Have you ever seen crimson blood and a blazing sun, or pupils deep as the sea?
Chen Yi never believed that anything supernatural existed in the world, until he saw that “eye.”
I thought I was dead,
but somehow I became one of them.
Years later,
with powerful enemies all around him,
Chen Yi is trapped in a deadly situation.
Yet he takes his time
and chants:
The times are harsh, the tune is hard to play,
The uncanny path is beyond the world's acceptance.
All forms are delusion, and attachment can be broken,
Cut down the Three Corpses, yet the soul will not be destroyed.
The four directions shift, the eight cycles turn,
I journey through heaven and earth, opening the six realms.
Immortality is not the same as attaining the Dao,
With this uncanny body, I shall forge eternal life!
The writing is very good. If it were a novel about cultivating immortals, I would read it again, but the protagonist's appearance and abilities are Cthulhu-style 🤦 and the worldview is also about cultivating immortals. You wrote it with a pastoral and leisure feel. The protagonist is quite humorous and reminds me of Big Monster.
It is different from the homogeneous Tomato Shuang articles. It is quite unique and has a grand world view. I look forward to the follow-up development.
The more I write, the better it gets! Looking forward to the next plot.
Well written, keep it up!