Starting with the Pure Yang Holy Body, You Want Me to Develop the Yin and Yang Dao?

I personally prefer to read harem novels. I have also read all 40 chapters of this book, which are basically updated. However, the more you go to the end, the more boring it becomes. The author still feels that there are some problems in the subdivision of the content. I will mention some problems and poisonous points that I found during the reading process. They only represent my personal opinions: 1. Soul penetration setting. I personally don't really care about this aspect, but I often see this point when reading other book reviews, which shows that many people still care about it. The author can change the setting to awaken past life memories, but it doesn't take much effort to avoid lightning, so why not do it. 2. The heroine's character design. For this kind of cool novel about female protagonists, as the number of female protagonists increases, it is recommended that the author subdivide the character design and personality. The personality distinction of the female protagonists currently appearing is not very different. If the harem continues to be expanded in the future, the author will easily find that the problem of character stereotypes is serious. This will make readers feel that I am not accepting a new character into the harem, but repeatedly accepting the same character with a changed name into the harem, resulting in a significant decrease in novelty and soon losing interest. 3. Protagonist character design. I have always believed that a good novel is inseparable from the shaping of the protagonist's character and charm, and the best way to shape the protagonist is through desire. Only the protagonist with desire has a clear goal. There is a clear purpose behind the laughter and curses. Only after the goal is achieved can the audience feel enough satisfaction. A cold and desireless protagonist will feel awesome at first glance, but will only feel pretentious after a long time. The design of desire often needs to be combined with the theme. For example, in a theme that obviously requires a large number of harems, the protagonist should have a certain desire for women rather than simply accepting women for the sake of advancement. Otherwise, the protagonist will become a tool to promote the plot. He does not open a harem because he wants to open a harem but has to open a harem. After watching it for a long time, the audience will inevitably get tired of it. 4. Daily interaction design. In addition to the main line that guides the development of the story, the daily interactive plot of the characters is also particularly important in shaping the character. This point is also closely related to the second and third points I mentioned. Since the main plot of the heroine in multi-female protagonists is often only part of the main plot of the male protagonist, it is still difficult to portray a female protagonist with a distinctive personality in such a limited main plot. Integrating the heroine's character development and growth into the daily plot is a good solution. This is reflected in this article. For the heroine who has been completely conquered, her personal plot has been finished and there is no more to write. Her strength is too different from that of the protagonist to help, so she basically cannot appear in the subsequent content. This is because the author did not divide the content properly and was too eager to push the main line and lacked the daily plot. For harem stories, it is not said that the heroine is equally affected. At least the heroine must not be reduced to a tool that loses its meaning after one appearance and is replaced by a new character in the future. Therefore, it is necessary to consider the emotional interaction between the heroine and the hero. 5. Poison point problem. I think the most poisonous point in this book is the plot of Tang Nairou. I even think the author should consider revising it. The female protagonist is arrested and executed by the patrol team. The male protagonist knows it clearly but is unmoved and calls her a long lesson. He insists on waiting until the last moment to appear. The female protagonist is already bruised and bruised. The male protagonist says, "No one can hurt my woman." There are big problems with this design. First of all, it is dark. It shows that the male and female protagonists themselves have no emotions and the male protagonist has no possessiveness. The female protagonist has completely lost any meaning to the male protagonist, and the subsequent emotional creation has become empty talk. Secondly, I put it harshly, you don't know what others will do to the female protagonist in prison, right? You want the female protagonist to see the situation clearly, but the Holy Mother has many ways, but you can't give her to the enemy and let the enemy help you train her. To sum up, I originally wanted to give it three stars, but seeing that there were only a few people who rated it, I decided not to give it too low. I would give it four stars to encourage the author, and I hope the author can write better and better.

I have never seen such awesome work! Great, needless to say.

Self-destruction and seizing the body... Oh, poison

This feels great, oh, this novel is perfectly written, absolutely amazing ×3,,, He Jiong came and agreed, oh

I haven't seen such a good-looking novel for a long time. The author will update soon.

Very good book

Beautiful! Worth collecting!

Naturally~. The author worked hard, thank you

This book is good! Recommended

Can you update a few more chapters every day? I can play it when I see an emergency.

It's beautiful. Why don't you rate it?

Not bad, very pretty

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

The plot has ups and downs, a good book.

Is this still the Shuangwen I know? [Cover face][cover face][cover face]

It was pretty good, but it ended too quickly.

A coming-of-age story, the plot is okay... But not decisive enough

The subject matter is good, and the writing is okay. The shortcoming is that it doesn't pay much attention to the text structure, and sometimes the meaning is reversed. I hope to continue to refine and improve it in subsequent works.