Sun Knight: Starting with Purifying Succubi

Okay, does this count as a green article?

How should I put it? There is a clear feeling that the process is written according to the results. As soon as the maid appeared on the scene, she could feel that there was a high probability that there was something wrong. The male protagonist is also written as a big unlucky guy. Anyone who is a female will hate the male protagonist and his personality is not very good. How can the son of an earl be so angry every day? Even if the princess hates verbal attacks in public, the guards can just step on her.

Isn't the fate of the maid in the hands of the master? If you want any evidence, you can get it through an interrogation.

Compared with traditional Western fantasy, it is okay and worth watching. There are also detective plots. These are good and not too in-depth. The estimated reason for the negative review is that the book gave away a girl at the beginning, which is not acceptable to everyone. After all, his soul was taken away, and he slept with his first girl. It was a bit uncomfortable for readers who feel like they have a sense of substitution. Although the author later made a patch, the succubus who slept with him was a girl, and later on Will join the protagonist's harem, but many people stop watching it when they see the girl being given away at the beginning, so you need to be patient to read it slowly. Personally, I would like to suggest that you change the beginning. For example, when the succubus is signing a contract, and before she succeeds, you travel through time and take her place, but halfway through, you lose your mind and just sleep with the heroine. This will be much better, and you will not be scolded later. What you wrote before feels a bit cuckolding to readers, no one will like it.

The strength is unknown. What is a high level? It's just a measure of it? Does that depend on talent or training? What is the point of controlling high-level players? High-level players can completely replace them with a large number of low-level players, with fewer resources. Moreover, if the low-level players run for 10 minutes first, the high-level players will not be able to catch up. The combat power collapsed, the genius could not beat the lower level at home, and the epic was controlled and provoked by Bai Yin's calculations. A battle of wits? The protagonist is led by the nose, and the conspiracy is not like a conspiracy. The secret agent is dead and has no effect at all. There is no conspiracy. The conspiracy must be done, but it cannot be done. Just write a letter of challenge that will make sense. There is no confrontation at all from beginning to end. Intelligence, if you just write about the protagonist's IQ, don't add this label, it won't be reflected. The system is chaotic, what are you talking about, sequence, science fiction, fantasy, fantasy, fantasy, self-creation? The low-level ones can absorb high-level immortals across ten levels, but the high-level ones are resisting and losing against the ordinary low-level ones. There are too many problems with traveling and combat performance, and the judgment is purely based on eyesight. There are also problems with the inheritance of knowledge. What the nobles know is not known to the royal family, especially when knowledge equals power. The powerful forces are also wrong. They use high-end props and no one is in charge. The weak forces are humiliating the big forces. The big forces are being humiliated in all aspects. Why is it the dominant force? The plot of the mission was not explained clearly. The mission was either led by high-level officials or important figures. Either way, there were guards. Normally, the equivalent number of people would have to beat the regular army, and TM was almost captured by bandits.

After reading a few chapters, I found that the male protagonist came through after the fact and got nothing. Then he got into a lot of nonsense and had no opinion. The story was coerced by the plot and started to develop. It was very frustrating. If there is a twist in the future, I will not comment on it. I can't watch it anymore.

Author, let's look at the title and content, not the reasoning. Chapter 9 (I saw Chapter 9) continues with a set of reasoning (as for the following, I don't know that the theme should be at least 12 chapters after looking at the title). Are you writing reasoning? , Looking at your reasoning, I began to suspect that I was writing a suspense story.

This is a really awesome start, as soon as Conan is possessed, the fantasy novel is full of reasoning.

The biggest problem at the moment is that the royal family seems to have only one high-end combat power, the princess, so she is always alone. It's quite strange how this country exists.

I came in after seeing the title, but it turned out that you wrote so many mysteries for a fantasy night novel, and the male protagonist felt aggrieved and was useless, ugh! I don't want to look down at all