. It is also the only fanfic that I can keep reading and be interested in. Come on [salute]

The writing is really good. Also particularly restored. A very restorative second creation. It's a pity that it's quite a running story, it's too bland. Witch Journey also had this problem, so I stopped reading that light novel after reading two chapters. I should not be the audience for this type of article. I personally think your article is quite restorative.

This article uses a lot of writing to describe the changes in the male protagonist's personality. I think it is very good. In the later period, the male protagonist's language becomes more and more. This is a step-by-step process, not because of a certain thing. No matter how it changes, it requires a process. Fundamental factors, additional factors and other factors. The only drawback is that when the Yongyi ball is dismantled, the female protagonist's request to travel together is a bit too far-fetched, but it is normal. Even though the main plot is rarely described, the stories used to introduce the protagonists in each country make people read and linger. The score of 9.4 Is relatively low. It deserves to be higher. Come on, author [like] The audience for Demon Travel is very small. It is a relatively niche anime in China. It takes time to reach 9.6, But it cannot match the excellent quality of this book. Whether it is the character, description, or emotional changes, it is a step-by-step process. You can truly feel the connotation of expression and thinking about different countries. It can even reach 9.7. It has only a small number of readers, but the quality of this book is still among the best among all fan fiction.

It's beautiful and beautiful. The character design of Irena is very restored and some of the original plots are just like reading the original work. As long as you keep updating, you will definitely catch up to the end. Also, you don't have to guarantee the quantity but you must maintain the quality! ! ! @Let the wind lead to fungi

The writing style is very good, and it is very consistent with the original fanfic. It cleverly adds its own original fantasy country to the original plot, which not only adds to the excitement, but also does not make people feel bored. The emotional line is more about natural emotions. The overall tone is very relaxed and soothing, giving people a sense of long-lasting comfort, as if they are really traveling with Irena. It is real and interesting. Irena is also portrayed with the same shavings as in the original work. Except for the ending being a bit rushed, there are no other flaws. As a fanfic, it can be considered to be of very high quality [Love] [Top post]

The author's writing style is very good, and his grasp of the plot is also very good. Although it is a bit different from the original work, it is aimed at a different group after all. The changes are very reasonable and not abrupt at all. The protagonist is also well established. (Personally I think) the emotional line is a bit slow, but overall it is very good The reason for downgrading one star is that the pace of writing the life story of the protagonist in the later stage was too fast, which made people overwhelmed. The final ending (I think) was also a bit sloppy, but it is considered high quality among tomatoes.

The author's writing is very good, slow but not boring. It's a very good book. It can be read by anyone who has not watched Witch's Journey. The character development is also very good. I must keep writing it, author, I can do anything!

The author really gave a complete story. The tension in the last volume is very strong. Although it is a bit unmanageable and the constant foreshadowing fails to cover up the rush, it is already a good story.

After watching the heroine, I asked the hero to go with me. This is flawed. The tragic character of the hero is a bit contradictory. The kind of half-corpse person who survives in despair. Loneliness is the norm. He thinks he is not worthy of any beauty. He is afraid of sinking into beauty and falling into despair again and cannot live. The short-term accident with the heroine should end instead of continuing to walk together. , It would be best to have a second "encounter" soon. It could be that after the separation, the heroine is still deeply affected, and decides to "rely on fate" to meet the hero before saving her... And I can feel the slightest fluctuation in the hero's mood just from this brief accident, but it is impossible for such a "person" not to notice his changes, right? I still agreed to the heroine's request. I felt very awkward, but I didn't want to watch a too slow redemption and love. But to be honest, in that kind of environment, I really didn't think that a short accident could have an impact. Why did I reveal a little about the past to the heroine? Shouldn't it be possible to communicate only when life is in danger or when a ball is released? All that remains is silence and the necessary exchange of focused work. But when it comes to love, it's very refreshing compared to other redemption stories. It's really good only on Tomato. And it's a fanfic. It's at least in the top three in comparison. I want to say it's one of the best, but I still feel too proud. In fact, it doesn't matter how much. This book is indeed worth reading among fanfics [I learned it]

Among the Yi Lei fanfics I have read, this one can be considered the best. There is no embarrassing part, the emotional line is not fast, and it is more reasonable. After reading the first volume, I feel that the author has an outline, with both overt and hidden lines. The subsequent story development will definitely not be boring and can pass the time. Even those who have never read the manga or drama can watch it. The original work is not very connected, and it is daily life. Whether or not the fan has read it, it is almost the same.

A fan of Witch Journey, very well written. The advantage is that it has a good ending, a small number of words (although the ending is a bit rushed), and the style is very close to the original work (it all has a sense of fable that makes people want to read it but not put it down [laughs] My love for the original work is mainly supported by the appearance of the Witch) There are still some shortcomings, such as not enough sugar, and the human-machine protagonist paired with a tsundere. There is also a common shortcoming in fan fiction: it is difficult to coexist with the highlights of self-created characters and original characters. In the Irena plot, the protagonist is like Irena's stand-in messenger, and in the protagonist's plot, Irena is like the protagonist's leg pendant hahahaha But overall it's a good book, rated 4.5/5

A genius girl, a cursed boy, intertwined destinies. Soothing brushstrokes write gentle stories. I just hope that the emotional drama can develop faster, but after thinking about it, a natural attitude is in line with the two people's personalities. A rare masterpiece

I was lucky enough to read this book early yesterday morning. I stayed up all night to read half of it. Now that I have read the latest version, I can say that this is a very good book. To be honest, I didn't finish watching the Witch's Journey anime, and I stopped watching halfway through. I like Irena, but the bland narrative of the anime will inevitably be a bit boring. But this book, maybe I am more suitable for reading novels. I really like this kind of plain narrative. The story line is clear and there is no poisonous point at all. This is very important! I didn't feel bored at all while reading it, and I'm still not finished reading it. This comment was only made after I had to stop reading the latest chapter. Good thing I don't have time to comment. It's hard to imagine that Tomato has such a good book, a treasured author. I haven't seen it on any list before. I love the author, come on!

It looks good and has the flavor of the original. The plot of tying the male and female protagonists together is a bit cliche, but for a heroine who can say "I won't fall in love with a man even if I die", it might be a better solution to force them to be tied together and let her slowly change. It would be better if the tying method is more natural. Promise me not to tj, okay? Updates every ten days and every twenty days to give the story an ending

When it comes to Irena fan fiction in Tomatoes alone, this is already considered the best among the best. This Irena fan fiction is the best I have ever read, bar none. This book gets full marks in all aspects, except for the grammar, which is a small problem, but it doesn't matter. Is the relationship between Qin and Irena developing a bit slow at the moment? I kind of want to complain about this, and about Qin's body. I hope the author doesn't write about swords. Thank you. We want to read sweet stories instead of sword stories. Five stars are worth it. If the writing is not good later, we will talk about it later. Anyway, it looks good now [Blow kiss]

I really like the portrayal of Irena in the book, and I also feel deeply about Qin's character. I briefly said that the writing style is very comfortable, and what I saw and felt during the trip is very fascinating. Maybe what I have always longed for is this kind of freedom to wander around the world as I please. I don't know if I will have the opportunity to do it in the future. Although the journey of Qin and Irena in this book is over, the story of Irena written by Shiraishi is still unfinished. As a reader who has not read the original work, I was pulled into the trap. Thank you for this encounter. This is a reluctant journey and a happy journey. I want to watch the extra, the author is great [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] [Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry]

The style is very consistent with the original "Witch's Journey", Irena's speaking habits are very suitable, and the handling of the original plot characters is also very suitable for me. I have also learned the ratio of sugar and dark fairy tales. The most important thing is that an important character has been added without disrupting the original fragile writing style and world view... It is very well written. I think the author has indeed gained feelings from his own novels. I wish the author can be exposed to this feeling forever.

The writing is really great. Irena's character is very consistent with the original work. She is as cute and lovable as ever. The most memorable one is "Please forget". I can really imagine Irena's cute and cute tone. However, I hope that the emotional development of the male and female protagonists can be accelerated. There is no end in sight at the moment.

The writing is okay. The advantage of this book is that it is bland. The disadvantage is that it is too bland and does not have that sense of ups and downs. Moreover, I feel that the emotions of the characters are a bit insufficient. But the plot is well written. It's just that the transition is a bit sudden. All in all, it's well written. Keep up the good work, author.

Qin's character is full of goodwill towards the world despite being calm at heart. This goodwill is not expressed through intense emotional expressions, but is reflected through daily subtle actions, such as casual help and care for others. The emotional line of the story is also solid. It is a very good novel.