Waaah, Wife, You Have to Stand Up for Me!

So far, there are 49 book reviews with comments, which made the author feel uncomfortable and panicked, so I put it all together, hehe, oh, by the way, I emphasize again that this is the author's first time writing a novel, so some parts of the plot of the first chapter may be a little unreasonable compared to the subsequent chapters, so although the first chapter is not clear-cut, I will slowly change it later. , No need to ask more, although I know there are still some people who express incomprehension and regret about the plot I wrote, but I can't help it, because this is the author's own idea, which is the type of plot development that I personally like. Even the character of the protagonist is written according to the author's own preferences. I can't satisfy everyone's appetite, so forgive me.

The writing is quite good and sweet. Occasionally, some small details are not written well, which is acceptable, but too few people read it. I feel like I could revise the introduction. The description in the introduction is too bland, but the actual writing is not bland. [Think]

Hello, I am the father of a child who was diagnosed with severe depression the day before yesterday. I just learned that after reading this book for a long time and reading it many times, his symptoms improved a lot at first. I was really happy. Until one day he suddenly picked up a knife and wanted to commit suicide. After my constant dissuasion and questioning, I found out that the child was here to alleviate his condition every day. Reading for a long time also made him feel that he had hope and pursuit again. I said isn't this great? Why did you take the knife today? The child told me that the author only updated a few chapters every day, and I couldn't accept it. I couldn't bear it. From loss to sunshine, there were only a few minutes a day before returning to the invisible darkness again. After listening to the child's words, I fell into deep thought. I am posting this today just to ask the author to save my child. I am afraid that I will commit suicide again if I fail to watch him that day. I don't need to bother you too much. Just update dozens or hundreds of chapters a day. I know you're working too hard and I won't mention it. I will always look at you 👀 When you are walking alone in the silent night 👀 Feeling the cold eyes from behind you make you sweat 👀 When you turn around but nothing comes 👀 That's me looking at you 👀 I will always look at you 👀 I don't know how to do anything with my eyes, I just like to stare at you silently 👀 I will rape you 👀 Watch and rape you endlessly 👀 I have my eyes on you until the update. [Sinister smile]

Knife, hey hey, I want a knife, why don't I have a knife? Knife, hey, hey hey, delicious knife, hey hey hey, knife, I want it!

I can only say that the writing is very good. The more I read at the beginning, the more I read it. However, at the end, I have been writing about following the travelers, so I have no interest in reading it. This is because Fufu came to read it. It is not good to write about travelers all the time (in my opinion). Although Fontaine will be written before Chapter 210, the update is very slow. Can the author be faster? Also, in the ending of the first article, why didn't you write about how Fukalos faced Fou after that? Or maybe it's because I didn't write about some things after Ye Han's death, and I feel it would be better if I wrote it. But overall this novel is very good, especially at the front, but I personally don't like the latter part, so I didn't read it. Again, I hope the author will update the plot of Fontaine as soon as possible. I want to see the interaction between Ye Han and Shuangfu @riskLoveHF Who can imagine how uncomfortable it would be for a person who likes to be involved in reading novels when he sees the ending of the Fontaine chapter. Although it is a knife, he also likes to be involved [crying]

The writing is pretty good, but there is one flaw. According to the author's writing, 90% of the time, Sister Huangdou will not be the heroine. It will feel very strange. After the previous foreshadowing, I will feel like a scumbag. Although I am not a Huangdou chef, I am a Fu chef, but it feels a bit strange. It's strange that it's not very good. It would be okay if there wasn't much plot about her, but the plot is also about her. I can only say that this is the only bad thing. I'll see if the author will write it in the end and accept it. But generally speaking, the plot is good, not to mention that there is no knife [smile] [laugh]

What should I say? Before the protagonist came back for the second time, I liked this book very much. It was very sweet and a little bit sharp. However, the fly in the ointment is that Ye Han lost most of his system after his second rebirth and retained the most basic talents. The plot about Fufu was much less. When I was looking for a book, I read it because Fufu was the heroine and sweet. But halfway through, I found that the plot revolves around the travelers. This made me lose my desire to read. I hope the author can write and get to Fontaine as soon as possible. But overall, this book is still very good. It would be better if you sit down and follow the new frequency at a higher point @riskLoveHF

It's pretty good. Although there are always typos and I can't tell him from her, the author is active in the comment area to listen to readers' opinions. He is not annoyed when he sees criticism and will correct it instead. However, the pace does feel a bit slow, maybe because I don't watch many slow-paced movies.

It's a pretty good book, but why doesn't anyone read it? [What] Author, why do you feel like you have lung fog? [Roll eyes][roll eyes] Please give me more updates quickly, I want to watch Fu Fu! ! [Crazy][crazy] I hope you can stick to it until the end, come on! [Sending Hearts]

The author is very good at writing. It is obvious that the writing style has improved. It ranks first among the Funina novels that I like to read. I hope that more and more people will read the author's works. Although it may not be popular now, I believe that the author will definitely be able to do so in the future [Sending Hearts] Dear author, please don't run away. Because of my recent poor grades, I'm afraid I won't be able to continue reading your novels in a short time. [Sending Hearts] (Because of performance issues, there are still more than seventy chapters)