The Life of an Ordinary Person After Becoming Nahida

It is highly recommended to watch it without a brain. If you have a brain to read it, it will be easy to get into trouble. In case I get mad in the future, I can't comment for you, so I'll leave it now. First of all, your plot. To be honest, this plot is not new. There are actually many articles about changing to Naxida on the Internet, so I won't comment on this. In fact, I am very curious about why every article about changing to Naxida has to be related to the country. I think it is good to be a little loli and be censored, because once it is related to the country To make a connection, you need a lot of accumulation, and you also need to find words to replace it. Once you write something wrong and make the readers feel uncomfortable, the substitute relationship of this article will be very poor. In fact, there are some problems in the plot. Of course, if you want to ask, I will tell you, and if you don't ask, I won't bother to talk. The second is your description technique. Obviously you have accumulated experience and you have writing skills. This can be seen from your very abrupt technique, but your accumulation is not very much, or you are not using it very well, so your description seems very abrupt, with a very sudden feeling without any transition. So the first suggestion is that you continue to accumulate writing skills, and the second is to learn how to use it. Because each of your description techniques is very abrupt, there is no transition in the front, and there is no transition in the back, it seems very strange, and the description technique, your appearance description and environment description are very few, I can say that I have not seen it, I suggest you write more appearance descriptions, for example, for the classmates who appeared in front of you, your appearance descriptions are extremely rare, I don't even know whether they are male or female⊙⊙ Finally, there is the character image. The protagonist of your character image is a patient with depression. Congratulations very much. The character image of your protagonist is very vivid, because it can be seen from your sentences that you have shaped it. The shaping of this special type of character is actually better than It's more difficult, so the author has had this kind of experience, so he can shape it very well. But if you want to say that your other character creations are actually a little conflicting, um... Of course, if you want to ask, I will answer it for you below. If you don't ask, I won't bother to tell you. The above is my comment, okay (⑉°з°)-♡❤️

Looking at this passionate speech, the author could not be the reincarnation of a hot man, right?

At present, it seems that as a transitional stage, pain is inevitable during the transition process, because at first we cannot cope with internal considerations and external pressure, so we must change to enhance our own strength, mainly due to the bad nature of human beings. Otherwise, even if we do not change our tactics, we are still very powerful. However, as we all know, although you may not reach your goal if you go straight in the desert (because the road is difficult to walk without the help of strong external forces), the chance of getting lost is also high if you take a detour.

Before viewing, please be reminded that all the contents are adapted from the author's personal experience [laughter]

I'll give it five stars for the time being. I don't ask for much. I just hope that I can interact with Qin Jun more. It doesn't matter whether I change my marriage or not, just change my marriage.

What about the speech? Why is there no speech mentioned at the beginning?

The author is really pitiful 😭 My condolences