Hunter: the Red and Blue Hands Start to Beat the Enemy with the Pink Eye Disease

[Like][Like][Like] I read 82 chapters in one go. How should I put it? Judging from the description of logic, combat, story, abilities, etc., It is a very good fanfic. In terms of quality, it can be ranked in the top ten of hunter logic story fanfics, but it also has big shortcomings. The image I have seen of Chapter 82 so far is that Pig's Feet is fighting monsters and upgrading its abilities. In order to upgrade various abilities, there are unlimited killings (only for adults). There are too few other daily activities. It feels like there is not even 1%, as if it is playing a game. Although Hunter World is really dangerous, and it is true that you need to improve your abilities, it gives readers the feeling that the battles and upgrades are too full, and it becomes boring after a long time. I hope the author will add some daily life, travel, eat delicious food, teach the current Zai Zai training, etc. Look at the different work-rest combination.

I don't deny that the story setting is great. After reading it quickly, I still feel that too many psychological activities and various explanations and descriptions make people feel more tired when reading, so a lot of unnecessary content is skipped, but the overall content setting and character portrayal are very good.

As a newbie, I'll give this book 4 stars. . . What the author has thought about is that lack of experience leads to a slow pace. . . And it's quite broken to a certain extent, but Hunter is also quite broken to begin with. After all, it's the world of my power of thinking. The description of the fight is actually pretty good as a feature, but it's a bit too detailed and it looks a bit watery. But the protagonist itself is quite confusing, which makes me feel that the author hasn't thought about many things yet, and it feels like he just doesn't care about what he wrote. For the time being, it is full of words: I wanted to do it, so I did it. There is no special purpose. I have to say that it just satisfies my pleasure. For example, if you want to leave the family, there is no reason, you just want to leave. For example, when it comes to controlling gangs, it seems that they want people to do experiments, but it feels weird to seek far away from the near. Well, for the time being, the plot is actually still being laid out and has not yet unfolded, but the foreshadowing is not deep and the plot does not seem to have much highlights for the time being. After all, fighting is the most eye-catching thing Finally, I wish the author better and better╮(╯▽╰)╭in every sense

Really well written. But to be honest, the protagonist's growth in the gangster part was a bit too long. As a result, the fun point is delayed for too long. The more you write, the better it looks. It is recommended that in this case, the chapters should be controlled to no more than 15 chapters. If you can't write 15 chapters, you can write the general content, and then make up for it through memories after writing a fierce battle scene. Otherwise, if it is too long, readers will find it difficult to read. Chapter 15 or so is just right. The climax of the subsequent fight scene can attract readers. After the climax, the rest is smooth. It is a good arrangement to insert it at this time to supplement the plot advancement. For example, during the hunter exam, the old version created an original episode where everyone goes into the water to salvage treasures together. This is a soothing moment after the tense and intense story, allowing everyone to relax and facilitate the intense plot that follows.

It is recommended to read about 90 chapters or so. Before chapter 90, the delicate fighting psychology and high IQ, the protagonist's decisive killing is more like relying on talent and hard work to step up step by step than the systematic writing. Add in the battles of supporting characters such as Old John, it is simply a masterpiece [like] [like] [like], after chapter 90 [vomit] [vomit] [vomit]

To be honest, it is still full so far. The settings and explanations are pretty good, except that some of them are unnecessary and could be removed. Not everyone has the patience to read a novel with a very dense number of words. There are very few Tomato Hunter fans, and the quality is not very good. Keep up the good work! Don't break it The writing is really good. It can be said that the mental thinking and tactics that hunters should have are explained in detail. Of course, in addition to the battle scenes that need to be improved, the skill unlocking also lacks the telekinesis ability developed by myself (I don't think it is very good at making clones to create pirate characters based on the Seven Deadly Sins, and there are no battle scenes like Dover and the others). This needs to be added. The final suggestion is that some places need to be more detailed, and some places can actually be briefly explained, such as if you feel that you can't explain it well or the conversion can't be smooth. Come on support you

It can be read with your brain, the IQ is online, the logic is clear, it is very hunter-like, and the portrayal of psychological characters is the best among Tomato novels so far. The disadvantage is that the added character is too eye-catching. At least change the name and fine-tune it, it will be too easy to cause drama.

Overall, it's okay. The description of a battle is too accurate (too cool) Fan fiction is basically only read by those who have watched the anime, so there is no need to write too detailed.

Good news. Although the structure is a bit vague in some places, it is obvious that the author has his own understanding of hunters. It is not a mindless novel with lots of plots. Come on! There are almost no hunters written by Tomato. Dian and Lu have some works. When the author is stuck, he can consider learning from them and adding more ideas and accumulation to himself.

Come on author, Hunter's book must be supported

Everything about the writing and setting is good, but there are too many words about gangsters, which makes it hard to read.

Okay, I quite like the psychological description above, but I don't like the protagonist's personality. I prefer the original character I really don't know why so many people complain about the first person, even though they clearly see it

There are no obvious shortcomings other than too much nonsense, so it's worth watching.

Five stars. Absolutely five stars. ٩(๑^O^๑)۶٩(๑^o^๑)۶٩(๑^o^๑)۶ is really great. But I'm sorry to the author. I jumped a little bit in the second picture because I couldn't understand it. I didn't rely on my brain. I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I'm very sorry. Wish The author can keep updating it.

I've finished reading it and it's very interesting. The author writes very well. I'm watching the last few dozen episodes of the new version of Hunter. In addition to the psychological descriptions of the characters, there are also third-party monologues. Compared with this, the author's writing has been very simplified, and the writing is in line with the description of the original work, which is very good.

I really like Hunter, and I am happy to see Hunter fan fiction. I can also see that the author has a lot of respect for the settings of the original work and is very sincere. However, the novel is not a follow-up. There are too many settings and explanations, which is too procrastinating and affects the reading rhythm. Keep up the hard work [laughing and crying]

The sea, you are all water

I still like to look at starting a company and keep fighting and killing. If I see that it's boring, just occasionally.

It's pretty good to watch, but the gangster plot is a bit boring at one point. I think it's okay in terms of the inner drama.

For now, except for the bad stuff that the author didn't bother to change after he changed it, it's no problem, it looks great, keep going.

Very good, although it is very unpopular, but it is really good-looking, and it is not a nanny article [love] [send heart] [send heart]

Overall it's good, the hooks, and the story rhythm are also pretty good, but I feel like there are a bit too many things mentioned during the battle, and the battle rhythm feels a bit draggy. The author can read the book "I'm Not a Nian Teacher, but also a Food Hunter" on the starting point. It's also quite interesting. I look forward to the author's continued efforts.

I like the anime Hunter very much. I have read more than ten Hunter fanfics. The author's concept of the protagonist and the plot structure are both very good. It can be regarded as one of the outstanding Hunter fanfics. I hope the author can keep updating. Come on👏

I always feel like I've been bullied [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] I feel unhappy about revenge

It's pretty good, but no one is watching, and I'm a little scared of pigeons.

It really captures the tension and excitement of a hunter, and at the same time, the protagonist's ability is enough to crush his opponents, which brings a sense of satisfaction. But even such a strong protagonist may capsize, and this is the case in the hunter's world. The only drawback is that the author updates too slowly. If it were placed at the starting point, I might be willing to subscribe to a paid novel.

The writing style is relatively clear, the plot has a certain depth, and there is also a battle of wits between the characters. It is a high-quality hunter with few tomatoes. I feel that the author can do a lot if he just writes a hunter without adding other elements. I support it.

It's very well written, keep it up!

The author writes really well

The book is very interesting. The author has checked a lot of information and conceived the plot according to the character and actions of the protagonist. As a result, the plot is very different from the original book and is eye-catching.