Naruto: From the Start, I Have Only One Year to Live

Generally, I only see 11 chapters. Time-traveling way A self-righteous and life-betting exchange with Orochimaru Original heroine, inexplicable love at first sight Even though he knew Uchiha was trouble, he still wanted to defeat the weasel.

At present, the only problem with this book is that the protagonist is too useless. First, in terms of chakra control, he is not as good as Uchiha Izumi when he has two Yin Escape bloodstains, and then in terms of taijutsu, he is not as good as Hashirama's cell transplantation progress. The two current heroines are both Hashirama cell transplant recipients. Anyone who survived the transplant in the original book can use Wood Release. It's just a matter of strength. And among the transplants in this book, currently Uchiha Izumi can use Orochimaru. No surprise there. It should be possible, but when it comes to the protagonist, there is no Mudun. In comparison, the protagonist is really useless, which is the old type of poison. In order to write an emotional scene, the heroine is forcibly elevated. One is that the original work is not outstanding in strength. Uchiha Izumi is already given a box lunch when he leaves the factory, a semi-original character created based on the original Hyuga family. He is better than the protagonist in every aspect, but the protagonist relies on cheats to get ahead of them. It is quite an old-fashioned poison, and I personally think it is quite disgusting.

The author read this solemn oath after me: I swear: From today on, I will voluntarily update five times a day and never stop updating. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I won't play games or write poetry. Strict self-discipline, cherish time like gold, perseverance, struggle, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. I firmly believe that I am a good writer. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code diligently. I am the keyboard in the dark and the guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding, day by day and night by day.

Isn't there a shadow clone? He had to completely go off the rails of Konoha and practice immortality for a year, arranging for the heroine to be a caged bird and tortured

He talks about being obscene and underdeveloped, but his words and deeds are crazy and promiscuous.

To be honest, it's a bit awkward to be defeated by the goddess at the beginning. This type of character feels out of touch, with a bit of a combination of Super Seminary Yan + Reina, which is annoying. Secondly, if the Hokage wants to play the rescue trick, he should turn against Tiangang and let the daily clan be a slave. The technique is more vicious than a caged bird. Sarutobi and Danzo will die early. I have read a lot of books. In fact, Danzo looks like a villain in every book. Sarutobi is indeed very good at hiding and pretending. It is best to let him be ruined and the whole family die in front of him.

This first chapter is too abstract and can be deleted completely. You can use the ambush pen, but you can't directly cover up people's desire to read it. A direct chapter on how to travel? What's even more exaggerated, is she a diaosi goddess?? Is your goddess bowing like this?? Is the male protagonist just a plaything of the goddess?? Don't talk about what happens next, even if it can come back, how many poisonous points are there in the middle?

At how young are you exposing yourself and betting on other people's character? Have you forgotten that Konoha has the art of probing other people's brains?

1 Iruka hadn't graduated yet at that time (his father died after Kyuubi and he had memories of being bullied at school). You wrote here that he became a teacher? 2 Orochimaru was the one who chopped off the horns of the eight-tailed bull in the previous generation Bi. You wrote him as the fourth generation Bi. There is a memory that he went to become a doctor and injected the previous generation Bi with an injection and died after being unable to control the uniform. Later, he was replaced by Kirabi.

There is an original female protagonist, and the protagonist's behavior is a bit like Long Aotian!