One Body and Two Souls, I Can Help the Eldest Lady Become a God!

I have been looking for this type of book recently, and I finally came across one today. Is it a single heroine?

Okay, I have read the latest chapter. I came in after reading the introduction in the morning (but the introduction seems to have been changed?). There is actually nothing wrong with the writing, but it feels too bland. Well, this bland does not mean that the writing is poor, but it means that you don't remember anything after reading it. Novels, especially online novels, need to be stimulating, and stimulating includes a lot of There are many aspects, such as the sweetness of emotion, the exhilaration of battle, the mystery and oppression of strategy, and even the comfort of daily writing, etc. At present, it seems that this book focuses on combat, so considering how to render the battle scenes and how to make readers "excited" is a major focus. How to achieve "interesting" in a novel, I think, is an issue worth considering. (I don't mean that the author's writing is bad, but it's because readers are often more likely to understand it than the author, so the author needs to be above the reader's level. Just like in music, everyone can hear and feel it, but the composer must have professional knowledge to create it) Then there is the fact that it seems so cold at the moment. I don't know if the author can persist and how long he can persist. I suggest you consider ways to promote books. In the process of promoting books, you can also slowly understand what kind of story you want to write and what kind of reader group you want to serve... After all, if it becomes popular and people read it, making money is the important motivation for updating. (This book is a type of novel in which the male protagonist serves as a "plug-in" to assist the female protagonist in her growth. I don't think I have ever seen this kind of novel successfully completed. It is either discontinued or unfinished.) A large paragraph is written from my feelings. There may be inappropriate expressions and subjective factors of personal perception. I hope you will be more tolerant and considerate. I wish the author can write better and better.

I don't know why I always feel like I can't write too long when I see the current progress. Anyway, keep working hard.

Yes, it's very interesting. I'm very optimistic about this book [Like]

Five stars, very nice!

Alas, I don't know what to say... A very old story

Personally, I think it's okay for now. It's very interesting. I don't know what will happen in the future? [Code to live][code to live]

It's very interesting. I really like the author. Come on, come on. Come on.

It's okay. The male lead should be written to stand out a bit, since there are more supporting roles than the male lead.