Ben10: a Love Adventure with Sex in a Small Class

It's a very good novel, it's nice to read and very sweet, but it still has some minor flaws, mainly in the protagonist A Bai and the plot. As for the protagonist, I feel that Abai's role is a bit too small, and at the same time, the emotional and character aspects also give people a very vague feeling. If this aspect of the setting can be completed, it will be absolutely awesome, and then the plot will not feel much changed, and the basic direction will not change much. It is just that the protagonist mixes a few things in it. Let's look at the fanfic, of course, to see what the protagonist can change. If some special systems can be added that are different from Xiao Ben's abilities, the freshness will be enhanced. These are the two points that I think are shortcomings. Of course, the author has written it very well. Please read it very much and update it as soon as possible! Hurry up and bring your chapters to your mouth! ! !

It's an unpopular and rare subject matter, the writing style is relatively immature, and the plot is... A bit bland? But the book is still very interesting [Chigua] Next, I have to pick some thorns. We came here for the love adventure, but the interaction between Xiao Ben and the protagonist in the book did not make me feel that sweet. Especially when the protagonist misunderstood Xiao Ben's meaning, I felt that it was very stiff [punch out], the characterization was also very sloppy, and the details were not well handled. In short, there is still a lot of room for improvement, keep it up [sending heartfelt wishes]

Young Hacker, I used to stay up late to watch it secretly, but after finishing the juvenile chapter, I read a lot of them in scattered pieces. I still can't find some chapters, and I never watched them again. I just saw them when I was watching videos...

The writing is so good. I said that I have not read the original work, but I am really attracted to Xiao Ben. The author depicts Xiao Ben as cute and simple with his own ideas and personality. I really like the story of the Lenovo Young Hacker chapter. It is super sweet to say, but the alien hero in the latter part did not give me as strong a feeling as the former. Maybe it is because the main character has grown up as the story progresses. I hope the author can write more sweet content about teenage hackers. Come on [Admiration] I support this book so much [Please update] It's so sweet, buddy.

It's very good-looking, and it's my favorite among the fanfics I've read. Xiaoban was originally my favorite character in my childhood. His personality and style of dealing with things are very interesting. After changing his gender, I have a different feeling. Now I'm very excited to see the growth of the protagonist and Xiaoban. Of course, the sweet love plot also made me fall deeply into it. I personally enjoyed reading it to have a green love with the big hero. This novel is getting better and better. I hope I hope the author can persevere, because there are not many novels that suit my taste, and I want to see a perfect ending. Of course, it does not mean that the author ignores the middle process and fast-forwards to marrying a wife and having children. I also want to see their young love getting better and better in the crises and challenges. I wish this novel has a good ending. In short, author, you cheer me up. I am still waiting for Mobai and Xiaoban to get married in their sweet love! ! !

The writing is really good, but it's a pity that I didn't watch many ben10, Golden Eagle cartoons, and children's channels when I was a kid. Just like Jackie Chan's Adventures, I opened it at any time and it was a different episode. It was never coherent. I opened it today and I was looking for a charm. I watched it tomorrow and I was playing Bo Gang [face covering] [face covering]

This book looks quite sweet. The author is also a student. If I can give it five stars, I'll try my best to give it five stars. After all, I am also a student. But he is very good-looking and deserves five stars.

It's embarrassing, it's embarrassing, please update it quickly, and I want to watch Mobai and the small class teaching and training! [Anger]

I haven't watched much yet, but it seems pretty good so far. If I have to say, what's the problem? The male protagonist is the classic slow type, and then there are some cliche plots (which are a bit boring if you watch too much). However, based on the male protagonist's mental age and the stereotype of the male class in his previous life, and their age now, there doesn't seem to be much of a problem. In short, it's not bad. I don't see anything toxic. I hope the author doesn't give up.

Ben10 is the best fan I've ever seen, and there's also Fan Nei. It's terrible in all kinds of Taiwanese pronunciation, very bushi. Although the setting of the female class is not acceptable, it's still very beautiful. I hope the author's writing will get better and better🥰

Don't tell me, this novel is really good. When Xiaoban was jealous for Xiaobai, my friends laughed so hard that my stomach ached, and Xiaobai's straight look also gave me a myocardial infarction. It's beautiful. Please update more. Don't stop updating.

The content is very interesting and sweet. I hope the author can continue to work hard and strive for a chapter of 10,000 words. Anything less will not be enough to read (I hope the author can be a production donkey) [smile][smile][smile]

NB, currently, this is the best book by Yang Persimmon. Most of the others are in a fighting style and don't have too much daily life. This one has daily fighting as well, and it fits the original book very well, making it more comfortable to read.

The author's writing is really good. I usually don't like to read this kind of novel about gender change, but the author attracted me. If the author wants to write a side story, it is best to open another book so that the layout will not be confusing. Write a second-generation, movie-watching type, and add the reaction of the original characters when they see the sex change class.

Okay, let me read it attentively without any interest in romance novels. Maybe part of it is because I am interested in the sexual transformation of small classes. But there is no doubt that the author's writing is good. I hate watching the plot and a sudden extra chapter, but I am happy to watch this extra chapter.

A very good work, the plot is okay, but the emotional line between the protagonist and Xiaoban is a bit difficult to stretch

Objectively speaking, I think it is very beautiful and worth watching. If you don't watch your life, you will lose insulin and you will not have the power of magnetic field. If you watch you, you will be like Hou Yi, shooting the sun from the corner of your mouth. (Note: This is a review from a reader who loves this book and cannot be used as a reference. It contains personal exaggerated descriptions. Please think deeply and rationally before reading. If you don't like it, change it. If you like it, remember to give it five stars.) ，， I want to raise it until it is fully evolved [laughing evilly]

I really like reading this book, but the author's update progress really makes me panic. There are some minor problems in the content. The jump is too large, which affects the viewing. There are also some extras added from time to time. Although it adds to the interest, to be honest, I don't like it very much. This book is really good. I hope the author can speed up the update. After all, it is a bit unreadable. Come on! I have read this book once using another account

It's very sweet. The author writes well in all aspects, but the most unfortunate thing is that there are not many female protagonists. I still prefer to watch Shura Field and solve various difficulties, or the protagonist of the knife. Anyway, I don't know why. I have been like this since playing MiHoYo. I especially like to see all kinds of knives. But, if there are no knives, I feel like something is missing. I am also nervous because of MiHoYo [laughing]

Well, it's very good and sweet. The author must stick to it, don't stop updating and must continue to update! By the way, is she the heroine of Sumita Koban? And what about Abedo's situation?

I've never seen this fanfic before. The tone is so restorative. It's so interesting to watch two humans and machines fall in love. I love it.

Ouch, I'm so pretty. The characters are very well drawn and vivid. Although some parts of the plot are very fast, the author wants all the young hackers to fully evolve. All the contents must be written out. It's very nice. When will the extra book be released? I kind of want to watch the extras and compete with other sub-bans from the multiverse for the lead role. [Sinister smile]

The author successfully led me on the road to sex transfer to a small class. Hey, I won't say anything more. The author will update soon, anxious, hungry [learned] [learned] [learned] [sending heartfelt wishes] It's good to read, I love to read it, keep coming more, it's so little, I want to drain the author dry [I learned it] [I learned it] [Send my heart]

It's beautiful. I didn't expect that my childhood idol would turn into a goddess. She's so cute. I want the cover.

Children, I read it in one sitting. As a small class novel, this type of novel is the best I have ever read. Come on, author and teacher.

Awesome, the explanation may be a bit straightforward and unattractive, but the content inside is really awesome. The character of Xiaoban, who dislikes Xiaoban, is reproduced very well in the short article. However, their transformation time is not the same as Ultraman. It only takes 3 minutes to transform and then disappear. This is a bit of a problem. I think the story of their transformation can be made longer.

The author is updating quickly. I can't read it enough. The author is cheering me up. [Love] [Love] [Upvote]. This book is the one that has touched my heart the most in a few months. Author, you are getting better and better [Like] [Like]. When I first saw the title of this book and the small number of words in the rating, I was dissuaded from it. Now I can read it, it is really great. Mobai and Xiaoban are so cute and sweet, and very logical [Like] [Like] [Like] The author is updating quickly. Two chapters a day is not enough. I want to read more. The author advises you that those who understand current affairs are heroes, otherwise I will... I will hurry up and show it to you [please update] Come on, the author wishes you better and better, I love you [send heart]

It looks better. Anyway, there will be content that everyone wants to read later. After all, Hatchet is still very good-looking, and it will be good if the author updates it.

Very good. This is the first Ben10 novel I have read. Overall, it is very good.

It must be rated five stars. This is the most beautiful book I have ever seen [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]