Showdown! Start with a Maxed Out Groudon

This book is quite good. It has few poisonous points. It's nice and interesting. It's just a little short. The author added two more chapters. There are very few novels of this quality on Tomato. Although it's not as good as some paid fan fiction, it's already considered a very high category on Tomato. I don't know why the rating is so low.

Hee hee [please pay attention] [please pay attention] [please pay attention] Can I be thick-skinned and give myself a five-star review?

I finished reading it in one go. I don't have any problems. It has real numerical values ​​as a guarantee and I'm not aggrieved. The shortcoming is that it's written with a single female protagonist. There is only one human female protagonist. What should I do about Gardevoir? Also, the update is slow and short. It disappears after turning two pages. Let's see what the author writes later. So far, it looks good.

There are no other big problems, but the protagonist has a background and strength, so there is no need to follow the school. It feels like playing house. Changing the protagonist to not follow the school will give you at least 8 points. I won't go into the dialogue because of the writing problem, but it's really not necessary in the school. It's really not possible to write about daily life with Pokémon, but it is better than writing about the college entrance examination. The most amazing thing is that the protagonist has a lot of mythical beasts to take the college entrance examination, and he is even restricted from taking them [smile]

I feel pretty good and the author will read the comments. Haha, but I feel like I don't have to write so detailed about Pokémon every time. The word count is too high. Moreover, Pokémon is too fast. There are only a few chapters in just over 60 chapters. In this case, it won't be hundreds or even thousands later. Or maybe after collecting them and training together, we will collect the second team. It's too few and not enough to read. Maybe that's it. Come on, author. Speaking of Origin Evolution, why didn't I search for it?

Finally there is a story with the main character having Groudon as the mythical beast. I am a Groudon fan. I have been waiting for a long time [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]

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It's a pretty good Pokémon novel, I'm waiting for the update. [Laughing]

@Platelet is so cute. Well, Kuailong has super evolved. You have to change it.

This book is really good, it's a very good Pokémon fan-written book in Tomato, but the updates are too slow [face covering]

Good

It's so beautiful, keep up the good work! Recommended!

I have a question, should the main character be the heroine? Did she collect all those famous beauty gyms and other beauty lovers? After all, they all have mythical beasts. Children should be fine. Hey, brother, you should understand me.

It looks great [crying] [crying] [crying] The author will update soon! ! ! Is there any stock at the bottom of the box? Come out and read a few chapters. [Crying][Crying][Crying] Also, I suggest adding a few photos, which will make it look better and be more convenient for readers who have never seen Pokémon. Wow! There was a flash of light, and it turned out to be the legendary Refresher Pokémon [laughs]. It was so powerful that it could only be defeated by the Finisher Pokémon. [Laughing]

It's not bad, but the lineup is a bit poor. Since it's a cool article, why not form a team of first-level gods: Mewtwo, Flash Cracker Karaza, Necrozma in the glorious god form, Giratina in the reverse form, the 18-stone alpaca, and the Infinite Era. That would push the entire world flat.

A good and refreshing article, it looks quite comfortable, but there are a few updates.

My favorite author, please update quickly! [Cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

Except for the names of the male protagonist and the sister (which seems a bit awkward, of course, this is a personal feeling) and the dialogue between the characters, overall it is good.

Quickly pull out that mysterious organization and whip the corpses

Author, did you forget about the reward of Sweet Dream God?

It's a cool article. It's pretty good now that I've read it. Chapter 7 is for Groudon, which is still level 112. I'm looking forward to the next plot.

I think it's great! ! The plot is very good, it's the best Pokémon novel I've ever read! !

This book is indeed very good to read. If you are used to reading cool articles, you can read them without thinking. The author's writing style is not bad at all. It must be praised [Blow kiss]

Can you add Dynamax and Tai Crystal?

This novel is quite good and satisfies all my fantasies about Pokémon, such as a single female protagonist, a cheating protagonist, etc.

It's very well written and highly recommended.

Hurry up and update. The author really likes this book. Come on [Blow a kiss]

Are you still updating? I finished reading it a few days ago o(╥╥)o

The protagonist is reborn, with a powerful background in this life There is Groudon at the beginning The back is even more invincible