Comprehensive Beauties Overwhelming the Country

Nice! ! ! I particularly like the character of the heroine. If she is a stunning beauty and yet she is so gentle and flattering to the guide, then she is not as good as the vivid women in the original work. There are many stories about martial arts beauties, wearing Fu Jiang's beauty, doing Wang Baochuan's job of digging wild vegetables, or being weak and helpless and being coerced. The more they read, the more angry they become. It's better to have fun! Grasp the overall situation and enjoy life[shy][shy][shy][shy] And there was no bloody plot like Li Xunhuan falling in love with Lin Shiyin's daughter (to be honest, I panicked when I saw that the heroine was Shiyin's daughter, because I had seen that kind of plot before). I also thought Long Xiaoyun's handling of Lin Shiyin's feelings was particularly good. The heroine is not a pure good person, she doesn't know how to be a virgin, and she is also very good. All in all, the author is great! Come on💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪More updates

Obviously, the writing style of the second world is getting better and better, and the author has a very good grasp of the characters. I like this kind of heroine who is strong in martial arts, the most beautiful in the world, and self-centered. There are many heroines in mixed martial arts who are beautiful, capable, and have golden fingers, but all of them go to bring warmth to the male protagonist, just like a nanny. I like this kind of heroine who only thinks about herself... Beautiful

The author's setting is quite attractive, and the writing style is also good. The heroine is also my favorite type - no one can stop her, and the heartthrob has no rivalry. It's good in every aspect, so I still want to give some suggestions to the author. One is whether the content of the original work is too much? For example, the section introducing Shi Guanyin's obstacles to business can be simplified and covered in one paragraph. Sometimes you introduce too much text in the original work, which not only seems redundant, but also limits your ability to create a new world (meaning that the original work stops here and writes more about the heroine's story). Second, the main plot follows the plot of the original work. To be honest, there are too many other fanfics with the same plot, which makes people have no sense of expectations and is not very good at retaining people. It is better to re-plan a main line with the heroine as the center, write her story, she takes action to conquer, and let the original characters have the honor to participate in her story, rather than someone else's story, she sits in the center and watches the movie. If it's three, I hope it's a boy with a virginity, it doesn't matter if he takes it or not.

This book is really good. I have always liked Jinjiang's comprehensive martial arts. It is rare to see a martial arts fan book like this besides Jinjiang's comprehensive martial arts. Has the author ever considered writing a martial arts fanfic that combines the two martial arts books of the Song Dynasty, "Who Are the Heroes" and "Four Famous Catchers"? Let Yanzhi kick the bad emperor of the Song Dynasty at that time, become the emperor himself, and kill Cai Jingfang, who should have looked like him. People like Di Feijing, Wu Qing, Leng Xue, Su Mengzhen, etc. Who are good-looking, have high IQs, strong abilities, and extremely powerful force value. They can both warm the bed and squeeze out work. They are simply destined workers (big injustice) [snickering] [smirking]👉👈👉👈

It's great. The heroine has the feeling of a femme fatale, but she is more of a villainous heartthrob. She will do whatever it takes to get the love of her destiny child, but she will not put down her body to deliberately cater to please. Beauty itself has privileges, especially the heroine. With her stunning beauty and some distorted buffs, the heroine's beauty can even make those weak-willed people die on their own initiative, just so that the heroine can remember her/him. It feels a bit like Fu Jiang. It's a very touching setting. I like it! I really like the second world. After receiving the most selfless maternal love, the heroine can do whatever she wants in this world. It turns out that you don't have to conquer Destiny's Child, you just need to love it enough and the quality is high enough. The Princess Taihe story is so long, I'm tired of reading it...

I wonder if Lin Xiaole kept her promise and went back to visit Long Xiaoyun who was waiting for her. Will Yanzhi fall in love with other excellent people again in the future? Will Yanzhi ever meet an elder who loves her so selflessly as Lin Shiyin? Does Rouge belong to a human now?

After catching up with Yitian, I feel that the author's writing style is improving. The first two planes were still very immature, but now it is really getting better and better. The heroine has her own personality charm and a strong heart. Su Shuangmei has done all three. I hope it will get better and better. It has been a long time since I have seen such a high-quality mixed martial arts. I used to watch it in Green Book, but there were very few that fit my taste. It is very frustrating. This one does not.

As we go on, we can see that the author's writing is getting better and better. Zhou Zhiruo was not very interested in this world at first, but the more I read, the more attractive it becomes. Earlier, I felt that the heroine's physical attractiveness was greater than her personal charm, but in this world, the heroine is too chic and fairy-like, and her face is only a small part of her charm.

It's quite good-looking, one of the few mixed martial arts films in 🍅 that is well-written. (At first, the two worlds were a little immature, relying on piling up various adjectives to express beauty, but they gradually got better.) I haven't finished Lu Xiaofeng's world yet, so I'm not very interested in the rest of it, but the one about relying on heaven and slaying dragons is quite interesting. The more I write about it, the better it gets. I look forward to the follow-up

I followed it all the way down, and the more I watched, the more fascinated I became! Rouge has grown up along the way, and the author's writing has gotten better and better! Great! Nice! Especially the second world looks great, I look forward to the next journey [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

After reading the first two worlds, I thought they were well written. The writing is meaningful and beautiful, and the heroine is very subjective and has the ability to do whatever she wants. For example, the snake demon has strong magic power, and Lin Xiaole is also very powerful in martial arts. She is a great beauty, and she is a great beauty who is not aggrieved! It's not the kind that revolves around the original line and provides warmth to other male guests. He is a person who has the ability to create a new story line of his own, and he is also a person that the male guests cannot see through. 🎄◟(˶> ᎑ <˶)◞🎄It's getting better and better

The author's writing style is very good. As someone who rarely reads martial arts variety novels, this article is really amazing. The heroine is smart, beautiful and has a very charming personality. The plot is also very interesting. It describes the pleasure of the world and the charm of the heroine. Five-star praise, please come on [send heart][send heart][send heart]

Humanity says that Luoyang is full of flowers, but it's not spring when I come. The author is really good at creating a charming beauty. I can feel the ignorance and growth of the heroine. Everyone loves her and can't help but fall in love at first sight. Beauty is really an aggressive sharp blade, intoxicating, painful and unforgettable. (Why is it broken? Sad💔)

The writing is really good... I searched a lot in JJ, but I was really out of money, and I found one here [crying] [crying] The writing is really good, the growth line of the heroine is so well written, and the emotional drama is also delicate. The heroine is so beautiful in the variety martial arts heartthrob, but it is sober, and the writing is not novice and the plot is not bland. There are really few that do that. At least this one does it. The heroine is really charming and I have already fallen in love with her. It would be strange if the people in it don't love her, and the original characters are also well written! A perfect second creation [crying] [crying] [crying] The more you go to the back, the more exciting it becomes. This is Zhou Zhiruo's world. The writing is really good. She is not just a superficial heartthrob. The heroine is the sun who is committed to the people and saves the common people. Her chivalrous taste is so good [crying] [crying]

It's so good. It's hard to find books of Tomato's level.

At the beginning, it still felt like a pile of articles. The more I write, the better it gets, but it's just scattered. It's a treasure article. I hope it gets better and better.

It's very touching, and the author also listens to suggestions! I especially like this kind of inhumanity, being self-centered and not trying to attack others [blowing kiss]

It's unexpectedly good-looking and has a martial arts flavor. The heroine is really frighteningly beautiful (but it's not just about her thin appearance.

Boss, come back and update quickly, come back, come back, come back, come back, you can write so beautifully! ! ! What an enviable talent, what an excellent writing style, a mind-blowing imagination, a talent that gets better and better the more you write. If you don't write, where will you put your wonderful talents to use? Boss, where have you been? Say it and I will follow you It's really getting better and better, and the more I write, the better it looks! You can clearly see the author's progress and control of the plot. I really like Princess Taihe! How come it is so beautifully written! ! ! Then when I got to Zhou Zhiruo's chapter, I found that you, the author, have improved again. Your writing is even better. I want to read it! ! ! Really very beautiful

It's beautiful. The heroine has goals, plans and means, is not pedantic and scheming, and everything is goal-centered. It's really beautiful. I have been following the article, but this article is really cool... The first world always feels a little less interesting. It is only from the second world that people start to have the desire to follow up... But no matter what, don't give up, ma'am, keep going [laughs]

Nice! I saw that the author's writing skills in the second world have improved rapidly, and he can combine micro-comedy with martial arts plot without being OOC. All in all, it is a good book, fine chaff, fine chaff.

A beautiful, well-written heartthrob novel with a reasonable setting and stunning beauties. This book should be called Tomie Beauty Talent! There are several novels named Tomie on Tomato, but none of them gave me the feeling of Tomie. The heroine of this book is cold, beautiful, and evil without knowing it. The real flower of evil, the kind that is so beautiful that it loses its sanity.

The author's writing style is exquisite, he has written the rhyme of martial arts, and expressed the essence of martial arts. He does not write about "love" everywhere, but talks about "love" everywhere. Love brings sorrow, and love brings fear. The seven emotions and six desires of human beings are a kind of power, making the coward fearless, making the cautious brave, which is endlessly memorable...

The next two worlds are beautiful

I've read a lot of novels, but I never think of rating them, but this one really deserves a five-star rating. Whether it's the writing style or the personality of the heroine, it's all on the level of fairy grass. A true heartthrob doesn't need to go out of his way to please others, but rather someone who spends all his life trying their best to get no one to look back at him.

I just finished watching Two Worlds and I want to brag about it. I can see this kind of quality mixed martial arts fine rice bran in Tomato. It's a pity that it has been discontinued [crying][crying][crying]

After watching The Second World, I quickly added a review. It is a very beautiful article. The words and sentences are beautifully carved, the characters are true and sincere, and the pattern and the direction of the events are satisfying and beautiful. After reading The Third World, I liked it even more. Each character is vividly and interestingly drawn. It is really a pleasant and stylish novel to read.

It's so well written, thank you author.

Except for the first world, which feels so-so, the third story has gradually gotten better. That's why I started to follow it and found that updates have been discontinued.

It feels like a martial arts world, don't be fooled.