I Prove Eternity in the Age of Reiki

The content of the article is worth reading, and new authors deserve encouragement. Let's talk about the advantages first. The author has a good imagination, many clever and novel settings, and rich descriptions of monster images. There are no obvious points of inconsistency in the storyline. There are also shortcomings. The first three chapters of the novel are too peaceful and do not immediately capture the reader's heart. Although the later content is good, it greatly affects the performance. After talking about the advantages and disadvantages, let's talk about the author. The writing has improved very quickly, and there is obvious improvement in the comparison before and after. This is good. All you need now is persistence. Keep writing and keep growing. Rich imagination and delicate writing will help you succeed. Come on! In addition, the image of the protagonist created is very positive, which is worthy of praise.

Enjoy a passage that I think is the best in this book! An old ape walked out of the woods on the side of the road. His hair was as white as silk, his eyes were as green as jade, he had a bee-like waist, long arms, and a slender body. He was holding a python skin balalaika, and he was playing and singing in the accent of the ancient shaman tribe: "The evil god appears, all souls weep, and all sentient beings are trapped in a state of death. Thirteen evil ghosts have no trace of human presence, and it is difficult to be an enemy for their evil deeds. The fear of ghosts taking advantage of the situation and invading the sea area can only be counteracted by Gonggong's escape from difficulties. I have been imprisoned for ten thousand years, exhausted my magic power, and sacrificed my life to win the dragon flag. They died together without breath, and those two gods wiped out the will of heaven with their death. Gonggongfazu transforms heaven and earth, and Hou receives the destiny to teach. " The storytelling and singing method is full of ancient meaning.