The Speed of the Underworld's Immortal Clan's Rise Scares the World of Immortality!

The protagonist is not a family nanny, but is also actively creating people, which is good. I have always believed that in family novels, if the protagonist does not have his own children in the family, it is better to write about a sect. Moreover, the protagonist can hold on when he should, take action when he should, and his control is also very good. Excellent fairy tale.

This book shows human nature's self-interest to the extreme. You can learn a lot if you read it carefully. I think this book is worth five stars. According to my feeling, this book should be rated at 9 points. I've watched half of it now, what's next? I have no idea. But I think this book is definitely worth 9 points, and the rating is a bit low. Now, there is not a single good word to say about this book. This is the real novel about cultivating immortals. Competing with heaven, not worthy of fighting with earth, can only be fought with people. I have been reading this book for so long, and this book mainly talks about the word struggle. The protagonist has never regretted it since he was a mortal ant to a major cultivator. He has never regretted it, and he cannot regret it.

It's not too much to give yourself a good review [shy]

The title of the book should be changed to: Cultivation of Immortals, Blood Kissing and Sacrifice to Heaven ~ I am so clever and self-righteous and my growth is too slow. I guess I decided to cut it off because of the poor quality of Golden Elixir or Nascent Soul. Although it is not my cup of tea, writing is not easy. I will give you a full star of support and encouragement [Sending Hearts]

Very, very well written. I am a bookworm and rarely give such comments. First, first of all, it does not use a plain and simple writing method to fool people. Instead, the plot design is exciting and reasonable, which is quite unique. Second, it is very rare to be able to vividly and make readers remember the character's personality. Both the protagonist and supporting characters have their own personalities. It is not very facial painting like many other novels on this site. The successful character design here has surpassed 99% of writers. I saw more than 700 chapters and stopped reading. Because it feels like there is nothing left, even though every character can explain himself. But it clearly feels like some of the previous characters have been carved over and over again, turning one line into 3 or 4 lines. I feel like this is meaningless, it emphasizes cause and effect too much, and Wang Tianyou's combat power and experience are more like the protagonist than the protagonist.

I have written more than 7,000 hours of books, and this family book is a very good one. Just write like this in the middle or at the end with this momentum. You must have a place in tomato cultivation

This book can be read as a starting point. Personally, it is quite good and worth looking forward to. I have such a feeling. The only drawback is that the story has not unfolded yet, which is reasonable. After all, a small family does not deserve to know too much. After all, there are so many unbeatable people in the county [laughing]

The developmental golden finger is like this. It is necessary to make a breakthrough before the battle. Usually you have to encounter some difficulties, setbacks, and being framed. No why? Because this is developmental.

As a bookworm of more than ten years, this is a good book that allows me to read dozens of chapters in one night. The characters are basically correct, which is rare in Tomato, and the plot is not procrastinating, which is rare in Tomato. The protagonist is not a virgin, there is a battle of wits, and ancient style words, which is rare everywhere. Summary: This is a rare good book so far. I've read it to Chapter 67. I'll write a follow-up review after I've finished it or when I see something surprising. I said at the time that I would review it after I finished it, and here I am, reading it all in one go. It's so good! Use the small to make the big, defeat the strong with the weak, move with passion, fight for the family, fight with wits, the way of heaven! I can't imagine that it's all in this book. It's a good book that could be published as an anime or a picture book. The one about demons, humans, ghosts, etc. Is even more daring to write. Sometimes I want to turn on the video player while reading. The author is also very attentive, including maps, genealogy of the protagonist, and introductions to the reappearance of long-ago characters. It is definitely a rare good book. Five hundred chapters are simply not enough. It's a joy to read. The author takes too many breaks, and even the production team's donkeys dare not take such a break! ! !

Now that I am reading Chapter 100, my feeling is that it is very uncomfortable to watch. The uncomfortable point may be that the protagonist is really aggrieved. In addition, the beads should be distributed to the enemy, and it is best to absorb the beads when the enemy dies, but the beads are given to oneself. The final outcome of a person is that all his family members will die, which is very uncomfortable, but dividing the beads will make the protagonist's family members better qualified, so it should be divided among the protagonist's own people, but after the beads are divided, they will definitely die, almost all of them will die. I can only say that if you choose this kind of subject or direction, it will be more uncomfortable to read [facepalm]. For example, some fairy tales are about getting stronger as more children are born. But in this novel, the most uncomfortable point is that the family members of the protagonist will become stronger after dividing the beads, and then there is a high probability of a fatal ending. Generally speaking, I can watch it, but I have to be a little more patient. If I endure it to the end, the protagonist will become stronger and stronger, and it may not be as aggrieved as in the early stage, but the more aggrieved it is, the more real it may be, right? But it's really uncomfortable to feel uncomfortable

After reading Chapter 395, the author said that immortality is so wonderful that I couldn't help but say a few words. I don't feel that there is anything wonderful about longevity in this book. Endless fighting, endless turmoil, boring practice, meditation, and retreat. The only driving force in the entire world is to continue the family, or even to continue the family's strongest combat power. Everyone can be sacrificed for the family. What is the purpose of longevity? What is the meaning of family existence? Could it be that the meaning of longevity lies in longevity itself? If I want to live forever, what I want is endless food, drink and fun, or a prosperous family, a nobler state of mind, and endless fun in pursuing the ultimate mysteries of the universe. Only this kind of longevity is worthy of my pursuit. Of course, I'm not saying that this book is not good. I can barely read 300 chapters of a novel about cultivating immortals and still be interested in reading it or even want to read it a second time. This book has done that.

It's good-looking. The protagonist is ruthless and kind to his family. The background plot design is very seductive. There is also a unique training system, the Qi of heaven and earth, etc. I really like it. The author always asks for leave [scrolls] [scrolls], but it is undeniable that it really suits my taste [admiration] [admiration]

I think it's still not ruthless enough. You are afraid of the cause and effect, so you don't dare to use the luck-seizing pearl to massacre those with spiritual roots. Then you lead the demon clan to go to war with the human race, and in the end, when tens of millions of people in history are killed, why don't you share in the cause and effect? The previous experiment with a dozen people with spiritual roots failed to promote the rogue cultivator who used hundreds of thousands of people to kill the entire East Pole.

This book describes the author Li Xuan's gradual growth process from a mortal. This book is very suitable for reading calmly. He is not a cool writer who is directly invincible and then killed instantly. The author uses his own wisdom to improve himself bit by bit and gradually becomes stronger. It is true that a cool book that reaches the sky in one step will make us feel happy, but Even if you read too much, you will feel bored. Every step of the growth of the protagonist in this book is traceable, and it is all through his own efforts. The author has done a good job in writing the plot in a full and full way. A good plot and a good work are worthy of scrutiny and will not make people think about why not do it. This work is, I highly recommend everyone to read it.

It's okay, but there are a lot of typos across the board. I don't know if they have been corrected.

The writing is very good, except for the protagonist's golden finger, which has a weak presence, everything else is excellent. The plot, rhythm, and excitement are all good. It's neither invincible nor frustrating. The protagonist and supporting characters all have intelligence and character.

After watching it for a long time, I felt pretty good. It's a bit similar to Xuanjian Xianzu but in a different style. It is a group portrait novel with a protagonist. The protagonist is not an upright monk, but one who does whatever it takes to develop his family.

Except for a few minor bugs, there are no major problems. I don't see any major flaws. The foreshadowing is good and the plot is good. The ending of the East Pole chapter is a bit broken. The rest of the rhythm is very good, but the group portrait gave me the feeling of being a group portrait at the beginning. After that, almost all of them are Li Xuan. The other characters are basically mentioned in one stroke. Maybe it caters to the public. The group portrait story is a bit weak. I recommend it and it ranks among the top of the family cultivating immortals that I have read recently. Good grass. I hope there will be more surprises in the future. Finally, please update.

This book is okay and one of the few family stories that can be read on Tomato. However, there are still some shortcomings in character portrayal. Daozi generation and Xunzi generation are obviously already high-ranking members of the family, but in my mind they are still babies, and they have no feeling of living for hundreds of years. In addition, Li Xuan's legitimate heirs are too casual, and the eldest son died. Li Mingyue and Mingzhu have some impressions. Mingyue has been invisible since she resigned as the head of the family, let alone Li Xuan's grandson and great-grandson. Since it is a family portrait story, the protagonist's direct heir should have enough roles and be strong enough. In addition to these, there is another shortcoming that this world view is too small, Dongji is small, Eternal is also small, and the level is too rough. I forgot where the Li family was initially. Later it was in Changning Mansion, and there are several other mansions at the same level. It is Zhao State at the top, and it disappears as it goes up. Including in Eternal Time, the Li family was first on Black Gel Island, then on Qingming Tower, and on top of that was Qingmu Sect, and then the Holy Land, which was too rough and had too few levels. I originally thought that the Li family could go from the Li family of Changning Prefecture to the Li family of Zhao Kingdom, from the Li family of Qingming Que to the Li family of Qingmu Sect to the Li family of XX Holy Land. And after reaching Eternal, I feel that the description of the same-level forces is no longer good, and the descriptions are more about Tushan, the Dragon Clan, etc. Although it may highlight the power of the protagonist, this is a family story, the heritage of the family. The development of the family should be reflected in crushing other forces of the same level, and it can be reflected in the power of the juniors in the clan. However, except for the description of the juniors related to the family leader, there is really nothing else. Having said that, I actually hope that the author can take a step closer and write so well while still in school. The future is really promising. One of my favorite family novels is Protecting Our Patriarch. I hope the author can surpass him one day. Come on!

It's too slow to write. When did you reach the golden elixir and get out of Novice Village to start a big career? This is so difficult to write. Don't keep plotting in the back. Strength can break everything. The protagonist's strength improves too slowly.

It took me a few days to read 400 chapters. It's a Tomato-topped book. The characters are rich and the plot is compact. Worth a look. Disadvantages: But in the climax at the end of the first big map (Dongji Island), it feels like the author has reached the limit of his writing power. Not to mention crashing. For ten or twenty consecutive chapters, the protagonist group did almost nothing. The climax is just filling in the gaps, and it is related to the protagonist group but not much. The protagonist group is just passive acceptance and spectators. More than 400 maps were changed and there were still connection problems. Coupled with the previous ending, although it was shocking, it gave me the feeling that fatalism is not good. There are more than 400 new maps, which are foreshadowing, but the connection is not close. There are not many links to the overall plot. It can be said that what follows is a new story and a new novel. Take a break and continue reading when you have the chance.

I have to say, the writing is very good. Golden Finger, combines luck-taking and Taoist demonic attributes Personality, cautious, bold and careful, good mind Finally, the characters are well drawn, with each person's unique personality and way of describing things, and the comics are drawn in a narrative way. If you have a complete outline and write about 1.5 Million words at your current level, your score should be 8.8 Or higher if you don't want to improve. Author Come on [Like]

I haven't read Chapter 587 yet. The lightning protection point of this book: It can be said that the protagonist's family, apart from having some feelings for family members, are all the family's assets to outsiders. The protagonist's family can kill irrelevant mortals at will in order to gain wealth, and kill good monks who protect mortals in order to improve their talents. For the sake of profit, he can betray the human race and completely surrender to the demon race. It can be said that this is a cannibal family. They have feelings internally and are demon cultivators externally. They developed step by step from devouring the bones of countless people. To read this article, you need to lower your sense of morality. In terms of the plot, the protagonist's family was a little frustrated when they were in the novice village. They were played by Zhao Yi without knowing it. Then Zhao Yi's death had nothing to do with the protagonist. It would be great if the protagonist could be related to Zhao Yi's death. This feeling of not being up or down is not good. There is no plot about slapping the Tu family in the face, so I was looking forward to it. Not bad, four stars for encouragement.

A good book is a good book, but people like me don't recommend reading it. It's just not cool, but cold-blooded. Either he is forbearing, or he is on the road to forbearance. But there's nothing wrong with it, it really needs to be hidden, but I can't stand it anymore. I've read more than 100 chapters. Let's kill some time and change books. [Shy]

Much prettier than those 9 o'clock ones. I hope the updates won't stop. The author keeps at it.

The pace is neither too fast nor too slow, and it is well grasped. It just allows you to have a good overview of the plot behind it. Don't deliberately foreshadow the plot, and sort out the general outline. This will be a book worth following.

The best in family novels, unlike other family novels that do not have a clear protagonist. In this book, the author knows who is the center, and the characterization is very good. I am not a person who likes kind-hearted Madonna novels. This book has a good sense of proportion, does not kill indiscriminately, and is not very righteous. It maximizes its own interests. This is what family novels need.

How can I put it? The author has good intentions, but it's a bit serious to borrow "imitation". Let's see when he comes out with his own style. The five-star praise can be regarded as drawing a map for the author.

The biggest fun in this book - Zhao Wanyue, a pure fun person. In order to maintain the balance of the East Pole, she planned for 30,000 years, but ended up destroying the East Pole. Just say sorry and it's over? A person who thinks highly of himself.

This is a really nice book. Because of the name, I thought I was going to practice magic, so I almost didn't read it. The step-by-step plot made me fall in love with family novels. I just don't know if the eldest son will return to the family in the future. It's too slow to catch up on updates. Author. Su Geng, at what age are you still able to sleep?