Naruto: the Rise of a Small Family

So far, there are no poison points. Compared to other hours when the genin killed several jounin, he was still a genin. In the latest chapter, Pigfoot seizes the opportunity to quickly become a chuunin. I hope the author understands that you must first master the changes in chakra properties before you can learn attribute ninjutsu. Medical ninjas are basically not compatible with attribute ninjutsu, because attribute conversion consumes a lot of chakra.

It is a rare family story among Naruto fanfics. Although there are only children in the family, it is still novel. The protagonist's strength improvement is reasonable, and it is not a cool story. After reading so many traditional Naruto cool stories, reading this book is a change of taste.

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It's pretty good. It's a rare story about developing a family in the Naruto world. Who is the heroine? She hasn't appeared yet.

It looks good. The little Uchiha lolita should be the heroine. The cut is a bit abrupt. The plot of her father saving the protagonist can be expanded a little. The protagonist's sense of belonging to Konoha can also be expanded. I think it should be anchored by a few little guys. Kosuke's sending off is also abrupt, but it is still understandable. Other than these three, everything is pretty good. Come on, come on.

Okay, rational flow. No mess.

Finished reading it, it's good. When a family is growing, there must be no shortage of children. I don't know how the author solves this problem.

I'm a new writer, and my writing is pretty good. I can look forward to everyone following me for more updates.

Generally speaking, it suits my taste very well. It is a growth-oriented character, and he is also a commoner, and he has a sense of identity. It's still very good, but the emotions feel very abrupt. I hope the author can polish the emotional drama. Why does Uchiha Rikka like the protagonist? And I hope the author can reflect the feelings from the side through details. Or the author could consider not having a female protagonist in the next book. After all, the current emotional drama is really not that good.

So far I can write very fluently and it's fulfilling✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

It feels good, come on

The author is too slow, so (ง •̀_•́)ง Come on

Well written, but I am a prophet. I expected the author to cut it.

Very pretty. IQ online. There is no system and no cheats. A normal time traveler does normal things within his own ability. It's much better than silly and cool writing.

Author, I support you, and then ask who is the heroine? [Eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

It's good-looking, but the author is too slow to update [face-covering][face-covering]

Very good, but a bit lacking.

Not bad, pretty good-looking and more realistic

One chapter a day, how can I keep writing like this [Chigua] If the data is not good, can I still be in the mood to update?

Not bad, give me some encouragement

Come on, I'm very optimistic about this book

Come on! Well written

This book is not bad

Your update gives me the feeling that it is a series of lifetimes [face covering]

It's so well written, don't force it if you can't continue (it's so bad [laughs evilly])

I like it very much. It's well written. The author asks for more updates. I can't read it enough. @Generalisbelow

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง, your writing is pretty good so far.

It's a very novel subject matter, so write slowly and don't move too fast! Accumulate slowly every day, don't lose standing strength too quickly

Come on come on come on come on

Very good. No random changes to the normal plot growth pattern. It's a pity that it won't be updated.