Dark Journey to the West: I Shine on the World, and My Merits Make Me a Saint

As a chicken god who calls himself a human every day, what is there to say about the human race? Can't they learn from the real dragon? True dragons never say that they are human, and they never prevent humans from recognizing true dragons.

It is indeed very well written. It can be regarded as a second creation and is very close to the original work. Journey to the West is a magic weapon greater than ability. It has a good cultural background. Come on, the author.

The subject matter is quite novel. I hope the author can describe some details in more detail, that is, describe your environment, then describe the people who were eaten, highlight more details, and then describe the image and characteristics of a character in detail. Now I feel that the ferocity of those monsters cannot be highlighted. Ruthless, the evil of the villain just feels like a narrative. Of course, there are no other trivial details and the story is okay. However, it always feels like there is a lack of emotional involvement. It makes people feel that this is a story. Pay more attention to details and focus on portraying outstanding features, but it can add some soul. Of course they are just thoughts and suggestions. As a book reviewer, I think he should have something, rather than just saying good, good, bad, bad, bad, bad

Comparing this to My Strange Resurrection after I Became a Buddha, I feel that the author still lacks some enthusiasm and the description of strangeness is a bit stiff, but I prefer this type of subject matter, and this book feels okay. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

Do you think he is good-looking? That's okay. Do you think he's not good-looking? There is also a lot of original text mixed in, which gives people a mottled and strange feeling, but the writing style is reasonable. I just hope that it can continue to improve. Come on.

It's nice to watch, but I feel like half-step saints like Taiyi Zhenren in the early stage, since they can't discover the tricks in their own stoves and the disappearance of the fire, it's a bit unreasonable that the protagonist did it. The protagonist is a golden fairy. If we really traveled there, I feel like the protagonist would have been discovered as soon as he did this, and his soul would be searched or killed.

If I say that the small world is just a dream, just a dream of him eating people and eating too many people, when his desire for human wealth shows up, he has been assimilated and goes against heaven. How can he go against heaven?

The author writes very well, highly recommended

In fact, it is a bit emotional. Even in the original work, cannibalism is not a big deal. The four disciples have eaten it. The star king in the sky has come down to earth and still eats people to make a living. , After all, the strong decide the weak everywhere.

A good dark journey to the west novel

Not bad, I will rate the new book first. Come on.

As mentioned above, I suggest the author make more patches. I read the comments first, and many said it would not work, but the author had comments to explain. Then I took a look, and the more I read, the better it looked. It was in line with my taste. There may be some shortcomings, but the flaws cannot be concealed. I would like to encourage the author [Note]

Good book, learn from the original work, become the original work, surpass the original work [shy][shy][shy] Strongly recommended to read it, five-star praise, five-star praise

It's obviously very good-looking, but why doesn't anyone come to see it and the score is still so low?

If you don't say more, it's over.

It's good to watch, but it's too Westward Journey style, and what I want to see is the protagonist strategizing (although he is indeed like this), but there are too many other things in part of Westward Journey, which makes it boring to watch. I just follow the progress of Westward Journey and write it, and the rest of it is also a bit boring. But actually it's okay

A very interesting Journey to the West novel, good luck to the author It's really beautiful. I find it funny no matter what I look at.

It looks good and the writing is good [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Quoting scriptures makes reading very comfortable The writing is very ancient, but the plot is very new. Come on, come on [shy]

It's very healthy, but the author advises you to take ten pictures a day [laughter]

Well. After reading the comments, I don't know what to say. .

It's all okay, but can you not copy all of the original Journey to the West?

It looks good, but I don't know why the rating is not high. The content is quite innovative and mixed with some sentences that are more like classical Chinese. It should be the original text [Chigua]

It's very beautiful. The protagonist is attentive and so on. Anyway, I love it.

It looks good, and it's thoughtful. It would be nice if it could be enhanced for Brother Monkey.

It looks good, but there are not many people watching it and no one is rating it.

The writing is very good. It is rare to see traditional Journey to the West themes. Good luck to the author.

Full of creativity and encouragement. Indeed, there are many flaws. Still four stars for encouragement.

It looks okay, it has that taste.

It feels like reading a classic