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The writing is pretty good, except that Yali is a bit weird, and even if the guy could crush Wu Xie to faint, he wouldn't say he was disgusting... I've been naive and watched too much, and have forgotten that he is Wu Xie. The sexual tension is very strong, and it makes people happy to watch it. It feels like Zero knows something. I really like the plot. I hope it won't end badly in the future. Please don't be. I hope their lives will stabilize and the three of them can live a good life.

My God, it's amazing. After reading so many similar books, this is the only one that made me feel that it should be like this and not just made up. I really love it to death. The little brother is not a person who understands love. He confirms his feelings under the innocent rogue time and again, and is shaken by Wuxie again and again. This is the real fragrance. Tianzhen also makes all kinds of exceptions and endures for the sake of the little brother. I love it so much! Come on, I'm optimistic about you [Admiration][Admiration]

Damn, it's really good-looking and touching. It's just too innocent, but Li Cu and Su Wan feel like their personalities are inverse, and the fat guy should be called Tianzhen instead of Wu Xie. The rest is pretty good [laugh][laugh][laugh]

The writing is really very good, the storyline and the characterization of the characters really impressed me. That's right, I hope you won't be so aggressive and let Wu Xiaoxie recuperate and develop a relationship with Brother Da Zhang😭😉

To be honest, this is the most beautiful stolen fanfic I have ever read. When I think of what Wu Xie has experienced in the past ten years, my saliva will fall from the corners of my eyes. For Daomi, it is undoubtedly heartbreaking and powerless. I thought everything would be fine after I came out of the Bronze Gate. Yes, but after reading this fanfic written by the author, I realized that pain will only come again and again in life. Just because you have survived one pain, another pain will not come (I only read a small part, my feelings so far). I will definitely write again if I have new feelings about the procedure. After reading it, there is always a different feeling lingering in my heart, whether it is happy or sad, I can't tell. Zhang Qiling can't bear Wu Xie giving up her life for him, and Wu Xie wants Zhang Qiling to live a normal life. Both of them are thinking about each other, and neither one wants to hurt the other. The whole story is sweet and sad, and the story will not make people feel that it is groundless, but... I am This ending is unsatisfactory. Wu Xie's sacrifice was not completed, and Zhang Qiling will still guard the Bronze Gate. But if the sacrifice is completed, the protagonist of the story will be missing one person, and everyone will spend the rest of their lives in pain. No one wants to see it. I think it is okay. The author can write a follow-up and write an ending that makes everyone happy. Wu Xie will not die and Zhang Qiling will not have to guard the Bronze Gate.

My wife wrote it very well! It describes Wu Xie's feelings and obsession with his little brother in my heart. It contains both candy and a knife. It made my heart twitch and cry. It also has a very nice suspenseful and supernatural feeling about tomb robbing! Good review! ! ! [Adoration][Admiration][Like][Like]

It's good to watch. I think both the writing and the plot are very good. The first part feels a bit boring, like you're looking for candy in the glass shards, but the second part is much better. It's so good. I hope the author will continue to update it. I will keep reading [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

The teacher really wrote Ping Xie very well, very vividly, and very sharply. The article also corresponds to the title of the novel. I really can't get enough of this novel. Although it is the most brutal one I have ever read, I still want to read it again and again. This teacher is one of my favorite authors! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I'm going to do it again! ! !

The author's writing is very good. There were so many knives that I shed a lot of tears. The knife is in the back, and the sugar is also in the back. The only thing is that Li Cu and Su Wanwan have a little OOC. Others are very good. Because Xiao Ge and Xiao Xie want to fall in love, it is completely reasonable for the characters to change a little.

The teacher's writing is very good, both bitter and sweet. I feel that the characters are not OOC. 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹👍👍👍👍 Suitable for those who look at bottle evil and those who look at knives

This book is literally written on my heart. It is the first fan fiction I have read. It is really awesome. The storyline is very fascinating, and the characters' personalities are also very distinctive. Moreover, my CP also did what I wanted to read. I love the author so much [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]

It looks great, I like it very much, and it matches the little brother and Wu Xie in the original work. I love it [sending my heart][sending my heart]

I think it is very good to read. Not only is it the first one I read after entering the trap, but I have also read many books of Ping Xie during this period, and I still feel that they are almost boring. Each one is in his own way. I personally like this one the best. It is more consistent with the original work, and the characters are very different from the original work. I like it very much. I hope the author will produce more books like this. I hope the author will flourish step by step on the road of writing and walk forever! ! !

It's very interesting, I highly recommend it, and I'm looking forward to it. I haven't finished updating it yet, but I hope there will be more plots about Black Flower in the future. Please

Damn, please write more articles, I'm going to starve to death [I'm about to cry] The writing is really good! Never tire of watching it! The writing is exactly what I like! ! ! Must pay attention!

The overall feeling of the article is very delicate and the plot is very good. It vividly describes Tianzhen's feelings for Brother Zhang and Brother Zhang's behavior after he doesn't want to hide his feelings for Tianzhen is also very consistent with Brother Zhang's character. Recommended ten stars! ! Be sure to watch until the end! It's a little bit sharp at the front, but it gets sweeter and spicy the further back you go.

This book made me laugh when I read it. It's really very good. The author is brave enough to write it. The plot may be a bit messed up, but after all, it's a fanfic and it still has cp. The author has already written it very well.

I've finished reading it, it's very interesting, there is sugar in the knife, remember to put a tissue next to it when reading, the last few chapters are very sweet, the writing is very good, but the first part is a real knife, I am in tears, the eternal iron triangle! ! [Almost crying]

This book really makes me love and hate it at the same time. The sweetness can make people sweet to death, and the knife can kill people with knife. The author's writing is really great! I was stunned for a while, and my tears couldn't stop falling. Author, if you can, I would like to make an appointment with you. We'd better meet. My 40-meter sword is ready! The author doesn't need to take it to heart, feel free to say it! The writing is really great, and I couldn't help but sigh after reading it! Everyone is welcome to enter the pit!

Super pretty! ! ! This is the best one I thought I saw after watching Tomb Raiders Notes. It's not too different from the setting of the original book, and the writing is the best I've ever seen. (I love the author so much!)

It's particularly good-looking, but it's a bit sadistic in the early stages, with the private characters Zero, Li Cu and Su Wan being Wu Xie's subordinates. The main story is that Wu Xie is the Holy Infant who has lived on the altar for 3,000 years, that is, Qi Yu, but he has not yet awakened Qi Yu's memory. Later, Wu Xie saw Qi Yu's memory and learned that someone would sacrifice at the Bronze Gate every once in a while, and he was this specific sacrifice. Wu Xie sacrificed himself in order to free Zhang Qiling from those heavy home responsibilities. At the critical moment, Fatty and the little brother arrived in time and rescued Wu Xie. Later, Wu Xie and the little brother were together.

Not bad, not bad, well written, wonderfully written, wonderfully written,... Sweet~ Come on [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] The author is great

Damn, it's so beautiful. It feels like a sequel to Tomb Raiders. It's very close to the original work. Are you the third uncle's clone?

Good-looking, sadistic and sweet, not OOC, very good-looking [Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss]

Very pretty, very pretty, but a little too cruel 😭😭😭

Although the process was brutal, it was a very nice collaboration between powerful actors. As long as you can bear the knife!

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I go... It's really beautiful... The style of writing makes me feel like the author is Sanshu's trumpet... The horse is too sweet

Super pretty, a bit sharp in the early stage, but sweet later on

Although I was stunned in the early stages of this book, the plot at the end is really exciting. Even if it was just a sword, I could cry through it! But to be honest, Wu Xie and Zhang Qiling in it are a bit different from the original work. If I have to talk about shortcomings, this is one of them. Overall, it's pretty good. The writing is beautiful and smooth, and the comments from book friends are also very humorous. Sometimes I cry when I read the comments. Recommended to take a look!