Pokémon Starts with Unova

Write in the third person, not the first person. You are writing a novel, not a biography or essay. OK?

It's pretty good [like]. From an objective evaluation, the beginning is a bit boring and the main plot is a bit confusing, which is really hard to wrap your head around. But you can also persist. After reading more than a dozen pictures, the main line will be clarified, and you will have a three-dimensional concept of the protagonist's image, and the situation will be much better. The author is good at writing emotional dramas, but I don't know what race the heroine is [laughs evilly] I'm looking forward to it. I didn't see that the author is a man or a woman when I looked at the homepage, but I clearly feel that the author's writing style is more delicate. The first few chapters are really bad. It's understandable that some people can't bear it and leave, but if you can stick to the end, you can read it more comfortably and without any poison. This book feels a bit tepid, but I still hope the author can write it to the end and leave an ending to the world in the book! Send some gifts to support the author, I hope the author understands! The author only needs to write the book, and those of us who are pursuing reading have more to think about [sneaky laugh] [OK] (Naruto's voice) In short, come on, author [like]! If the author writes the next book, I will follow it vigorously if the subject matter interests me.

Yes, it has the feel of a sea-running story, and with the addition of various delicacies, it is an unexpected subject matter. Even other Pokémon farming stories have only briefly touched on food and other things, let alone this kind of sea-going activity. I still quite like this [laughter]

It is expected to be comparable to or even surpass those Pokémon farming articles, and the writing style is delicate and smooth enough, just like drinking a cup of tea, comfortable and warm.

I hope the author insists that the plot can be really novel. The real Dragon Reshiram offline is also very real and thoughtful. Please don't finish it in a hurry.

I just like this kind of plainness

It's been a long time since I found a good article about daily farming~

A very good article on elf united farming

This is the first time I've seen a text with cherry blossoms as the text. Anyway, it's quite pretty.

Nice! Love watching! More! ! ! If you like plain farming stories, no cheats, you can read it. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]So the author quickly updates

Although I can't understand it, the bond between people and Pokémon is exactly what I want to see. It's really touching.

Except for a little bit, there is no problem,

Traveling to Xicui is a bit abrupt, but everything else is fine.

So great, so sweet, I love it so much, ah, this plot is great

We found a small amount of novels among a large number of memes [laughing]

Although it is not the best Pokémon novel I have ever read, it is the most touching Pokémon novel I have ever read.

It's okay ~ it looks pretty good? Big cheers for the author

What a beautiful book. Must recommend

It's okay, but it's a little bumpy at the back.

[Top post][Top post]It's very interesting. I hope there will be more daily life with the elves. Post it[Top post]

It's not bad. Except for the fast pace at some times, the rest is okay. The plot is relatively leisurely and has nothing to do with the Pokémon gym flow. It's a good book. Come on.

The plot is very good and very real

Wuhu, hehe, it's so beautiful

Very good book

What an interesting book about farming Pokémon

Very well written, thank you to the author!

Do it faster, do it faster

Still a very good novel

Great book, why did I just discover it now [face covering]

It's pretty good. I really like this style of Pokémon writing.