小天狼星陪哈利长大

Delicious deha and dog wolf and a small amount of GGAD, the author is really good at writing. Boss, there is someone named JK Rowling who randomly changes your plot and kills people all the time😭😭😭What a beautiful HP world... The rewritten parts are very reasonable, I think the logic is great, the rewrite is great, this Deha is written very well, and I feel that it is one of the rare Snake Ha that has a great writing, but without losing the characteristics of the original Shi Ha. I've been reading this whenever I have free time these days. I couldn't bear to finish it. I'm looking forward to the new book by Boss Deha [] [] []

This is a book that I can tell after just reading a few hundred words completely fits every one of my preferences and xp... I love it so much What a rare dog wolf cp, a young and ignorant childhood friend, two tragic middle-aged people reunited after experiencing a major traumatic event... It's so sweet, and the most important thing is that the author is very good at writing. There is no positive description of the deep affection between the two, but some unusual feelings can be glimpsed from their conversations and actions... I like this feeling of picking up candy by myself. Every description makes me taste it again and again and spread rumors in my heart. The characters that have appeared so far are very consistent with the original work. The author also has a deep understanding of the two dogs and wolves. Why did the original Professor Lupine not confess that he was his father's good friend when he met Harry? Does Lupine really believe that Sirius is a murderer? Will the only two people who survived the tragic war become more dependent on each other when they meet again many years later... These things that were hidden behind the story of the savior in the original work are all revealed and rewritten in this book... Harry and Xiao Long are also very close to the original work. Xiao Long's innocence, Harry's kindness and delicateness, and Lupine's gentleness and entanglement. These character traits are all well captured. The character has been reshaped to a certain extent, but it is not OOC at all. The dog father looks much smarter and calmer than in the original work, but it does not lose Blake's unique sense of madness. It also adds a description of the Malfoy family's internal education of the little dragon. Although the little dragon has been doted on and grown up, He listens to his parents very much, and he will definitely put his family first in really important moments. Lucius's words "No one is your enemy" and "Our conversations are also grass and streams" are wonderful. They perfectly describe the working style of the Malfoy family. Ah, what I wrote about last time as "a wallflower's way of doing things" is not derogatory at all...! It was my choice of words. What it actually means is that Malfoy's style of dealing with interests first and not taking sides can easily be understood as a derogatory "background". However, it is not easy to be cannon fodder when a "backdrop" is not cannon fodder. The author writes about the wisdom of the Malfoy family in dealing with things...

Looks good! Deha is common, but Dog Wolf and Deha are rare together. I hope the dogs and wolves will be together soon! The adult group needs to look like adults! Deha is still young, so the progress bar could be lengthened. Overall good, worth recommending! But it's too short. The author will update it soon! Happy New Year to everyone!

The main CP is Dog Wolf, and the deputy CP is Deha. Deha's emotional line is developing slowly now, but the author's writing style is so beautiful! Not only is it a CP article, but there are also many places that sublimate the theme (it feels like the original work! The original work party is bold enough to enter, and the original work party loves it very much) This author also has an article about adult Deha, which is also written in this way. I highly recommend it! There is also a big self-designed CP (male male) by the author, which is also easy to knock off. Deha is so sweet!

It's very interesting to watch. Dog Wolf's progress is very fast (super sweet). Deha's progress is not as fast as Dog Wolf's but it's still very sweet (a little bit of a knife, it's still very sweet). The plot is not exactly the same as the original. Overall, it's Wonderful [shy] The description of the characters is very close to the original work, but there is not much OOC [shyness], and the writing is good. The underage group of Deha is a little slower, after all, it is relatively small (although it is a bit tricky because of Lao Fu) The rating has increased again. I will always support the author ദ്ദി˶ᵒ ᵕ ˂)✧. The idea is really good. Come on.

The writing is particularly good, both in terms of writing style and plot arrangement. The overall direction of the plot is consistent with the original work, but probably in order not to leave behind the regrets of the original work, many details of the plot have been greatly innovated and changed, but they are unexpectedly reasonable. Many of the previous plots that seemed to have nothing to do with the main plot actually came in handy later. When I read it, I felt that the author had planned a good story outline (in order to save those who passed away). I really felt that it was very powerful. In addition, not only because of the discrepancy between the plot and the original work, this book involves a lot of interesting CPs. The plots describing them are not abrupt and natural, as if they are what they should be. They play a very good role in adjusting the slightly heavy tone of the book later and in the future. As a derivative book, I saw different possibilities in the magical world. The author enriched the characters of the supporting characters in the original work, allowing us to see their entanglements and involuntary actions in detail, making people empathize with them. In terms of writing, there is some appropriate British humor, very original character descriptions, and the lyricism that should appear in some serious or tender moments... I don't know how to express it, but in short it is really a very good HP derivative. I don't quite understand why the rating is so low. I think the quality of this book has surpassed that of most HP fans. It has a very original and logical plot loop and very beautiful writing. I highly recommend reading it. (Maybe it's because of the title? The too plain title makes it look a bit Mary Sue and childish?)

I finally saw the fanfic of Inulang and Deha. The two love lines are going on at the same time, but the adult group is obviously faster. Come on Draco! The author greatly appreciates the update! ! ! !

This should be regarded as the most three-dimensional and least OOC of all the characters in Deha's novels I have read. It gave me a feeling that if Sirius really picked up Harry Potter before he turned 11, things would definitely end like this. I feel that according to the characters in the original novel, they will definitely do what they will do in this novel. At the same time, this novel also improves some things that are not reflected in the original work. Whether it is a positive character or a negative character, he has his own reasons for doing certain things or saying certain things, and these are consistent with his character itself. To sum up this novel in one sentence: it should be this way.

It looks good, and the writing is very good. If you like watching romance, you can take a step back, because there are really many plots, so many, so many, and most of them are plots. It may become boring after watching it for a long time. The progress of Dog Wolf is very fast, and I feel that it is not enough for some reason (you can always watch the places you like to watch, so I think it should be fast) Hehe. ), Deha's progress can be said to be very slow, but there is still a lot of free progress. I'm not sure if I missed it. It seems to be in the second grade (?). Anyway, the two are still very young. I have only read a little over a hundred chapters. I want to ask Deha at what chapter did he confirm his relationship [Chigua] Maybe it's because I'm listening to books. Sometimes I feel less soulful when listening to books [Chigua]

The dog wolf is easy to fight, but when will Sirius's character change, I can't accept it. Adult love is indeed very fast, I like it. Harry's emotional line is slower, but it's acceptable. So far, the latest one has not touched my red flags. In fact, sometimes I wonder if I have any red flags. I feel like I can accept anything. Come on, author, it's very good. Please write slowly and don't rush.

It's really good to watch, and the interaction between CP has already made me feel sick of the sweetness. Ahhhhhhhhhh! Immortal product! This subject matter is right up my alley! Please, author, you must follow many, many chapters, otherwise you won't be able to read enough. The plot is very tight and no nonsense. The description is also very delicate. I fell in love with the author's writing style first.

A 9.0 Rating is an underestimation, it is very beautiful and moving. First of all, the writing style is pure translation style, and he also writes some letters and reports, as if he is reading the original work, and the reading experience is particularly good. Secondly, the author is very good at delicate emotions. The love story between Dog Wolf and Deha is particularly touching on the basis that the characters are not OOC at all. It seems to go back to when I was dating Deha in middle and high school. Harry is more rational and calm than the original novel because of the protection of his godfather and Lupine. He can understand Draco's swinging position and tolerate his inner pain and struggle. Harry's love also drives Draco to make the final decision - to completely betray Voldemort. The design of the wand in the final battle is particularly wonderful, so I won't spoil it too much here. In addition, I also got to watch Dog Wolf for the first time. Adult love is more complicated and heart-wrenching. The plot is full of tension. There were several plots that tortured me so much that I couldn't help but sigh that the teacher is so good at writing. Except for the Dog Wolf, the author did not rewrite the important characters in the original work such as Ron, Hermione, and Dumbledore. Instead, he portrayed some supporting characters that were not mentioned much in the original work, such as Percy, Scrimgeour, and Barty and his son, and filled in their unique character arcs. I especially like these supplements that make the supporting characters in the original work more three-dimensional.

Oh my god, I like the author who posted the update [laughing and crying] I love him more and more The setting is very new, but the characters don't feel very OOC, and the struggles and growth they should have are very clear. Moreover, the development of the plot is very smooth. I feel that every choice is very reasonable. I like it 😜 (I'm really afraid that the author is clearing out inventory, so please cheer up)

It's well written [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] and not OOC at all. Deha Dog Wolf is very well written [blowing kiss], but it's a bit knifey [crying] Snake Ha is the savior again. The feeling of Snake Ha being the savior is completely written. Draco's love for Harry is very well written! The whole text is well-paced and very fascinating to read. It's really beautiful! But I feel so sorry for Lupine and Si Jiao [crying] [crying] [crying] The plot adaptation was very good, not abrupt at all and changed the direction of the story, the finale of HE!

It's really amazing. It completely describes the tangled relationship between Harry and Draco. There is no OOC at all. Every character is vivid and vivid. The teacher's writing is wonderful. I think the only flaw is that Remus' condition was not written out at the end. I suggest the teacher write a few extra chapters as soon as possible. The story of Sirius and Remus needs to be concluded😭 It was so good, the last dozen or so chapters were so explosive that I stayed up all night to read them. Sadly there are so few chapters that I have to look for novels again. Teacher, please hurry up and write a side story😭I want to watch the sweet and warm daily life😭

To be honest, this work is very good among the "Harry Potter" fanfics. I can give it a score of 4.5. But my personal opinion: Harry's initial image is too docile. I don't think he will lose his original vicious tongue characteristics under Sirius's guidance. Even if he gets along with Lupine at the same time, he should retain it at least until the third grade. There is no obvious OOC behavior, but Percy Weasley should not have been so easy to talk to Hu & De at first. In the later period, the pace is too fast, the ending is hasty, and there are no extras However, the emotional direction is very natural, especially the part about Deha, which is worth reading. It's a pity that I couldn't give it a 4.5 And could only order a 5. I hope all the young couples will get 99 What if the author changes his name [laughing][laughing]

Very well written! The writing is very delicate, and the characters of Sirius and Lupine are not OOC and have a very vivid feel. But Sirius seemed to have a sudden emotional line. There was still an emotional blank in front of him, but he suddenly took the initiative. I feel that his mental journey may be to frown and struggle with various practical issues such as unrequited revenge and grievances, and finally accept it freely and take the initiative to attack. In comparison, Lupine is a bit more foreshadowed and more natural. Deha is also quite cute, but Draco seems a little too gentle. He comes across as a more arrogant little brat. Of course, this is just my subjective opinion. Come on, author! Looking forward to more updates!

I originally thought that Dog Wolf was a bit magical as a CP pair, but now I think it's a good match [shy], and Deha is also a good match [shy].

It feels like Teacher Cake just ate a fanfic written by Teacher Rowling. For me, it really fits the original work, a gentle, careful and considerate Professor Lupin, who is impoverished because of his werewolf identity, and faces Sirius's low self-esteem and subconscious pampering. Because Harry has love, he cherishes the people in front of him more. For him, it is more worthwhile to sacrifice a little reputation in exchange for the current family affection. Cake Teacher is not as pure and sweet as other humanities, the details and everyone's personality are particularly in place. I hope the teacher can keep producing food [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] It's so beautiful

What's nice is that it imitates Rowling's writing style, but those who say Draco is not OOC have not read the original work. This is just a sensible and good kid. However, Deha can only change it this way if it is reasonable. Overall, it is still great.

The writing is very good, and the writing style is close to the original work. The characters are very three-dimensional and vivid. In particular, this one is very powerful and the plot is first-rate. The other one is also very well written. Highly recommended! ! ! ! !

This is the kind of fanfic I want to read! Because of a little difference, the entire story line becomes completely different from the original work, but it is reasonable and not obtrusive at all. It is very exciting! ! ! What a great doujin wife who has ideas and can write!!!

Love this one! The writing style is very delicate, the story is also very colorful, the characters have obvious personalities, and there is no bad character design. The writing by the Wolf Dog CP is also very sweet and I like it very much🥳The teacher's previous book Reunion after the War is also super, super good-looking! This is the first Deha I read on Tomato. I like it so much. I feel like I am a god in my heart🤪It's all so sweet and creative🥰

It's very nice to read [Blowing Kiss]. The author's writing style is very similar to the original work. It is rare among tomato novels and is serious. When I first read it, I was even a little uncomfortable. Maybe it's because I've read too many articles that are very fast and have a funny and relaxed style. When I read this article written by this person, I felt quite heavy [laughing] [laughing]. It's that kind of boring feeling but I still want to continue reading. However, the highlights are also very obvious [I understand]. The interaction between the dog and the wolf is very annoying. If you like the pace, you can watch it. However, since it is the deputy CP, compared to Deha's part, it is still a little less [loving] [loving]. Deha also has a strong sense of fate, and his progress is slower but more natural. Harry entered Slytherin, and the interaction with Draco due to their different stances was good, but a little sharp. The reason why I don't give full stars is because maybe I'm still not used to this kind of writing style. I can only say, keep up the good work, author! [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

It's been a long time since I've seen Deha look so compatible with each other, and the tug-of-war between the adult dogs and wolves was also very touching. The author's writing style is very close to the original work, and the plot development is very reasonable. This is the life Harry should have in his dream [crying] His family, friends and lovers will take good care of him I'm about to finish reading, but I really can't bear to say goodbye [crying] This is the happy life I dreamed Harry would have. All he needs is an opportunity, and he can live with his godfather, and he can also hold Draco's extended hand. The original plot and the plot of the original work are very cleverly integrated, the characters are very restored, and the self-designed characters and some characters that are not often mentioned in the fandom are also very three-dimensional. (I am writing this review because I saw someone giving one star because they are unfriendly to certain characters, but I don't think so personally. I have read a lot of Dehaven. After all, I have CP tendencies, so I have different reservations about other characters. Important characters in the original work may be supporting characters or passers-by in the fanfic, which is normal, right?)

Mrs! ! ! Only then did I realize it was you Very well written, keep it up [sending heartfelt wishes] (Ask quietly, can there be more extras to the previous article?)

The plot has been slightly modified from the original plot to make it more reasonable. It feels like the same character made a random choice. Maybe there is such a development in the parallel world of the original work, and it is very consistent with the original character's personality. The changes in the plot and the emotional changes of the characters are particularly delicate and the writing is smooth. It is a rare good novel in foreign persimmons. I give it a 9.4/10 Rating. The ending is a little rushed and I haven't read enough. [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying]. Overall, this is a very good fanfic, which makes up for a lot of regrets.

I am a very picky person but! ! ! This book is really good [sending my heart] I just read another book by the author, woo woo hoo, it's really good [crying][crying] looking forward to the author's update [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Super pretty! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Force kiss Hebei) (Force kiss Henan) (Force kiss Anhui) (Force kiss Liaoning) (Force kiss Zhejiang) (Force kiss Beijing) (Force kiss Chongqing) (Force kiss Gansu) (Force kiss Jiangxi) (Force kiss Hunan) (Force kiss Sichuan) (Force kiss Fujian) (Force kiss Guizhou) (Force kiss Jiangsu) (Force kiss Shan East) (Force kiss Yunnan) (Force kiss Inner Mongolia) (Force kiss Guangxi) (Force kiss Heilongjiang) (Force kiss Shaanxi) (Force kiss Shanghai) (Force kiss Harbin) (Force kiss Hainan) (Force kiss Ningxia) (Force kiss Tianjin) (Force kiss Hubei) (Force kiss Liaoyang) (Force kiss Shanxi) (Force kiss Jilin) (Force kiss Qinghai) (Force kiss Guangdong) (Force kiss Jiangsu) (Force kiss operation) (Force kiss Hong Kong) (Force kiss Hebei) (Force kiss Inner Mongolia) (Force kiss Taiwan) (Force kiss Education Bureau) (Force kiss Xinjiang) (Force kiss Shenyang) (Force kiss Hubei) [Laugh] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss]

The writing style is very delicate. Whether it is describing the emotions between the adult group or the underage group, it well shows the contradiction in Xiaolong's heart. Regardless of whether he is a raw character or a supporting character, everyone's image is very real, making people feel that they are real.