My Ability Is Drawing Cards, and the Price Is Your Lives

The writing is concise, the characters are well created, the world view is complete, and the protagonist's plot is appropriate. As for some suggestions for the following article, I hope there will be no extraordinary system that is independently developed except for the protagonist. There can be geniuses who have their own special super powers, and villains who have the degenerate evil ways of evil gods. The protagonist's extraordinary holy light and sword energy are given by the system, a mature system that has been developed in other worlds for countless years. If the outside world can develop something close to it immediately after the extraordinary first arrival, I can only say that it is awesome.

Overall, it's pretty good But there is a problem, that is, in terms of spiritual practice. As the protagonist is currently the first person in spiritual practice, he hopes that he will not be surpassed by those who possess ancient books. If possible, I hope it will be a situation where one super player has many powers. Or say: If you don't practice cultivation, you will see me like a frog in a well looking at the moon in the sky. If you practice cultivation, you will see me like a mayfly in the sky

Although I haven't finished reading it yet, I still like it personally and give it a five-star rating (I haven't given a five-star rating for a long time, or even a flat star for a long time. If I wasn't really afraid that the book would disappear, I wouldn't give it a rating, otherwise, I would be afraid of being scolded for giving it a five-star rating)

The hollowness of zzz has been moved to modern cities, and various settings from games and animations have been added. It is relatively novel, but it is too sparse and not enough to watch.

Ah! ! ! ! ! ! , Damn it, ah,,, I was trying to look at it and realized it was gone. When I looked at it, the update has been off for three days. Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo…

I hope others in the novel aren't so quick to create extraordinary paths. Why should the protagonist's secret be revealed? If someone hypnotizes the heroine, it won't explode. Moreover, it is undoubtedly a poisonous point to distribute the abilities without strengthening the protagonist himself.

@ Wings Are you sure that the animalization of your sister that you want to write about is a raccoon with a sinister eyebrow and a rat-like eye, not a red panda?

Not bad, good, come on

A classic book within a classic, with a somewhat novel setting. Those who don't have a book can read it.

Fantasy and science fiction go hand in hand, games and life are combined, it's great to have a goal similar to fulfilling one's destiny.