Black Wukong: I’m the Great Sage in Another World

It is considered outstanding among Black Monkey fandoms. The depictions of various demons and bosses are flesh-and-blood, and the plot and rhythm are also very comfortable. It is not a mindless and nutritious novel. Apart from the small number of words, I personally feel that I have not seen any poisonous points so far. I can look forward to the future and it is worth savoring! 👍👍👍

Why does the protagonist always take a slow shot? As a result, the villain is now the old man. If he shouts, wouldn't it mean that all the extraordinary beings present will surround the protagonist?

I think we can have some productive troops, and they can be original. We can upgrade the equipment for the troops, make arrows and swords, etc. It is good to describe more about the relationship between the little demons. It is much better than other novels that treat the summoned troops as numbers.

The author, only the monkey with the wind, spirit and moon shadow has his shadow

It's a very interesting subject matter. The little demons and minor characters in the book are very richly portrayed. However, you gave the little demon too many scenes, which made it very boring from the third volume on. There were too many scenes for the little demon, and the plot was dragged out. The protagonist could not be seen in several pictures, which made it very boring later. Most of the plots are skipped, but your general plot is very interesting, the world view is well established, the plot is reasonable, and your fighting scenes are very good. Among the novels I have read, your fighting scenes are the best, and there are many exciting points, so I give you five stars.

So far, the overall atmosphere is pretty good, and the plot is relatively good to watch. I hope it doesn't get too shabby later on, but the protagonist doesn't turn into a bitch or has similar poisonous points later on. If it can maintain the current level, it should be no problem to become popular.

Come on, there's nothing poisonous at the moment But I still like to read harem stories with multiple heroines. Let's go.

Like Duan Ping, it is recommended that the foundation and martial arts are to train the protagonist with the broken body of a great saint in the spiritual space. 😏

This book is really beautiful, but there are some pictures that may be devoured [shocked]. If you haven't played it, you may have to look through it more. But for people like me who have picky tastes, it is already a rarity. ⌓‿⌓

Let me give you some suggestions. I have read 50 chapters so far. Since this book is a summons text, and the protagonist becomes stronger by completing system tasks, there may be a problem, that is, everything the protagonist does depends on the task. If the task asks the protagonist to kill bandits, the protagonist will kill the bandits. If the task asks the protagonist to kill all the villages, the protagonist will go. Although this is simple and direct, and can quickly let the protagonist do the main plot, it will make the protagonist in the story lack of vitality, like a puppet driven by power. Perhaps in the future, we can let the protagonist do some things spontaneously, instead of the system telling the protagonist what rewards to do. There is also the issue of the protagonist's power. Since he is a summons, there will definitely be more and more subordinates in the future. You can try to give some independent chapters to some boss characters and tell stories with them as the main perspective. For example, I have this idea, Ling Xuzi, isn't he a wolf demon? Since the author's book is set in the Middle Ages, there is a high probability that there will be a church or the Holy See. Then arrange a Vatican to hunt down a werewolf in trouble, and then be accidentally rescued by Ling Xuzi, who is regarded as an ancestor by the werewolf. Stories like this can also be written. There is also some selfishness on my part. I hope that the protagonist of this book will not be too eager to fight and become stronger. The last summoning novel I read was that just after defeating an enemy, another big force appeared. Starting from the 20th chapter of the book, and continuing to more than 150 chapters, basically just after defeating one, it upgraded and became stronger, and then another one came immediately, and then upgraded and became stronger. Maybe we can arrange a few chapters of daily life, or a stage of peaceful development, such as engaging in diplomacy and trade with other races or forces. I personally feel very tired when writing and reading like this, and it feels like I am working overtime around the clock. (There is no female protagonist in that book. The male protagonist is indifferent and does not communicate well with other people. After reading the whole book, I feel that the protagonist is a war machine. He does nothing but fights every day.)