Entertainment: There Is a Vision in This World

Luo Lingling must not be the heroine. What she likes is Lin Lebai who is already gay. If she were forced to do this, she would feel like a substitute from ancient times.

This book is good, the plot is bland and interesting, it has a literary flavor, and the pace is a little slow. However, I suggest the author give more thought to the poetry. Come on! No, I suddenly realized that there was a lot of nonsense and the plot was so slow. Your 20 chapters are just one poem, which is invincible. It's so procrastinating, it feels like I haven't read it yet.

I came early, I came early, I only updated one chapter in one day, it is very interesting, it would be better if there was no female protagonist.

Entertainment: There is a vision in this world Written by Xin Xin Xia Tian The creativity is very good, but the writing style is a bit white. The plot is smooth, with more daily routines, a lot of foreshadowing, and the pace is too slow. Some of the scenes are not very routine, and you can see the intention, but because it is particularly non-routine, it is relatively dull. The character creation is slightly exaggerated and somewhat facial-like. It's acceptable, but it's more youthful. Three and a half to four and a half stars.

This type is not bad, but the writing is too hasty and some places are not written well.

The beginning is a little bit poisonous. I'll skip the poisonous part at the beginning. The rest is okay. It's a bit gritty but the plain writing is pretty good too. It is recommended that the protagonist be changed to a protagonist who is determined to live a good life for some reason. When the system suddenly awakens the memory of his past life, he is discovered by the rich second generation next door when he tries to post a song. In this way, the emotional and career lines will be much more comfortable.

The world view is good, the plot tends to be bland and relaxing, and the writing is very good. Unfortunately, the number of chapters is a bit short at the moment. Please keep writing, if it is not broken or unfinished, it is a small masterpiece.

I still like it a bit. There is nothing poisonous about it at the moment. I can watch it step by step [making faces] [cool] [thinking] [laughing]

You can consider changing the name to "This world is a bit abstract" [laughter]

It's okay, but the male and female protagonists feel weird to me [laughing evilly]

It's beautiful. The fantasy setting is quite interesting, but it's just too little.

It's beautiful, I hope you can write more!! [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

It's quite interesting. The author's writing is good. It's rare for a literary work to create a fantasy world.

It's okay so far!

Not bad, keep watching

Is Luo Lingling the heroine?

Ok ok ok

Looks good, come on

I think the author updates every day, which is a bit uncomfortable. Also, I'm curious about which ones you plan to set as the three realms.

Except it's a new book with fewer words, there's nothing wrong with it [laughs]

Come on, it will be better if you read this book in one sitting. I don't understand the meaning of that childhood sweetheart.

Good-looking, not the kind of person who hides behind and pretends to be a slap in the face

Looking forward to Li Bai's "Jinjinjiu" and Su Shi's "Shui Tiao Ge Tou". No matter how you look at these two poems, they can only be ranked in the ranks of three realm poems. I want to see the scenes created out of thin air by these two poems.

It's okay, it's pretty cool anyway, there's nothing too bad about it (I didn't say there wasn't any)

Seeing it now, the overall feeling is pretty good. The characters are distinct. There is no cliche plot. Worth a visit

Hurry up and update it, there will be more of it, it's very good, it's very beautiful.

It's beautiful, I love reading, it's exciting, I like the protagonist, the description is nice, I'm an old bookworm, the starting point of this novel is very interesting, I recommend it very well,

This setting is relatively new and very nice.

This book is worth reading, describing the songs in detail and vividly.

Not bad, not bad, it looks pretty good, there are no poisonous points at the moment, and the setting is also good. Please update more, come on, madam!