A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: Starting Down the Immortal’s Path

A good book, the originator of realm suppression. One binding is three points, two bindings are two points of cultivation value, and three bindings are one point of cultivation value. The originator has been pressing since the Qi refining period.

After the early stage, it started to become more exciting, with suspense and stories, and the narrative was not too long-winded. It was already very good. The latter part tends to be a masochistic type. The author has a rather strange personality, leaning in a strange direction, and is very verbose.

It's not bad. It's a good write-up of the intrigues and deceptions in the world of immortality. All kinds of man-made traps, all kinds of frustrations, once or twice is okay, but too many times are too poisonous. The more you look at them, the more frustrating they become.

The writing style is not outstanding, but the logic of the storyline is very good, and it can basically explain itself. The character of the protagonist is also okay. I don't know why it only has a 6.8 Score. In fact, I think this book is better than 70% of the books on this platform in terms of writing style and plot. There are too many brainless and illogical books on Tomato. The overall evaluation is 8 points. If I could update 5 chapters in one day, I would give it a 9.5. It looked like it didn't have much fighting power in the past, but now I see that the main character in the 400 chapters is still building foundations, and he frequently participates in the battles between gods. I'll give it three stars first to see how things go. If the protagonist's cultivation level gradually improves later on, it's fine. If he suddenly breaks through to big realms continuously, I can only modify the rating to 2 stars.

After reading Chapter 15, I thought at first that I had reached a bottleneck and couldn't add points, but it turned out that I could add points when I reached the bottleneck. Did you read the following explanation about why there is still a bottleneck even though you can add points?

This is the second book I've read recently where the main character is so difficult to practice that even a golden finger can't pull it [face covering]

Although the system is too broken and frustrating to watch, the IQs of all the members are online, there is no brainless villain, and they are not brainless black villains. It fully demonstrates the good and evil sides of people, and they can be hostile due to different camps or cooperate for interests. This is a good book. The helplessness of the low-level monks is vividly depicted, and the heroine is not blindly bragging about the hero. The gradual emotional drama is also well written. The plot is novel and the twists are natural. Except for the system settings, there are no other poisonous points, but as mentioned at the beginning, it is acceptable for the system to crash. The author is also good at filling in the holes. Great novel, the rating can be improved even more

I think this book about cultivating immortals made my eyes shine. Generally speaking, books are good at building Qi and building foundations, up to the Formation of Dan Yuanying, and the realm behind it is a bit collapsed, but this book has a very reasonable top-level structure design even up to the transformation of gods. I've finished following the Dragon Boat Festival in three days. I'm really looking forward to it. Good luck to the author. The characters of each heroine are created very well.

The battle between Mo and Fu for the soul is very well written, a bit familiar, but it lacks a supernatural power and leads them astray (does anyone understand [laughs evilly]) Humorous writing about death palace suppressing the protagonist

In the powerful world of cultivation, regardless of level, even if you are Nascent Soul, I am just practicing Qi. If you don't have evidence, you can't kill me? Even if you have a monstrous background and I am just a grassroots person, you still cannot kill me. This is the law of the world. In this world of cultivating immortals, the main thing is to talk about evidence. If you don't have evidence, you can't touch me [laughing evilly]