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It's a bit watery, but it looks good. It would be great if the author could update 100,000 words a day [laughing] I have never seen anyone who is more watery than you [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh] There are still people who are discriminating, and there are guards, 666666

It's good to read. I've been following it for a long time. I want to read it for a while, so I plan to review it first. First of all, the author of this book has his own understanding of aliens, which is very popular. The male protagonist cooperates with the government, but it is not a company, but directly cooperates with the country. He plans to start a company in the future. It is indeed interesting. If you like lawlessness, then you should not read it to avoid negative reviews. The male protagonist is a time traveler, but because he belongs to a gangster and has a more Buddhist personality, he directly reveals his identity as a time traveler. There is no trouble because of this later, so there is no poisonous point. If you think that being too honest is poisonous, then it means that you have different tastes, so you can ignore it. Then there are multiple female protagonists. Those who like single female protagonists or those who like no female protagonists can avoid this. As of the update, there are already six, and there may be more in the future. It is not too bad for the time being, but in order to open a harem, OOC is inevitable The male protagonist has a Buddhist-like personality, but he has everything in his hands. He has never broken his guard so far. At most, he is said to be a swindler by Zhuge Qing. Oh, by the way, there is basically no Dragon Lady in this book. If you came here for the Dragon Lady, there is no need to read it. I suggest the author change the name. I finally finished reading it and finished it with flowers.

The writing is good, it's not too gorgeous but it still makes people feel grand and majestic. The various jokes are very interesting and the rhythm is also good. The disadvantage may be that the protagonist is invincible too casually, and the portrayal of the protagonist's image is not much, but the world of aliens itself is real. Without strength, nothing can be done, and too much reality is revealed. The power will also be hindered, resulting in no sense of reality... Although there are less pretentious highlights, it can be seen that it is truly integrated into this world and wants to make the society and country more beautiful and prosperous. Unfortunately, it may lack some exciting battles. In addition, we must think about how to write the subsequent plot and what kind of conflicts there will be. This kind of fan work with imagination and writing style should be boldly modified. I can only make a lot of jokes, which brings a lot of joy to people, enriches and relaxes the spirit, instead of feeling like a waste of time with a mentally retarded plot. It's a very good work in Tomato, but due to the invincibility of the protagonist and the coercion of plot development, it can't be helped that it lacks some vitality.

Chapter 60 was well written, humorous and logical. I didn't become Zhang Chulan's licking dog, nor did I work for the company. As carefree as being born without roots

The harem loves watching and babies, so it's best to get it

Come to y, I will keep watching as long as Wu Lei [blowing kiss] Among all the female characters, I think Kang Jin Xingjun is my favorite. The overall feeling is that it is white with a touch of pink, the blue eyes are breathtakingly beautiful, the lightning technique used is also very handsome, and the body looks big but overall is unexpectedly delicate. I really want to hold her and smell her. If you want to touch your nose, go down and let her open her mouth and carefully observe her fangs. Of course, dragon horns are also a must. Then put your face on the dragon scales. The touch must be like the highest grade jade. Looking down the dragon scales, the dragon claws are sharp and sharp, and the white jade scales add a touch of divinity to the ferocious dragon claws. In the end, the tail has no sense of flesh and blood, and the design of the tail is as if it was carved out, exuding the aura of a fantasy creature all the time. Of course, the design of Kang Jinxing's monarch form is also good. Add more Dragon Lady plot😡😡😡Otherwise I will use the Hand of God ×3000 on you😡😡😡

The most comfortable novel I have read this year. The low rating may be due to self-revelation + too few people have read the original work. It is logical, the jokes are just right, and the protagonist's combat power is high enough. Except for the timeline problem, it is very final and original. I can't imagine that this is a novel written by a novice author. It is really refreshing to read it all in one sitting.

Interesting plot angle The protagonist supports the inheritance of the Eight Wonders and rectifies the name of the chaos-causing skills. No fighting of wits looking for trouble The end of the Yiren Company and the beginning of a new era Domestic Zongxing marches overseas, the age of navigation! There is also a pink-haired sister who accompanies the protagonist, she looks great!

The writing is really good, mainly because the major events that have happened in Under One Person are well analyzed, and the analysis of the key roles in it is indeed true. There are too many explanations in the back. The plot seems to be okay in the front, but there is no plot in the back. It's really uncomfortable to write a lot of explanations😣

There is a harem, there is education and training, it looks good At present, apart from playing with Lily stalks, there are no places that I can't see.

Not bad, I have my own understanding of why the rating is so low

This book is really written in my heart. I like this kind of thoughtful author! This book is also the author's debut in Tomato, but it doesn't look like a newbie, and he is quite competent. Although the protagonist's strength improves quickly, it is completely in line with the needs of the plot. And Under One Person itself is a profound work, such as the population red line theory, which is essentially the black humor of the modern scientific theory management system's discipline of human nature. It is difficult to write fan fiction with the same depth as the original work, and this work is the best among the works I have read. Others are either written purely for the purpose of attracting girls, simply satisfying sexual desire, or they are directly invincible, and the air is blown away every second. The character creation in this book is also pretty good, and the characters and characteristics of each original character can be quickly captured. This is even more valuable because it is even a harem novel. I hope the author will work hard. Your popularity is the lowest among the few books I have followed. It feels like a tonic [crying]. I will do my best to support you and give you my love every day! Here's some reading for you every day! [Sending Hearts]

The book is good, but the author is so naive that he must have never had any contact with the real low-level and middle-level people, and he has never even gone to the government department to handle matters. The people in this book have a Teletubbies-like beauty. It is a really good world. In fact, according to the moral level in this book, the world will not develop like this at all.

I can't find any faults except for the Biyou Village chapter, which I wrote more than a hundred chapters. It's top 1 among the fanfics under One Person (please pray to the author to let the protagonist accept Yagyu Aiko. Apart from Xia He, Yagyu is my favorite among the people. If I accept it, I will give it a five-star rating [Send Heart] [Send Heart] [Send Heart])

It's a good novel, but the pace is a bit fast. The author may be afraid of being said by others that the protagonist is honest and has no scheming, or he may be disdainful of being scheming. Very pretty. I really want to see the old lithography machine. Director Zhao's favorite lithography machine, the lithography machine that the country cherishes, as long as he can build Biyou Village or otherworld, it's all a trivial matter ✧(≖ ◡ ≖✿) [laughing and crying][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

I hope the author can keep it up. It's rare to see a good book on this platform, without any poisonous points or shocking parts. Moreover, the author is quite willing to listen to the advice. The last few people who listened to the advice have already moved to other platforms. One went to Lu, one went to QRead, and there are also Hedgehog. Come on, keep it up.

I feel that the author has a good grasp of the plot, which gives people a very smooth feeling. It is not like some novels, which feel very abrupt and do not need to be long and lengthy. You need to go through the plot in one glance. The author's plot is very comfortable and slowly unfolds around the protagonist, but the updates are a bit slow [Chigua]

Good health, love health, normal outlook on things, ideal view of all issues, one of the few books I can follow and read. Others either have awkward plots, too many poisonous points, and basically ruin the characters, or they just add them in based on what is popular recently, and they will be a piece of cake in a short time.

I have read more than 200 chapters. I read the author's Naruto book. Although it is not as crazy as the Naruto book, the level is the same and they are both very interesting. I have to say that the guy from Tianbang next door is really very good, and the cool design is very comfortable. The protagonist does not have a specific combat power rating. To be precise, there is no universal combat power rating among one person. However, the protagonist has a great skill, starts quickly, and at the same time, there is no set performance that suppresses the protagonist's combat power. A standard cool novel, without those messy sadistic performances and awkward outbursts of coolness. Moreover, the protagonist's character and style are very lovable and very appealing to me. It's really not easy to find a book of this level on Tomato. I hope that book friends who read this comment and also like this type of writing can leave a few recommended books below. You don't need to reach this level, just get seven or eight points.

This is a fanfic that has a lot of penetration into "people". The behind-the-scenes writing is very thoughtful and has a great influence on the plot. It does not follow the "world correction trend" and it is refreshing to read. Come on [like][like][send heart]

This book is the best one I have read in a while! The author allows us to see a real and vivid world through the delicate description of the protagonist. The plot in the book is full of ups and downs, making people want to put it down. Highly recommended to friends who like reading! (๑˃̵ᴗ˂̵)و✧*｡

The first 5-star anime I reviewed was "Chigua". The name indeed ruined some people's motivation to read this novel, and the number of words was too few. Overall, it's funny, but not random.

The book is a good book, with a compact plot that does not target the main character, the company, or the boss. The protagonist has his own opinions and actions at every plot point, and his combat power can inadvertently change the fate of other characters. He is already considered invincible and does not have the power to grow in just a few dozen chapters like in another fanfic. Wherever the protagonist goes, I don't have any plot of my own. As for what Shen Nong said about self-revealing time travel, Schrödinger's cat is the highlight of this book. But I think this first highlight in other time travel articles is similar to telling the elders about time travel as soon as you open your eyes. This is a big highlight. Yes, but the background of this book is that because of the powerful ability of Goldfinger, he was noticed by the company, or maybe it was noticed by Mr. Zhao. Then because of his strong ability and part of the Buddhist system and changing some plots in the original work, he directly exposed himself to Mr. Zhao and the country. Cooperation with other countries, I think there is nothing wrong with it. The protagonist is already powerful and will only become stronger and fearless in the future. Cooperation with the country is only a win-win situation. As for the second point, I think it is even more nonsense. The author has explained this theoretical explanation. Of course, it may be that I have misunderstood it. It is not an explanation at all. I gave it one star, but here I still hope that the author's book will get better and better, and hope that it will not reveal any new poisonous points [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Please update]

After time travel, the content is a bit unsightly, but it still has 5 stars on Tomato. The protagonist has many abilities, but the alien copy has not been updated yet. The author himself realized that there is no need to continue writing, and finishing it decisively can still save some dignity. The last thing to say is to finish spreading flowers!

To be honest, among the novels I have read so far, this one is the most in line with my taste. The characters are reasonable, the plot is interesting, and the plot is large. Five-star recommendation~!

A very good one-person fanfic, better than anything I've seen before

The writing is good and the pace is a little slow. It is my favorite harem. The plot tries its best to match the original work, but there are some deviations due to time issues. The most inconsistent one is the relationship between the Wang and Lu families. It is not toxic and is worth watching.

I have read about ten fics in Tomato, and this is the only one that I can follow. The others fell apart after reading more than a dozen chapters. The writing is really good, and I recommend it.

The author writes so well. The whole plot is full of joy. It is a harem story and the protagonist does not work as a nanny. The overall writing is really good. I just don't know why the rating is so low.

This book is by far the best one-person fanfic I've ever read. . . After all, I did everything else for free. . .