Proving Eternity in the Age of Spiritual Qi

The content of the article is worth reading, and new authors deserve encouragement. Let's talk about the advantages first. The author has a good imagination, many clever and novel settings, and rich descriptions of monster images. There are no obvious points of inconsistency in the storyline. There are also shortcomings. The first three chapters of the novel are too peaceful and do not immediately capture the reader's heart. Although the later content is good, it greatly affects the performance. After talking about the advantages and disadvantages, let's talk about the author. The writing has improved very quickly, and there is obvious improvement in the before and after comparison. This is good. All you need now is persistence. Keep writing and keep growing. Rich imagination and delicate writing will help you succeed. Come on! In addition, the image of the protagonist created is very positive, which is worthy of praise.

Enjoy a passage that I think is the best in this book! An old ape walked out of the woods on the side of the road. His hair was as white as silk, his eyes were as green as jade, he had a bee-like waist, long arms, and a slender body. He held a python skin balalaika in his hand. He played and sang in the accent of the ancient shaman tribe: "The evil god appears, all the souls cry, and all living beings are trapped in death. Thirteen evil ghosts have no trace of human beings, and it is difficult to be an enemy for evil. The fear of ghosts takes advantage of the emptiness to invade the sea, and we can work together to get out of trouble. After ten thousand years of self-imprisonment, I have exhausted my magic power and sacrificed my life to win the dragon flag." They died together without breathing, and the two gods wiped out the laws of heaven with their death. They worked together to transform the heaven and earth, and they were taught by heaven." The storytelling and singing method is full of ancient meanings.