After Handing over the System, the Three Brothers Knelt Down and Begged for Forgiveness.

The author, don't listen to some book reviews. I just like this kind of plot that slaps you in the face in the early stage, it's fun, and it doesn't drag on. Wouldn't it be good to slowly develop the plot of traveling through the country to collect treasures and strengthen the country in the later stage?

Because the heroine was an orphan before, her character was a bit soft and she was used to tolerating everything. After experiencing the world of immortality, she slowly grew up. The changes in this stage were well written. Although the several different worlds transmitted by the system were not so brilliant, they were okay, especially in the past and the part with Wang Qi. Jiang Linkai may have lost because he was too strong. He wanted to show his best side in front of the people he likes. For Fang Xuyao, he won by being thick-skinned! Moreover, he puts the heroine Nan Qiao first, which is something Jiang cannot compare with. It's awesome to bring back the beasts and the four great mythical beasts from the Classic of Mountains and Seas, but it's a pity that they didn't describe it in too much, otherwise they would be so awesome!

Judging from the writing style, it is still relatively immature. It should be because the author is relatively young. The heroine's mood is very beautiful. Come on, author.

Looks good! Nice book. The only question is whether it will be a single female protagonist, or...? [What]

A very nice book with a wonderful idea

The subject matter is novel and the three golden chapters are well written, making people want to read. This is a good review. It's just that the later content doesn't look like a novel, it's a bit like short prose stitched together. I hope it can be more straightforward, otherwise it will be very tiring to read. There are a bit too many facial expressions in the description of appearance and speech, which affects the connection between context and context, so I hope to leave some blank space. Come on, author.

He looked briefly. I personally think it's pretty good. I hope you, the author, can make further progress while maintaining your current level. (•̀⌄•́)

Ninth, I feel that Nan Qiao is so weak at this Nascent Soul stage.

The face-slapping session was so cool

It's a good read. I generally don't have the patience to read it. I don't want to read it until halfway through. This is the book I've been reading for the longest time.

It's perfect. This is the best book I've ever read.

Wow~ It's super pretty! I like it so much✨

This book is very good, as long as it doesn't break down at the end. Reading this kind of novel gives me a very warm feeling. This is my personal opinion. Thank you to the author for writing such a good novel.

There is nothing more exciting than seeing it🙁🙁🙁

It looks good, I hope the author can continue to work hard

It's okay. Five-star recommendation [love] [love] [love] Come on and update.

The story content of the novel is novel and interesting. Family members who like it can take a look. Come on more. Awesome.

Although the pace is a bit fast, it's okay. I've been enjoying reading short stories lately, and it's just what I like.

Good-looking, exciting, attractive, the story is compact and the logic is clear.

Very pretty, not bad

Very special novel

It looks good, but the ending is happy

I like this book very much

Super exciting and beautiful👍

New author? Um. . . . . . Come on haha

The heroine is still very weak and needs to grow up and see her true nature [shy][eating melon]

Are you selling yourself to the country? No freedom at all...

It's very interesting, but why doesn't Fang Xuyao, who is married to Nan Qiao, practice immortality? The ending is quite hasty

Although it sounds pretty good, I kind of want to complain [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

I listened to another book without finishing a chapter.