I have read a lot of Siheyuan novels, and I want to write a novel that is different. This is the first time I have written many books. I hope it can catch the eyes of all the gentlemen. It is okay to collect it and fatten it up before reading it. Personally, I feel that the writing is better than Xiaobai's. Let's write a flowing novel. I hope some readers will give it a thumbs up. Thank you!
Reader comments
At first it was said that the adopter was the grandfather, but it turned out that he was only in his forties. In other words, those who adopt the protagonist are those who are under thirty. Is this the grandpa who is joking? Later, I added another drama to myself and found a grandma. It looks so awkward!
I didn't understand what was going on, and the enemy agents in front didn't call the police.
At first it was said that the adopter was the grandfather, but it turned out that he was only in his forties. In other words, those who adopt the protagonist are those who are under thirty. Is this the grandpa who is joking? Later, I added another drama to myself and found a grandma. It looks so awkward!
I didn't understand what was going on, and the enemy agents in front didn't call the police.
The writing is too messy
How can I say it, not bad