[Dismantling CP + fandom + yandere]
Because I chose Tianxiang, who has a huge appetite, I was cheated by Qingmei Chai and accidentally traveled to the world of Ke Xue.
The pseudonym is Hoshino Yusho, and he has a pair of childhood sweethearts (Kudo Shinichi, Maori Ran, Suzuki Sonoko)
Later, he went to live in the United States with his divorced mother.
Met Takema's mother (Kudo Yukiko)
When I skipped a grade, I met Miyano Shiho who was isolated from the whole class.
Belmod: "samele" fallen angel.
Pretending to be Kaitou Kidd.
…
Later, he returned to Neon, lived in a home where his father remarried, and met his half-sister.
Due to mission requirements, I disguised myself as a high school student to continue going to school, and met too many yanderes.
Let's see if Hoshino Yusei will make the same mistake again.
Reader comments
The author has finished writing.
Why do you say that? The title of the book says that it is for all ages, but now no one can eat it, and all they eat is second-hand Obasan. The introduction says that it is about dismantling CP, but now it is suspected that it is a gift for a girl, and the gift is Mao Lilan, one of the core characters of Conan fan fiction. The kindergarten chapter has become deeply dependent on the protagonist, and the overseas chapter has many ambiguous scenes with the protagonist.
The plot reads like this: "'You...' The silver-haired murderer finally put down his gun, covered his bleeding abdomen, and slowly walked towards the boy in white. Seeing this, Kudo Shinichi quickly picked up Xiaolan and ran downstairs."
This plot is from the original work, and the author has not changed much at all. Then the boy in white is the protagonist, and Shinichi also likes Xiaolan. As a result, the protagonist watched Shinichi carry Xiaolan out. Is your husband guilty of this? It's interesting. This plot is just like a movie version in which Kidd disguised himself as Shinichi and held hands with Xiaolan in the swimming pool, while Shinichi (Conan at this time) could only scratch his head on the shore. It made people laugh and made the whole family laugh.
Oh, there is also a plot where Yukiko cheers for Shinichi and supports Shinichi in conquering Xiaolan. Someone posted the original text of this plot in the comment area, so everyone has their own opinions.
The author said this - in Chapter 47, someone asked Xiaolan if she didn't want it anymore, and then the author replied on October 19th saying why (the word "this" was typed as "how" in the original reply), that is to say, Xiaolan was still the heroine at this time, but on October 20th, the author clearly replied in the comment area that Xiaolan was no longer the heroine. (In the comment No. 20, The author first said no, and then replied no in the comment No. I don't know which sentence the author was referring to. Someone later asked if Xiaolan was going to be given to Shinichi. The author didn't reply, so I assumed that Xiaolan was going to be given away.)
Probably there was something wrong with the writing of this plot. Too many people talked about it, and the author lost his guard. He got angry and decided not to write about Xiaolan. Oh~, let me ask the author, Xiaolan had so many interactions with the protagonist before, especially in the kindergarten chapter. Because the protagonist took care of Xiaolan, Xiaolan was deeply dependent on the protagonist, to the point where she would not marry if she was not the protagonist. The protagonist went to the United States and burst into tears when Xiaolan learned about it, went out to find the protagonist alone, and even fell down on the road. What are these plots?
Just see if the readers who stayed because of the interaction between Xiaolan and the protagonist will continue to read, and then pray that the readers who are lost because of these plots will not be a large proportion of your existing readers.
Obviously the kindergarten chapter was quite well written, but when it came to the American chapter, it was as if someone else had written it: the protagonist had a split personality, and his actions were completely different from those in the kindergarten chapter, and even worse than the protagonist in the kindergarten chapter; all kinds of poisonous points were repeated again and again. In addition to giving away a daughter, I saw someone in the comment section said that the daughter would die. The author put himself into the game and tested various minefields. It really didn't move God or earth, only moved myself. By the way, when the author wrote that Belmod and the protagonist were going to live together, he said that he cried when he wrote about it. It is suspected that the author suffered from chuunibyou + literary youth syndrome.
I'm really stupid. I know that once a book is touched by literary youth, it will probably not have any good results, but I still keep reading with the idea of trusting the author. The result is history. Alas, I wish you a great sale and bid farewell.
Can you take Yingli in as well? [Laughs crookedly]
Personally, I think it's pretty good. The plot design is novel and it's quite interesting to read. I hope the author will continue to work hard and readers will always support the author. Don't interrupt like the author of Qidian. Those who interrupt are really hateful. It's not easy to create. Five-star support.
It's pretty cool, and the main character is a real succubus [laughing evilly]
I'm waiting for the plot between Shiho and the yandere mother [laughter]
I feel like this book made Shinichi turn into a pervert [laughs evilly]
And with such a great system that caters to both young and old, you can't even live up to your mother, right? So I also suggest that you hypnotize your mother as well [please update]
Very good, the characters are well created, and daily life is also described in detail. The protagonist's various talents, martial arts, and talents are deepened. It clearly starts with a kindergarten flirting with children and adults [laughing] This is a story about an 18-year-old. Author, you can create a group, and I will donate two packs of cigarettes to take a closer look at the details [laughing]
I have kept it on the bookshelf for a long time. I couldn't help reading it at chapter 61, but it ended there. The author's writing is so good. Even Kudo Shinichi looks so cute. I'm really impressed. I feel like the story just fucking disappeared at the beginning. There are still a lot of hidden characters that I need to unlock! [Cry]
This novel is amazing. It's the character of the yandere mother. It's easy to get this book blocked. If the relationship doesn't work well later on, I'll get blocked immediately.
Has the author written a book on Qidian before?
Come on, I feel like changing the title of the novel will make it more popular. If I hadn't been in a book vortex recently, I probably wouldn't have clicked in just by looking at the title.
But I have to say that this novel is a very good-looking novel.
Nice! Worth five stars!
Awesome, but I feel like it will be banned. Watch it sooner rather than later.
I came here for you Conan, why did you suddenly lie? My protagonist's mother is gone too?
It's very beautiful. Why doesn't the author update it? [Crazy]
The author's writing is so promising, and he is too afraid of being banned [face covering] [blowing kiss] [admiration] [love] [love] [please update]
Well, not bad, a bit interesting
Super good book, Conan fan
It's a little bit. Can you sort out Dagang?
Where is the protagonist's mother! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Don't bury it
It's good-looking, but I feel like the author is trying to test it when it comes to review [laughs crookedly]
As long as the CP is removed, it will definitely be five stars
Is there a group? Author, I want to see some details [laughs evilly]
Is Xiaolan the heroine? If so, the relationship between Xiaolan and Shinichi is a bit close, which is a bit poisonous.
After staying up all day and night, I finally caught up. The author's update steps. Author, if you continue to update, I will be so excited that I can't sleep.
Why doesn't the protagonist's mother show up?
It's written a little sweetly. This is too toxic. As many women as there are women. If the mother is not biological, then she is not biological, and it doesn't matter if she is the heroine. It would be nice to write it a little sweeter. In fact, it would be fine if there are more female protagonists. A little sweeter. The protagonist is strengthened again. In fact, this book is quite good and there is no need to replace it. Mainly because the back part is too poisonous. Brother, I have read a book before. What's better than that? It's about 9 o'clock. Even if you are not poisonous at all, I think you have good potential.
I came to the moderator. .
Please revive me
People who think the same way will find it particularly beautiful. If you can't accept it, don't watch it.
Everything else is fine, except what I don't like about his mother.
The subject matter is good and the writing is good, but well, why is it like this? I still hope it is more normal, not...
The author has finished writing. Why do you say that? The title of the book says that it is for all ages, but now no one can eat it, and all they eat is second-hand Obasan. The introduction says that it is about dismantling CP, but now it is suspected that it is a gift for a girl, and the gift is Mao Lilan, one of the core characters of Conan fan fiction. The kindergarten chapter has become deeply dependent on the protagonist, and the overseas chapter has many ambiguous scenes with the protagonist. The plot reads like this: "'You...' The silver-haired murderer finally put down his gun, covered his bleeding abdomen, and slowly walked towards the boy in white. Seeing this, Kudo Shinichi quickly picked up Xiaolan and ran downstairs." This plot is from the original work, and the author has not changed much at all. Then the boy in white is the protagonist, and Shinichi also likes Xiaolan. As a result, the protagonist watched Shinichi carry Xiaolan out. Is your husband guilty of this? It's interesting. This plot is just like a movie version in which Kidd disguised himself as Shinichi and held hands with Xiaolan in the swimming pool, while Shinichi (Conan at this time) could only scratch his head on the shore. It made people laugh and made the whole family laugh. Oh, there is also a plot where Yukiko cheers for Shinichi and supports Shinichi in conquering Xiaolan. Someone posted the original text of this plot in the comment area, so everyone has their own opinions. The author said this - in Chapter 47, someone asked Xiaolan if she didn't want it anymore, and then the author replied on October 19th saying why (the word "this" was typed as "how" in the original reply), that is to say, Xiaolan was still the heroine at this time, but on October 20th, the author clearly replied in the comment area that Xiaolan was no longer the heroine. (In the comment No. 20, The author first said no, and then replied no in the comment No. I don't know which sentence the author was referring to. Someone later asked if Xiaolan was going to be given to Shinichi. The author didn't reply, so I assumed that Xiaolan was going to be given away.) Probably there was something wrong with the writing of this plot. Too many people talked about it, and the author lost his guard. He got angry and decided not to write about Xiaolan. Oh~, let me ask the author, Xiaolan had so many interactions with the protagonist before, especially in the kindergarten chapter. Because the protagonist took care of Xiaolan, Xiaolan was deeply dependent on the protagonist, to the point where she would not marry if she was not the protagonist. The protagonist went to the United States and burst into tears when Xiaolan learned about it, went out to find the protagonist alone, and even fell down on the road. What are these plots? Just see if the readers who stayed because of the interaction between Xiaolan and the protagonist will continue to read, and then pray that the readers who are lost because of these plots will not be a large proportion of your existing readers. Obviously the kindergarten chapter was quite well written, but when it came to the American chapter, it was as if someone else had written it: the protagonist had a split personality, and his actions were completely different from those in the kindergarten chapter, and even worse than the protagonist in the kindergarten chapter; all kinds of poisonous points were repeated again and again. In addition to giving away a daughter, I saw someone in the comment section said that the daughter would die. The author put himself into the game and tested various minefields. It really didn't move God or earth, only moved myself. By the way, when the author wrote that Belmod and the protagonist were going to live together, he said that he cried when he wrote about it. It is suspected that the author suffered from chuunibyou + literary youth syndrome. I'm really stupid. I know that once a book is touched by literary youth, it will probably not have any good results, but I still keep reading with the idea of trusting the author. The result is history. Alas, I wish you a great sale and bid farewell.
Can you take Yingli in as well? [Laughs crookedly]
Personally, I think it's pretty good. The plot design is novel and it's quite interesting to read. I hope the author will continue to work hard and readers will always support the author. Don't interrupt like the author of Qidian. Those who interrupt are really hateful. It's not easy to create. Five-star support.
It's pretty cool, and the main character is a real succubus [laughing evilly]
I'm waiting for the plot between Shiho and the yandere mother [laughter] I feel like this book made Shinichi turn into a pervert [laughs evilly]
And with such a great system that caters to both young and old, you can't even live up to your mother, right? So I also suggest that you hypnotize your mother as well [please update]
Very good, the characters are well created, and daily life is also described in detail. The protagonist's various talents, martial arts, and talents are deepened. It clearly starts with a kindergarten flirting with children and adults [laughing] This is a story about an 18-year-old. Author, you can create a group, and I will donate two packs of cigarettes to take a closer look at the details [laughing]
I have kept it on the bookshelf for a long time. I couldn't help reading it at chapter 61, but it ended there. The author's writing is so good. Even Kudo Shinichi looks so cute. I'm really impressed. I feel like the story just fucking disappeared at the beginning. There are still a lot of hidden characters that I need to unlock! [Cry]
This novel is amazing. It's the character of the yandere mother. It's easy to get this book blocked. If the relationship doesn't work well later on, I'll get blocked immediately.
Has the author written a book on Qidian before?
Come on, I feel like changing the title of the novel will make it more popular. If I hadn't been in a book vortex recently, I probably wouldn't have clicked in just by looking at the title. But I have to say that this novel is a very good-looking novel.
Nice! Worth five stars!
Awesome, but I feel like it will be banned. Watch it sooner rather than later.
I came here for you Conan, why did you suddenly lie? My protagonist's mother is gone too?
It's very beautiful. Why doesn't the author update it? [Crazy]
The author's writing is so promising, and he is too afraid of being banned [face covering] [blowing kiss] [admiration] [love] [love] [please update]
Well, not bad, a bit interesting
Super good book, Conan fan
It's a little bit. Can you sort out Dagang?
Where is the protagonist's mother! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Don't bury it
It's good-looking, but I feel like the author is trying to test it when it comes to review [laughs crookedly]
As long as the CP is removed, it will definitely be five stars Is there a group? Author, I want to see some details [laughs evilly]
Is Xiaolan the heroine? If so, the relationship between Xiaolan and Shinichi is a bit close, which is a bit poisonous.
After staying up all day and night, I finally caught up. The author's update steps. Author, if you continue to update, I will be so excited that I can't sleep.
Why doesn't the protagonist's mother show up? It's written a little sweetly. This is too toxic. As many women as there are women. If the mother is not biological, then she is not biological, and it doesn't matter if she is the heroine. It would be nice to write it a little sweeter. In fact, it would be fine if there are more female protagonists. A little sweeter. The protagonist is strengthened again. In fact, this book is quite good and there is no need to replace it. Mainly because the back part is too poisonous. Brother, I have read a book before. What's better than that? It's about 9 o'clock. Even if you are not poisonous at all, I think you have good potential.
I came to the moderator. .
Please revive me
People who think the same way will find it particularly beautiful. If you can't accept it, don't watch it.
Everything else is fine, except what I don't like about his mother.
The subject matter is good and the writing is good, but well, why is it like this? I still hope it is more normal, not...