After I Refused the Last-Minute Dowry Increase on My Wedding Day

It looks good, and the emotional descriptions are good and delicate, but the business writing is not good. Opening an Internet cafe, milk tea shop, and electric car shop makes no money, but still makes money from copying songs. The writing of friendship is not very good, too humble, giving money to people when meeting, and it feels like everyone has to make good relationships. But the relationship writing is good, I suggest you write more, don't waste time doing shit that doesn't make any money at all, use this time to go home and connect with your girlfriends more emotionally. Barely five stars, mainly encouraging

The writing is smooth, the narrative level of the story is relatively clear, and there are no obvious loopholes. It's not too far away from reality, and I feel very immersive when reading it. I hope the author will continue to work hard and not be too shady. My only hope is to write more and not end it badly. I will wait for you at the finale!

I have finished reading, the quality is high, it is worth revisiting after a while, some impressions: *No system, with its own golden finger - physical and mental (overclocking) control *I didn't sing or star in person. My main occupation is director and entrepreneur. *Treat employees very well, but value for money, have a sense of conscience, and no sense of bloodshed or injustice. *There was no sense of planning in the early stage, and I only realized my information advantage (entertainment + investment) after patting my head. *In the early stage, Chen Xiaolin's plot was too warm for the man, but the woman didn't use much affection, so it didn't feel worth it. *I would rather see the identity of the author of the earlier online article discovered by the public, but I didn't write about it. *I was punished twice by the Y Dog Yamen@men. I handled it maturely and realistically, but it was quite frustrating and aggrieved, but it was not extraordinary, so I could only do small counterattacks. *The writing is not boring, with frequent golden sentences, full of wit and sparkling wisdom. *Full marks for worldly sophistication, make more friends and fewer enemies (Double M/Huayi/Investment Bank, etc.) *China Entertainment's traditional villain, Lu. *Pay social security to millions of riders as a talisman *Reasonable, have a way out, self-destruction, don't shy away from flies. I'm just a dog, I don't blindly embarrass myself. *A Chinese, Japanese and Korean female partner who is over 30 years old only got the big Y horse (just one) in the late stage, and then no Shura scene happened, which is in line with the realistic logic of the status of a big boss. *Transformed Yang AB to make his clerk OL *Look at bad artists objectively *There is no major adjustment to the cast configuration of film and television works *The script was stolen in Korea, and it took 30 chapters to process, slightly d. *In China, we don't get too involved in other people's affairs, such as stabbing people, but in Korea, it's different. People who don't have a close relationship are introduced to each other for help, and there is a sense of holy *guards and moral kidnapping. *In the early stage, people from the United States, Japan and South Korea all used Qingdao dialect {spoken habit: live in xx}, and there was a great improvement in the middle and later stages. *The text is interspersed with the hot topics of the time, and there are many rare illustrations at the end of the chapter. *There are several inconsistencies, such as the time to obtain the Qingdao ambassador/Liu yf's pose unlocking progress/the time when the protagonist's father had an accident/the shares sold by the initial girl group, but they are innocuous. *The extraordinary part is placed at the end. There is no exaggeration or puppet feeling. There are barriers to entry and a sense of security after death. It is relatively easy to accept.

If you say five stars, give it five stars! Just eat when you have to, don't worry and don't be pretentious!! The characterization is pretty good! It's just that the characteristics are not obvious. You can design more inner emotions for the heroines to highlight their respective character traits! The plot development is fresh and smooth, without any old routines! It's so easy to watch!! Okay, that's all for now, let's continue reading!! I hope that the author will continue his efforts, become bigger and stronger, and create greater glories [smile]

The writing is pretty good, although it's a little bit toxic, but the author listened to his advice 👍

Not bad, not sloppy at all, very straightforward Very good, very to my liking

This book is quite good-looking. I personally feel that the character of the protagonist is quite good. When things go wrong, I won't suffer a loss or feel uncomfortable. The only bad thing I feel is that from the beginning to now, the protagonist's mother always feels a bit philistine and patriarchal. For the protagonist's sister, I feel uncomfortable when I see the character of the protagonist's mother and the fragments it contains. Although not every character is perfect, this one still makes me feel uncomfortable.

The author writes well, I like it very much! Hope to keep up the good work!

This book is very well written, especially there are many movie introductions in the later period. They are all real and exactly as the author commented. They are worth watching. Moreover, the content and events in it are all in line with the actual years and exist. This story is really well told.

The author arranges the story very well, and sometimes it is far-fetched but it does not affect the dream.