No, Should I Be a Brother-In-Law or a Brother-In-Law?

Overall, it seems okay. The author's writing is good, but the plot is a bit cliche. It's totally fine to read it as a sweet article. The following are some of my personal views and suggestions on the plot: For example, the beautiful woman in the opening scene was drugged and hugged and kissed the male protagonist to create contact. I really want to say that this is not just out of the tiger's den and into the wolf's den? It's just that one is strong and the other is slow, and the male protagonist's style is to take the long term to catch the big fish. It also uses large strokes of ink to establish the image of a gentleman for the male protagonist, and it conflicts with the male protagonist's original desire to see sex. It's not like Shuangwen's strong senseless slap in the face, and it seems a bit awkward if it's true. And the "fishing law enforcement" at the back. I don't quite agree with the plot design of the fishing law enforcement. The concept is a bit wrong, just like knowing that someone is greedy for money, and then deliberately putting money in front of him to lure him to steal, and then using this as evidence to call the police to arrest him. The logic is not correct. It would be more reasonable to change the plot to an attempted rape and then the male protagonist call the police to arrest him. The above are just my personal opinions and thoughts. The author's writing is still very good. The writing style is good and the emotional portrayal is quite delicate. I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you.

I feel like the author probably wrote this novel after watching the movie Kaede and Ling

The writing is very good, suitable for reading, and quite sweet. I don't know why the rating is low. It's just that there are not many people seeing it. The articles are all like this. They are not particularly distinctive. The articles that are particularly attractive are almost not too popular. This is a good story. I think you can imagine it, you can bless it, and you can have it. It's very warm, a little plain, but it seems real. Ordinary people are just like that. I've seen too many awesome protagonists, so it's good to watch this. At least it returns to reality. [Salute] [Salute] [Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute]

This book is the ceiling in my heart. The two female protagonists are my favorite, but I can't find a few copies on Tomato. The only shortcoming for me personally is that the sister's character does not meet my expectations. The elder sister should be mature, sensible, gentle and considerate, know how to take care of people, and should not be taken care of by the male protagonist. The younger sister is still relatively perfect, after all, she is a little baby [Cool]

The author must insist on updating, and don't stop updating. It's hard to find a book that you like [blowing kiss][admiration][please update]

«Maple and Ling» novel version [Note]

Rigorous structure and clear logic: The overall structure of the novel is rigorous and logical, with natural connections between chapters and no redundancy, showing the author's superb narrative skills and ability to control long novels.

I saw two big words - science fiction

Sweet, it's a bit hard for the male protagonist to be in two different situations

Author, I really like your books. It's been a long time since I've seen such a beautiful novel with two female protagonists [crying]

Five-star praise, it's so good, hahaha, I'm not flattering you, it's really good, I finished it in half a day, the content is too little, two chapters in one day is not enough, please come on, author✊[Like][Like] Woohoo~(>_<)~, I think the writing is quite good, quite sweet, and not toxic at all. Why is the score so low? I don't understand.

I have been looking for a novel with twin heroines for a long time, and I finally found it. It is so well written. I am very grateful to the author [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying] Loyalty

Although it's a running story, it's still pretty good-looking, at least it satisfies Xiaotou. Except for a few surprises about being drugged at the beginning, it's harmless. There's no ambiguous plot and disgusting things like pulling other men. It's much more normal than sneaking to a bar or getting drunk at a class reunion. At least he has moral values ​​and is a normal person. As we all know, it's very difficult to see a character with moral values.

No knives, no torture, no plot, just daily interactions, similar to that novel with three female protagonists (Qingmei and her sister fight again), they are all very good, I like them

Marrying Two Sisters at One Time is a good daily novel. Worth a look!

What position to sleep in can lead to such a sweet dream?

The favorability is too high in the early stage, the plot and emotional foreshadowing in the mid-term are not enough, and the progress is too fast, but the later stage is not bad.

I don't care if I delete it, but a friend of mine may be sweating a little. He feels uncomfortable and wants to sleep. Of course it's not me. I've always been good at it. Look at it from a bystander's point of view, so it won't break the defense. I just want to take care of my friend's feelings. He has broken the defense a little, so I suggest you delete it. Of course, it's up to you to delete it. I don't feel it. I just feel aggrieved for my friend. It's not that easy to break the defense. [Cry][cry][cry]

The plot is interesting. There are only two female protagonists. I don't think it's disgusting after watching it. Although there are a few unreasonable ones, I can't help but it's sweet. [Admiration] The author will update it quickly. It's not enough [please update] (These are my personal opinions, don't criticize if you don't like it)

Seriously praised, I hope it's not the author's autobiography😱

The last book I accidentally read was a sadistic and difficult-to-control novel similar to "The 26-Year-Old Female Tenant". Fortunately, I read this book and it relieved my mood. This book is really sweet, full of daily interactions between the male and female protagonists. But I started skipping around chapter 120, and I got tired of watching the interactions between the male and female protagonists. I suggested adding something else to the next book.

I seriously doubt that the author came up with this idea after reading Feng and Ling. He also wrote sweet articles and was more cruel than me, a single guy.

It's so sweet. This male protagonist, in his previous life, was no longer as simple as saving the galaxy. He should have participated in the creation of Pangu to have such a blessing.

The sweetness is beyond the limit. Brothers, if you like sweet stories, just read it. There is no knife or poison at all in the book. It is very, very good. We read novels just to feel comfortable, so I listened to my suggestion and asked [shy]

Hurry up and update it ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhinging [anger][angry][angry][angry]

I like it very much, the two heroines, the sister rice bowl is so delicious, it's so sweet to me

Damn, it's pure science fiction.

Feng and Ling's sense of sight [sneaky laugh]

Science fiction film, material for dreams [face covering] [face covering]

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