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It looks good, but the heroine's IQ could be a little more stable. It seems to be high and low. The IQ of the two male protagonists is very stable. One is so smart that he is crazy, and the other is so kind that he is stupid [face covering] [face covering]

A particularly good-looking Jojo fanfic. There are some pitfalls in the early stage, but as long as you get through it, the sky will be brighter. It is obviously just the background plot of the first part. There is no stand-in or villain group, but the author still writes ups and downs and constant innovations. The most valuable thing is that the plot is still very smooth. It should be logical and in line with the social background, but it still makes the plot arrangement reasonable and detailed. Seeing that now it feels like a déjà vu to the group's favorite heroine, our overly mature sister can finally rest peacefully for a while [almost crying] (although not completely rested) The copywriting looks like a sandwich biscuit, but whether it is the proportion of the plot, the character or the emotional intensity of the heroine, dio clearly has the upper hand. In fact, jojo's emotional line is actually quite well written, but compared with dio's pseudo-bone line... It's a bit worse [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] How should I put it, years of getting along with each other, giving gifts and sharing the same bed, countless times of cooperation and mutual help, the only kind and accomplice, plus the tendency to open the letter circle for you (bushi), I will always look at you, pua and anti- Pua's awesome confrontation, plus they both know that the other person has no blood relationship with them... I am a pseudo-boy who values boys over girls (although the heroine looks so possessive because of the system, but sometimes she really feels like this) Unless Dio becomes a human and kills his mother, I can't figure out how the pseudo-bone line could lose (of course, the possibility of no cp in the text is not included) [Chigua] By the way, is the brown-haired man Er Qiao? If so, will the increasingly outrageous timeline allow other generations of JoJo to come out and make the heroine care about her? If it were an otome development, would Elena be a member of the harem? Or is it just because of the heroine that she became a strong and powerful fan girl? I seem to know the follow-up. If I had known this article was so good, I would have saved it until the end and then read QAQ Madam! Hungry! Rice rice! Knock on the bowl! [Eat melon]

What I like most about this book is Yuffie's super strength. Anyone who has watched the first JOJO movie knows that Dio is a born bad guy, but in this movie Dio has to be forced not to be a bad guy because of the heroine's super strength. Instead of being patient and not doing bad things for the sake of love, he is forced by force to endure malice and coexist peacefully with others. So there is time and space for Dio to develop real feelings with others. In this way, Dio retains the original flavor well and does not become a cliche of being a good guy through love! Because Yuffie is a strong person, only a strong person can tame Dio, who is a born evil. This setting is great!

Very good jojo fanfic, makes my brain spin. Let's take a bold guess at the plot. Due to the principle of mutual attraction between stand-ins, they attract powerful enemies. For some reason, Dio will also bring a stone ghost face to attract Qibelin. During this period, Elena meets Jojo or Yuffie by chance. Later, because of Yuffie's accident or Yuffie's marriage to Dio, Jojo may be forced to choose Elena. After the war, Qibelin and the protagonist work together to deal with the stand-in messenger (possibly grabbing the stone ghost face and turning into a vampire). Finally, Qibelin asks Yuffie and Dio to kill themselves. Yuffie and Dio may fall asleep or go to Egypt. At the same time, entering the world view of the second part, Erqiao may wake up Yuffie on the way to fight against the Pillar Man. Yuffie may get the red stone of Ai Zhe and the special stone ghost face to become a jio-level creature, and be seriously injured and fall asleep on the way to fight against Kaz. Dio wakes up after this, similar to the third part, but the purpose is to find Yuffie, and at the same time, the yandere personality becomes more ruthless than Erqiao. In the end, a new villain should be introduced to connect to the world view behind. Then there is the sweet life of the two ultimate creatures with Dio, who may participate in the subsequent plot from the perspective of the audience. If the author wants to write, he can even use Yuffie's stand-in or d4c to bring Dio into the world of Yamanoro. There are a lot of holes in my personal guess. At present, the most likely possibility is that the author will live a sweet life until the end of the first part.

Oh my God, how could there be such a beautiful book? Teacher, you said that people who have never read the original book can read it. It is true. I have never read it, but readers who are deeply attracted by the teacher's book, the teacher's writing is particularly good, and the heart is soft. The heroine is a very independent person who sticks to her own principles and bottom line, and cares about her own feelings and the situation of her loved ones around her. The heroine relies on her own efforts (taking advantage of others or being taken advantage of? Just kidding, it's just posting hhhhh). The heroine gains strength just to survive and get better. She will not bully others based on her own strength (Dior doesn't count, he volunteers?). Although I haven't read the original work and don't know much about Dior, the author's various details in the article depict this character very vividly and interestingly, especially flesh and blood. JOJO's description is also very multi-faceted. A gentleman is brave and sensitive, lonely and longs for friends, and has a sincere and frank character. After reading this book, I am a little interested in the original work, but not much because the style of painting is a bit hard to accept, hahaha. All in all, it's a very good book. Fried Chicken's Invincible Spin and Explosion is very interesting. I look forward to the author's follow-up works.

It looks so good. I'm so excited. The character of the protagonist is very comfortable. There is no shortcomings at the moment. It's perfect [Blow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss] I have been following it from the beginning to now, and I feel that the more I write, the more boring it becomes. I also feel that the heroine's attitude towards Dio is not very comfortable sometimes.

It's good to read. I haven't seen such an appetizing article for a long time. I prefer sandwich biscuits. If it doesn't work, I can have the Dior head + Da Qiao body from the third part. It's a threesome in another sense [thinking]. Yuffie owns Dior and Jojo at the same time. It can be regarded as the comprehensive ecstasy of the Dior party and the Jojo party.

The story line is clearly developed without any sense of contradiction. The characters are well-developed, the ideas and writing are smooth, and the literary sense is strong. The plot twists are unexpected. The emotional line also depicts the development and secret emotions very well. The ups and downs of the plot are very immersive, and the description is very good. The appearance is not artificial, and the description of the heroine's weakness cannot be exaggerated. Women's ideas are extremely high, and the heroine in the book will not be jealous for the sake of men. The plot is smooth and not stuck, and there is no irritating point, but it allows readers to empathize. The fighting plot is also very exciting, everyone's actions are not sloppy, and the heroine will not become a burden and is carefully protected by everyone like a porcelain doll. However, the heroine's growth line is also described as ups and downs rather than smooth sailing! The author's update quality is also very good, and his analytical skills are also great. Even if you have not read the original work, you can still read it. The logical thinking is rigorous, maximizing all humanity, and helping readers analyze the psychological activities of the protagonist. The thrilling plot can add a lot of emotions with the help of the author. Every step in the plot that is fueled by the author makes readers unexpected. Some small details of the original work are also well retained. The author carefully cares for and describes every character. It is a good micro-group novel!

The story is tense and exciting, the explanations are very clear, and the writing is very good. The stand-in is very practical, very interesting and beautiful! And I can even say with confidence that what I have achieved today is all due to my own efforts. The protagonist really takes life very seriously!

The plot in the slums above was so good. The three of them depended on each other and were all thinking about each other [crying]

There is too little written, and I haven't read it much yet, so I have to wait for the update. The author's writing is very good, and he has rewritten the comic so perfectly. I hope that the three of them will love each other forever. As adults, they don't have to make a choice. They want them all. I have always been worried about Dio who turned bad in the comic. I hope he will be good this time and stay a human being [laughing] Also, the author is very restrained in writing kisses. I hope it will be open again. Hey, he is an adult after all, he can learn to drive [blowing kiss]

Let JOJO have more drama... The refreshing little cakes are also delicious. Don't be 1v1 or the main male protagonist. It's a tonic. I really like JOJO, a refreshing, polite and cute baby.

It's really well written. I don't like fanfics at first. I feel like if the people in it are OOC, then I'm not the same person. But the writing of this dio is very fitting and perfect, and the tension between the Flower of Evil and Yuffie's relationship is great. Why is there such a good girl as Yuffie!

Wow fun! It's so exciting that you can keep watching it. I really like the arrogant twin brother, who is suspected of being a pseudo-orthopedist. A gambling father, a sick mother, a skinny brother and a broken her. ๑V๑hehe

The writing style is very good and very logical. This book is about a strong woman, but the author's emotional and plot lines are well distributed. It is neither just emotions, nor plot only, nor OOC. The adjustment of the plot based on Yuffie's character is also great. Yuffie was resurrected because of I think it's normal for her to become childish in her post-lone life, and although Yuffie has more than 60 charms, she doesn't have much description of her appearance. Although the emotional line is very slow, it is normal, but I want to ask when can they really be together? I am really looking forward to the moment when they are really together, and the plot of this book is really creative. It feels like it highlights the soul and characteristics of each person. Yuffie has blended in perfectly. Even if she is a little uncomfortable at first, I want to say that Yuffie is really a very lovable little girl, enthusiastic and confident. Even if she was disgusted by people when she wore pants in the feudal era in the early part of the book, although she is sad, she will persevere. She feels very alive, very vivid, and I am very happy that Yuffie can be herself.

Oh my God, it's actually a serial. It's so good, and the orthopedics and stuff are so delicious [laughing and crying]. You must be together with me. I love them so much. Tsundere will never be withdrawn from the market. We will be really sad if we are not together [crying]

Overall, it's pretty good, except for the heroine's portrayal, which is okay😑... Hmm... Can the heroine's IQ be less unstable? And that emotional intelligence. Really, the heroine is already an adult. It feels like I'm pretending. After all, this is quite normal for many male protagonists. Besides,. I didn't read the rest. The heroine should grow taller, right? One meter and four meters is too extreme. At 1.4 Meters tall, he looks like a child! ! I was shocked when I heard it😦. I hope the heroine will grow taller in the future. At least 162, right?

This book is great😌Dior is a complete tsundere kitten. The setting of sister Yuffie is very complete, the author's writing is also very delicate, and the stand-in for sister Yuffie is simply me😌 Teacher, I will always follow you. . . I stumbled towards you♿♿♿♿I stumbled towards you♿♿♿♿I stumbled towards you♿♿♿♿I stumbled I run towards you ♿♿♿♿ I stumble towards you ♿♿♿♿ I stumble towards you I stumble towards you I stumble I stumble toward you. I stumble toward you. I stumble toward you. I stumble toward you. I stumble toward you. I stumble toward you. I stumble toward you. I stumble toward you. I stumble toward you. I stumble toward you. My sister is still a Pinocchio, so I feel her IQ is a little unstable. Dio and Da Qiao's IQs are very stable👍👍

So pretty! The author is great. When will the update start? Come on, come on! Very much looking forward to it (☆▽☆) I haven't read jojo. This is my first time reading this fanfic. After reading this article, it feels awkward to look for other jojo articles. Completely brought into the character's character written by the author.

It's so well written, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, two chapters in one day is not enough. DIO smells so good, and the orthopedics competition is top notch! I clicked in and saw that there was only this one book. My heart was broken [crying][crying]

Overall, it's a novel that can be read, but maybe when writing a heartthrob plot, you can't get around the character of Silly Baitian. I think it's quite a pity. Because at the beginning, although the heroine was an ordinary person, she was an unusual heroine with great ideas and tenacity, and was very charming, so I think it is normal for Jojo and Dio to fall in love with her. It may be due to illness later on, maybe, and it doesn't mean that the heroine is not strong anymore, but she is very fair, and she doesn't feel as charming as she did at the beginning. I also feel that I can't stand the subsequent characters who fall in love with the heroine. I feel like they don't fall in love with the heroine because of her charm, but because they want to collect stamps and arrange for all the characters to fall in love with the heroine. Of course, this is why everyone sees Heartthrob. Putting aside these, in fact, it is good to just watch it. The best thing to talk about is the relationship with Dio.

The writing is pretty good, and OOC fan fiction is inevitable, so it's already very good. I think the only flaw is that the protagonist's character is too... Emm naive, and her mind is always immature (sorry, the person who pokes my xp the most is a mature bad woman). I support the pseudo-bone (it's cool) In short, it is too young. . . Although, I still really want to see the follow-up interaction, emm, forget it...

The reading experience is pretty good. It is the first JOJO book I have read. Because of this book, I picked up JOJO's Bizarre Adventure. Regarding the plot, some of my subjective feelings (you are right if you say so) I feel like there is something wrong with Yuffie regaining her memory. . . Smooth ( Although I know that Yuffie's stupid and sweet part in the previous part was to give some opportunities to the Joe family, but I really don't care if Joseph lies. Yuffie before going to the desert island was really cool. No one dared to think about how she changed Dio. . . The plot of Yuffie's childhood was okay. She was a subjective little girl, so cute. Strengthen Yuffie's IQ (💦💦💦 Overall, it's not bad. Although there are some minor flaws, it's nothing serious.

I really like the heroine, but I really hope that the heroine can be more discerning and not be too silly and sweet...

It's good to read. Dior's character design is not broken at all. The author's writing style is amazing. I recommend it to those who have never read the original work. It won't affect you [shy]

Excellent writing from the author! The heroine is not immediately invincible (or stunningly beautiful) from the very beginning, she is just a normal, normal, ordinary kid! ! ! It looks cool, but not mindless. Just take a quick look at orthopedics, why can't you update 500 chapters a day? !

A good JO fan, the kind that could be on the list even in Lujiang, but the beginning is a bit rough, but after passing it, it is ok, and then the pace is a little slow (referring to follow the original plot, the plot rhythm of this book is very nice and the setting is also very detailed). Seeing this makes me curious whether this book is only about JO1 or all the way to JO3

It's super, super, super good-looking and super interesting to write. Although I haven't watched JOJO, I feel like I won't be affected even if I haven't watched it. It's super good-looking.

It's so good. The writing is smooth and the plot is fresh. I haven't read such a good fanfic in a long time. Demining: There is a heroine who is more like Mary Sue, but the heroine is a strong type and has fake bones. Almost every generation of the protagonist has a love line. Recommended points: The author is very good. He has written from the first season to the third season. If you haven't read the original work, there is no problem. The characters are described with distinct personalities. The heroine Yuffie traveled through time and became the Diaoye's sister, Dio, who really became a male ghost here. In fact, I think there are a lot of flaws in the early stage, but the more I watch in the later stage, the more I like it. If you have never eaten fine bran, you can try it. It becomes more chewy and chewy like rice. The author is currently writing about the plot of Kakyoin.

Saw Chapter 401, super! ! Super! ! Overtake! ! Class! ! Great! ! The author is so good at writing! ! The tension between the heroine and Dio is awesome! ! Dio is super good! ! But jojo, the gentleman and cutie, is also great! ! I hope to get crazy scores in the future! ! Also, since the second Joe can be arranged in such a reasonable way, then don't let go of the three, four, five and six! ! !