Yandere Immortal Maidens, Stay Away from Me!

What can I say, this novel was quite uncomfortable for me to read. It's not a brainless article, but from my personal point of view, the misunderstanding between the male and female protagonists is purely due to the difference in strength between the two parties, and the male protagonist's inner bottom line (a psychiatrist cannot fall in love with a patient). However, the nnd male protagonist feels emotionally indecisive and not as selfish as a cultivator, but it is in line with the image of this book. However, I felt really uncomfortable watching it. Maybe it's because I usually read too many refreshing novels. The author should update more [Blow kiss] to see when the male protagonist starts to improve his strength, otherwise it will always be misunderstanding between the man and the woman because he is too good at it. Well, how should I put it, it is quite helpless. [Pout] This book really made me feel helpless, but I slowly waited for the scene of chasing my husband in the crematorium later, so the author updated 5 times a day. I want to ask when the male protagonist can really upgrade [what]

Shangguan is well portrayed. At first sight, she only thinks of a down-and-out woman looking for an honest protagonist to stay by his side. Later, she slowly changes. In the end, she is really a good woman with love and righteousness. Her mental journey is well written and her transformation is reasonable. She always assumes a very upright position (maidservant) to the outside world. This is well portrayed. Although she has hard-to-control feelings for the protagonist, she is still outside. She is only called a maidservant and at the same time protects the protagonist's perfect body, and at the same time takes care of the stupid protagonist meticulously. This feeling of contradiction, the attitude of serving the benefactor in the early stage, and then the love between man and woman, and then begging others to save and protect the protagonist like a biological mother. This complex emotion, the three emotions of mother, son and Taoist couple are intertwined, it is really good

So far, I feel it's okay, but I don't want too many chapters about the abuser, and the protagonist should be strengthened. It's best to mention the abuse of the main character at the end of the chapter in the chapter title, because some people don't like to read abuse stories [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully].

A suggestion to the author, if you want to make the story have a perfect ending, for the first three, that is, Liu, Zeng, and Yan (Yan may have a little room for whitewashing, but Liu and Zeng are really hard to get rid of if they are not dead or worse than dead, since they casually believe in false accusations against the protagonist) They have no forgiveness value in the beginning) These people cannot forgive and get back together in the end, and give Liu, Shangguan and others a good ending, otherwise it will make readers feel depressed in their hearts. It doesn't matter if the story is a bit sadistic in the early stage, but please have a better ending. I hope the author can read this and give it five stars. I hope you can continue writing.

Although they are all the same old routines, they are unexpectedly good-looking when written from a different angle. The author is also very good at using words. However, this type of writing feels easier at the beginning, but I got better and lost it later. I hope the author can stick to it and have a good ending in the end.

The author is taking his time and polishing it, looking forward to the plot of Senior Sister Liu, hoping it won't be too bloody. For you to keep updating and you to update chapters, I will never read a chapter for your data.

Author, I feel that the book you wrote is so in line with my taste, I will give you a five-star rating directly. I just like this kind of serious story written bit by bit. It's not like the cool stories that are all on the tomato market now. As you read, sometimes it's very nonsensical and boring. I won't say more. The author will update me quickly!!! Author, I am about to go to school, I am asking you here, wait for me to come back in a week. Does the protagonist regain his sanity? Can you regain your sanity?

A different type of book. I started reading it because of the title. Later, I became obsessed with it and brought myself into the protagonist. The feeling of heartbreak was uncomfortable. Yes, how can life be smooth sailing? Thank you to the author.

Good book, I thought it was (lighthearted and funny) the more I read it, the more it became more and more cliché. It was too cliché and I couldn't read it. Although I gave up, this book is really good and suitable for those who like to read sadistic stories. Anyway, I am a reader who has always liked to read (lighthearted and funny). I endured the discomfort and read the latest chapter. I really didn't want to read it anymore. I read it because I respect this good book, which is not bad. Sorry, I gave up. (But this is a really good book) (Recommended for those who like sadistic stories, but don't read it if you like lighthearted and funny genres, it's easy to read emo) Goodbye author, I hope there will be good books that I can keep chasing in the future

This book can be called excellent in Tomato. At first, I thought it was a routine story, but I found that the author still detailed each person's character and the plot was consistent. But it is undeniable that in order to promote the development of the plot, there are flaws in the plot. Some of the emotions were not portrayed deeply enough, which made me unable to empathize while reading. Overall, I still like this story very much. I hope the author will work harder.